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1. Decobius on July 26th, 2008 6:02 pm

   1st, more loli plz

2. Cloud on July 26th, 2008 6:24 pm

   Was so tempted to say first.. or second, but I read Doujins before I comment…

   alright the story was pretty good, more of just a fantasy story brother - sister kinda of stuff, but it still made me read on.

   The art tho I wasn’t so excited by, literally. The faces are decent but the everything else is poorly drawn I think, and some things kinda blend into the background… hate that, it wasn’t the worst just kinda killed some of the mood here.

   One thing here to mention was the translation.. this didn’t have a good translation, many times did I think, that isn’t proper English, witch i thought for the most party killed the mood the most.
   -Come on, Doujins have to have good translations.

   all around, I was semi-disappointed just because I ran into many translation errors and poor art. Tho the censors weren’t bad, it really doesn’t give this a plus.
   Score:

   2.5/5

3. Ruyk on July 26th, 2008 6:29 pm

   umm 2nd …

4. Azuri on July 26th, 2008 7:25 pm

   3rd or 4th?

5. 5th on July 26th, 2008 9:34 pm

   maybe?

6. what? on July 26th, 2008 10:37 pm

   Is this part of a larger series because the page numbers start at 130? Is it called grind?

7. what? on July 26th, 2008 10:54 pm

   wait sorry reading one and downloading another at the same time, going to a different area to comment, sorry. But is there another part, it does start a little weird, or is there another end part?

8. first on July 27th, 2008 12:18 am

   first..

9. end.less on July 27th, 2008 12:32 am

   ….

10. what? on July 27th, 2008 12:46 am

    a little late for first…but this hentai still starts on pg 125

11. Solipsis on July 27th, 2008 2:54 am

    I’ve had enough with imoutos

12. Frostbyte on July 27th, 2008 3:52 am

    This is the type of story i love but i think it was kinda rushed into the story. I would also of liked the art to be a bit more clear and bold.

    -The doujin should of been longer so that the sex and all that kinda does not happen so fast and it is a more of a “surprising” way it comes in.

    -Art should be clearer and bolder.

    Worth a read tho but i think it should be a

    47% Score

    (I never really found many English mistakes but since i am Dyslexic i must not notice it)

13. fuegonao on July 27th, 2008 4:10 am

    That’s pretty funny, asking for a better translation while spelling “which” and other words wrong and everything.

14. A Guy Who Blows Up Crap on July 27th, 2008 5:11 am

    Um… I wish I can give this story a much higher score… but the translation just threw me off… I don’t feel the energy, you get me?

    3.5/10

15. LOL on July 27th, 2008 9:30 am

    there are lots of wanna be clouds :D

16. Pala on July 27th, 2008 10:31 am

    hey admin the gallery for “cheer up for love” is down

17. PervySage on July 27th, 2008 11:39 am

    First things first. The art wasn’t that well drawn but I guess it was okay. It had a nice story but, sad to say, the grammar was terrible. Personally, it was more of rape than incest to me. For me, incest is where both siblings have consent of the act. Since the guy was talking about violating his sister and what not. The incest part only came AFTER she was raped. Well, that’s my opinion.

    MORE LOLIS! XD

18. anon on July 27th, 2008 4:32 pm

    About it starting on page 125 or 130 (didn’t check that myself), these stories are published in books with a lot of other stories so it starting on page 125-130 just means there has been maybe 4 to 6 other short stories before this one

19. retard with a horrible small dick on July 27th, 2008 7:49 pm

    Twentieth!

20. person on July 27th, 2008 10:32 pm

    hey im just askin can u make more anime with naruto and sakura?? just askin

21. some guy on July 27th, 2008 10:55 pm

    hey admin some stuff is more than 1 catagory like loli and incest. you should label both

22. BarryWhite on July 28th, 2008 1:52 am

    i agree witht he last comment

23. kagemon. on July 28th, 2008 2:20 am

    More incest admin.

    Please.

24. Frostbyte on July 28th, 2008 2:05 pm

    What i would like to see is a new book a nice longish great art work clear book.

25. mfoxdogg on July 29th, 2008 12:29 am

    hey admin, did you lose your host? as this site was redirected for a few days

26. T5J8F8 on July 29th, 2008 3:30 am

    I kinda liked it. The guy was alright the have there and the girl was cute, but these stories make me wonder how I should feel about the proceedings, especially given her pose and tears there at the end. Major killing point was translation, though. I mean, I can patch it up in my head, but that disrupts flow (with that “don’t let it leak out”/”don’t leak it out” bit being rather off the seemingly intended mark).

    ?/pi, ’cause the only things I really rate are which songs on mah iTunes I want to here more (or simply think they’re great).

27. lolilover on July 31st, 2008 3:53 am

    MORE LOLI!!!!!!:)

28. what? on July 31st, 2008 11:49 pm

    thanks anon for clarifying

29. KillaVanilla on August 27th, 2008 4:12 am

    All incest is friekin awesome. so therefore, i rate this a gabillion and 5 out of 10. and every other incest comic you have that’s actually incest and not just some lame step-family thing.

30. Renesme123 on December 26th, 2008 4:02 pm

    I agree with Cloud but there are some of out there that don’t read them(I’m not one of them)a doujins a doujin hentai or other anyway the blending in probably turns some on idk just puting it out there

31. sweet susy on March 15th, 2009 1:59 pm

    how seet =P

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