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Gawd I love this one its one doujin that keep gettin more and fucked up as it goes i want some fucking cock and some hot ass at the same time XD
Could you happen to acquire the train episode?
Its from the manga: Tsf Monogatari
back again lol
Lol… Weirdest doujin ever.
This isn’t a one-shot, this continues for quite a bit.
I wish i could suck a cock like that <3
@silver me too !
God I cant stop coming back to this doujin
It was fine until he choked her. Then I started laughing and almost couldn’t “finish”. Oh and I agree with magpie.. I wanted her to die. >_>!!!
They should get together to break up gang bangs and be happy
well good for u mister. Do you want a cookie or another condom? (safe sex is the best sex lol)
Ok I just happened to see this doujin I haven’t read it an I’m not going to but I had to comment Idk how all u dumb ass find this a turn on its just fucked up and any guy who reads this and finds it as a turn on is a fucking disgrace to all men and need to have mental treatment and thrown in a mental hospital for life. Fucking faggots. Gtfu and act like a real man i bet half of u guys have never even had sex pitiful I’m 21 years old and i have already had sex an have had sex plenty of times my girl friend and i have Ben together for 5 years so umm all u guys who find this as a turn on need to go find a damn girl friend an get fucking laid.
can u put up the other two aswell?
that would be great
thx for everything keep up the good work
It hurts when the hymen gets tornand doesnt feel good…
Also, don’t try and say I shit on this Doujin. Despite my numerous complaints I still gave it a 4 out of 5, that’s a good score. Besides, the author shit on it enough as it is. No, see there I go again, I just can’t help myself.
My complaints are not, and never have been, with the content of any doujin, only the presentation of its material. It’s a fantasy I get that, however perversely you look at it the author, for this part, didn’t make the characters likeable. Not one of them acts like a normal person and it made me loose interest because while I’m reading I don’t like the main character and I don’t like the side characters. So when he tries to introduce drama I simply don’t care. Maybe it’s personal taste but I like it when the stories are about PEOPLE not strange beings that have no common sense. And thus, I make fun of them, because it’s the only way to justify the ten, give or take, minutes I wasted reading it.
Sounds interesting, I’ll the peruse internet for the other chapters as soon as I get drunk enough.
I’m not sure how well a novel commenting on freaky sex would sell, but they probably said the same for Lolita so who knows?
Yes, women’s orgasms are better than you. Hahaha.
I actually wonder if women’s orgasms are better than me…
It was almost a complete turn off when Ryou was choking Takumi while raping her (He is now a her so I don’t give a shit about your complaints.) and just letting live was pretty damn unrealistic, but doujins aren’t suppose to be completely realistic because most of them are just made up and nobody really gives a shit because they’re probably too busy jerking off to some horrible doujin like this.
I don’t believe that this was the worst doujin I’ve ever read because it had some good parts and wasn’t completely a load of shit like most doujins out there.
If you look at it from a perverse point of view it doesn’t seem as bad as you would think. I am probably one of the most perverse so I know how you could say it made you feel uncontent.
oh hi persons. Im just here to say that ther is alredy chpaters 2 and 3 of this out there in the internet ocean. I must say i agree with Hodgeodge’s review, HOWEVER seeing the next chapters i must say im quite impressed where ShindoL took this doujin. It is a mix between two other doujins of his. One ith gender bender that i cant remember the name, and another one with a perverted exhibiotionist girl, Sarashi Ai.
SO, if you hated this one, the next ones might surprise you. If yu’re disgusted by this,dont ee the other ones, esecally the third.
YES, it is phisically impossible to “change bodies” like that, and why didnt any of is asshole friends( as Hodge Podge said) warne dthe media? they’d win shit loads of money!
If you alredy read the other two, tell me
THE ENDNG IS FUCKING PREDICTABLE OR NOT?!
My best wishes to you all friends, and i hope you liked me bitching about this manga.^_^
That was really good
if you’re looking for wrong/disturbibg, try searching for “Maichan’s daily life” lol that one kept me from reading hentai for a whole month lol.
I’ve seen some longe reviews before but yours ttakes the cake. Maybe you should write a novel or something? :) btw, I totally agree with omg hodgepodge xD
Lol i know god of porn reviews is a bit too much but to be honest i have only come across very few and very horrible reviews that just hurt my eyes as much as the doujin did. And to be completely honest when i saw your long comment i thought “Oh well i have nothing better to do but waste more life reading some losers critique on a fucking doujin of all things” But because you wen way past my expectations, higher than a man on heroine and weed, i just feel very much compelled to give you that title (however “honorable” that might be in society’s views) and if they are in this site then ill try to find them but you should totally hit me up on yahoo or something… im just afraid of posting my email here… i dont want spam…
Well, yummycookie, I do have a lot of “spear” time, which sounds awesome no offense intended, so I think I’ll adress these comments aimed at me.
Thanks. I am indeed a male, but have mixed feelings about being a god of porn reviews, oh well. As for sending you my previous reviews, that’d be tough considering they’re scattered around this website and I’d have to look them up. Plus, a few of them were lost when Doujinland dropped its loli and shotacon sections. Which is a shame because a couple of my favorites were in there. One was a psychicatric look into the appeal of corruption of innocence and longing for younger, more simpler times by the fans of such things. the other was a horrific description of a mother who slept with her eight year old son, in which the mother had such huge breasts and untold amounts of baby fat that you could lose a car in and the child had atleast a thirteen inch penis. If words could describe the fear of suffication I had for that little boy and unending nightmares I experienced after reading it, it was in that review.
I know right?
Yes, exactly. Also, to further put into perspective just how awful his friends were, remember what he was in the hospital for? CANCER! The kid had fucking cancer, he was on his death bed, and not one of those motherfuckers even cared! “Oh you had terminal cancer? That’s cool. Can I touch your boobies?” Haha, what a pack of pricks.
I agree with you on alot/most of your points, if not all. This was a good manga nonethe less in the begining, but began to spiral towards the middle and the end. Alot of the gender switch from guy to girl doujins I’ve read are like that.
Other than that, Takumi was hot as a girl though, but I wouldnot want to be feeling him up and fuck him and take advantage of his new girl body if I was his friend. I think I’d try to help him get changed back to a guy by insighting the pharmacutical company that made the drug make another one to turn him back, and keep him the fuck away from those bastards that wanna just do him.
And yeah, so he is a girl now, but knowing him as a guy for 16 or 17 years would help to remind me that that is a guy friend that needs help while going through alot of confusion and changes.
Yeah, keep having fun. 2d and 3d, yeah. Cause I’m turning japanese.
I hear you serpent
holy shit i never seen anyone write a review about a doujin lol thats shit ud expect to see on amazon or something
um NO… this is the first time i’ve felt just wrong. and i have read some “interesting” crap in my day, but some how this doujin just made me feel uncomfortable.
o.o omg someone took there time to writte a review god that only shows u got a lot of spear time
lol that was one of the best reviews ive ever read. (mainly because i love your sarcasm and humor) but truely that was pure critique genius!!! i feel at the presence of a god (at least i think your male, i believe you made that subtly clear in your critique) but you must have something of which i may read all your previous reviews… you must email me or something, all the previous reviews because that was amazing!!
I have considered it. But I mainly do this as a joke/hobby. So creating and managing an entire website would probably bring me undue stress, ending in me calling all who visit something vaguely vulgar or morally incomprehensible, changing all the background images to pictures of Bobby Fischer, and then leaving for months on end until morbid curiosity drew me back to see what became of my creation. Then the cycle would start all over again.
But I hope you atleast enjoyed my review that I have made for educational/entertainment/party hardy purposes.
Why, thank you HodgePodge2028. You tried to bring logic into a hentai.
Maybe you should start a review site of the Hentai and Doujins out there.
I actually enjoy stories with a bit of role reversal like this. It’s especially interesting to see the author flounder his way through his own personal anima fantasy where he tries to imagine how his life would be as a girl. I can’t quite put my finger on it, but I feel this one was really unsatisfying, which is weird because it held my attention all the way through. Oh well, I’m sure I’ll work it out in this review.
First off, I’m willing to set a side my disbelief to go with the idea that some new drug cured a kids cancer by turning him into a girl. However out there that is, it is the main hook of the story so if I don’t let it be I wouldn’t get anything from this book. However, I’d think this “pharmaceutical” company would throw the kid a bone and maybe instead of just keeping the media off him, give him an alias and a place to live in another town for awhile while they try to figure out what the fuck happened. I know the drug saved his life, but if said drug also changed his physiology, they might want to look into a way to reverse it, instead of just watching over the kid to see how this change has affected his life. Oh our drug may have forever changed your life, possibly making you the laughing stock of everyone you know… HEY CAN WE WATCH!? What a Pharmacy of assholes.
Which leads to my next point, his new altered life. If put in the same situation, I really don’t think I’d let my friedns grope me because they’re pathetic, desperate, assholes. That shit ain’t right. Also, why the hell doesn’t the teacher step in to put a stop to it? Another student has to? I don’t think feel up the girl/guy because you were buds with him is an opproved extra curricular activity in any school system. Sheesh, and I thought my public high school was bad, I guess it could have been worse.
Thirdly, fashion. I don’t think as a newly drug endused woman I’d really be comfortable with my girl friends dressing me up in womens clothing. Besides some hormonal changes, I seriously doubt my taste in clothing would change that much. And yes, I know it’s just an obviosu set up for a lesbian scenario in the next part of this thing, but still. The author’s just endulging himself at this point.
So once again we come to an swkward scene where the guys asshole friends try to rape him in public. With friends like this, who needs enemies? Notice also that at the beginning his friends showed no sympathy for the kid at all, they went straight to asking about copping a feel. True friends here! Hey, everybody! Come look at the true friends! Yeah–no. So Ryou hadokens his way through them, pulling his childhood friend out of the “dicks without selfcontrol convention”. He takes him home where we learn he feels betrayed by the new way his good friend is acting. That such a indignant whore, who allows themself to be taken advantage of and doesn’t lift a finger in retort, could be his former friend with whom he grew up. So hurt and confused is he, that in a fit of rage he begins to rape the main character! This could have been an emotional moment, especially with the panel before hand expressing the look of dread on the main characters face as he thinks to himself, “Men are strong, men are scary.” However this shoulda been horrifying moment is punctuated by the authors idiotic thoughts of a rape victim. Instead of feeling good when he knows it shouldn’t and becoming even more afraid, he feels good when he knows it shouldn’t and likes it even more! Yeah, because that’s why all those rape victims aren’t at all traumatized by such a thing– oh wait.
Also, before I go on, I’d like to junxtapose this review with an older one I did for a second. In that one a virgin had sex for the first time and there was no blood. I pointed this out and got a know-it-all reply saying that her hymen could have been punctured any number of ways! Like “strenuous activity” such as sports or stretching. I hadn’t considered it and I wasn’t about to get into it over something so stupid, so I concieded the point. However, this comic, has no excuse! We see it happen right there on the page and there’s still no blood. That’s just something I find annoying.
Now then, where was I? Oh yes, so the rape finally ends and I think I get a hint of where the author’s trying to take the story. That maybe the main character will start to garnish feelings for this “Ryou”, childhood friend and vigilant protector, but after this Ryou won’t care what happens to hsi former friend because he no longer cares or believes him to be the same person. Thus conflict and foreshadowing are established once the “To be continued appears at the end…. Buuuuut, all that goes down the drain in the last few panels where the main character STILL does not but his foot down to his friends, the teacher STILL does not step in to do stop anything, and then the main character looks over at the uncaring Ryou and says he’ll consider sleeping with his other asshole friends who are pathetic and have no self control.
This comic really dropped the ball for me, it seemed like it could have been interesting, but then it cuts its own legs out from under it and flops around making you watch it’s feeble twitching and spastic cries of pain and misery. The only part I really enjoyed was the fact that the main character noticed all his friends were bigger than him, I this was a very meta joke on the authors part about his own probable insecurities. It was just really unsatisfying. I think the only doujin that sets up a lengthy story I’ve ever read that had a satifying ending was one where it had so many twists and turns that the end couldn’t not be one gigantic punch line, it was, and it was glorious. This was not glorious, it was some guys fantasy and that’s all it will ever be.
The art was good atleast, although some things looked a bit odd. (See the blow job page were the main characters lips seem to be deforming like silly puddy over the guys dick.)
Had no complaints about the translation.
So, it looked good, held my interest, but failed to finish strong. I give it 4 unrealistic rape scenes out of 5. But that’s not a happy four, it’s a very discontented frowny four that excesivly points out that it’s not a perfect five.
I loved the gender bending plot. Would love to see more of it.
But with less choking. That was kind of a buzz kill. :/
its ok as long as guys under stand lol
And rapist and lower wages and sexist and way more peer pressure and periods… Jesus why are men the dominate sex? Woman can bleed for a week and still live! And they have to push something the size of a basketball out of them. That instantly makes any man inferior. Men shouldn’t even be allowed to complain. Damn we have it made. Sorry ladies.
Then u would have to go through giving birth unfortunately lol
sometimes i wish i could be a girl
It’s cool Magpie
That was fucked up. I liked it.
this is a bad gender bender doujin. 3/5 :(
the most humiliating doujin to me(sincerely sorry admin) i mean if those guys knew he was a guy then they wouldnt have fucked her but FUCK!!THEY DID!!!!man this is the weirdest thing those guys arent humiliated for fucking a guy
i didn’t like it usually gender bender is less known to the public and it has more feeling but these guys knew she was a guy before but they are just sex crazed if it was just the friend it would have been better
This…. Is… Awesome… The story is long but not too long! perfect! The only things that could make this better is incest and him not trying to kill her…. and maybe lolicon…
@Shadow Sorry, I just thought it’d make for a better ending. > u <
Now that’s fucked up! Magpie
I was kinda hoping he’d kill him/her in the end…. > , >’
rape AND gender bender? i think ill pass
Loved this one.
Waiting for chapter two.
Loved the story.
Woot teh fcuk? this is just TO…. boring.. i was like ‘up’ then ‘down’ …. then ryou said,”stoop toouching man fcukig breast!!”… Woooottt!!!??? sorry admin this is just too much I can’t read something like this… right ‘biteme..’?? INCEST INCEST …..
man..i quit..damn..i cxant read sumthing like this..gender bender..i like incest better..
it didnt give me a hard on .. :)
I usually gender bender, but this one was annoying and mostly killed the buzz. Ryou’s constant litany of “filthy whore slut you’re not my friend blah blahblah” plus the choking just killed it.
HELL!!!!!THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I READ THESE TYPES AND ITS FUCKING HUMILIATING TO READ!!!!!!!!!!but if only the story about the guy turned to girl would be cut out and only a girl who is naive then its more amusing to readers
i knew the best friend was gonna end up fucking him predictable
well atleast it wasnt a dick girl. by the way the ones hating this where the ones who really enjoyed it. ps my friend once said if i was a girl id b the biggest whore in school xD
WOW this was kinda fun to read. i am 100% percent serious wen i say, i wanna read a manga on this! O: this story is fantastic! :D lol the sex? EH it was ok i guess…. but i wonder if its really possible to scientificly become female like that? like the bodies JUST LIKE that? O: hmm
Oh Rabbit On Xtasy… <_ <
And… Seriously I really love this doujin… except the stroking part….
i love gender benders and futa this story is great love it. hope there will be a futa book in the near future.
at all the brainless bitches who read this doujin and then complained that they didnt like the theme. dumbshits if you dont like it dont read it! itsnot that hard too figure out?
i liked this, would like to see the next one up asap. no disrespect meant by that, just excited for the continuation of this.
On second thought, it’s too difficult to edit without leaving huge, gaping holes in the story
Anyone could edit the text, cut the first three pages out, and just make it so she’s a popular girl who likes her boobs squeezed
the whole theme of gender bending killed it for me. would be a fine doujin without that theme, just if it was a girl. but that’s my opinion
LOLZ!!! (WTF) XD
I just loooove doujins like this ! Wonderful thank you so much admin !
i dont like stories like this but w/e i read it so i cant un-read it now….
I hate gender bender and the like just dumb
MORE GENDER BENDER! =D
weird but nice…
ssss eyes rolling nice……….
bay the way…… FIRST