Hughug

1. first on June 7th, 2009 9:20 am

   yay first!

2. second on June 7th, 2009 9:21 am

   second yay ^^

3. Second on June 7th, 2009 9:24 am

   HAHA, irgendwann werde ich der erste sein anstelle des ersten.

4. Frostbyte on June 7th, 2009 9:25 am

   Too slow, got this from saha back in the 5th.

5. Alan Rickman on June 7th, 2009 9:47 am

   wat

6. nice on June 7th, 2009 10:03 am

   nice

7. a-grr on June 7th, 2009 10:20 am

   Wasn’t a fan of the art, but the story played out fantastically.

8. kaho on June 7th, 2009 10:23 am

   8th yeah!!!.. i don’t care if u angry with me!! ahahahahahaha

9. Test on June 7th, 2009 12:37 pm

   Yes!! Finally upload download link back online thanks admin

10. Butts on June 7th, 2009 1:49 pm

    WOW. That was actually really hot.

11. leon on June 7th, 2009 2:24 pm

    @ Random Coment(Last doujin)
    I don’t use THAT e-mail,it’s for public things like this

12. poop on June 7th, 2009 2:27 pm

    12th

13. cat is fine too on June 7th, 2009 6:10 pm

    SO MOE I’M GONNA DIE

14. Butts on June 7th, 2009 6:11 pm

    By the way, the admin specifically asked for people to stop posting numbers after 1st.

15. faise on June 7th, 2009 8:35 pm

    faise pervysage and cloud….faise

16. RandomComment on June 7th, 2009 8:39 pm

    Lol, spammer.

17. Cloud on June 7th, 2009 10:42 pm

    I thought this was fine

    The story was a little different than I thought it was going to be as I read. One thing I thought was strange was the girl saying she did that with her mom and dad… if that was told to me I would be worried about that rather than going further (you would understand if you read).

    The art was decent, it was a little black and white for me but the details were not totally lost in it. I didn’t find anything special here though.

    Anything else?: Although it was loli, I didn’t get a true loli feeling, and I don’t really know why.

    Score:

    2/5

    -Cloud

18. Loliguy on June 8th, 2009 12:03 am

    AHHH! more loli at last!!! good story and a VERY sexy loligirl. fap fap fap!!!

19. faise on June 8th, 2009 1:55 am

    faise pervysage and cloud…faise

20. lolololol on June 8th, 2009 3:16 am

    I want more of this guy’s work.

21. Left 4 Dead ~ Hunter on June 8th, 2009 4:04 am

    WWWRWWRRRRRRWWWWRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

22. @Cloud on June 8th, 2009 8:24 am

    Maybe its because the size ratio of the boy and girl is different compared to that of whats presented with Inuboshi or Wanyanaguda.

23. sanji on June 8th, 2009 11:47 am

    heee…can u translate the “lucky star”..

24. sanji on June 8th, 2009 1:32 pm

    pipol can u translate the “Lucky Star”…i found it somewhere & also its a lolicon…pls make translate….im lookin forward for it….♥♥♥

25. I Call Dibs.....On Your Moms Sweet Ass on June 9th, 2009 12:35 am

    First off.

    1. Sanji, no, they dont work that way.

    2. the story was good, and the art great, but it left me feeling like it was building up for something that just didnt happen. 7/10

26. Doki-Doki on June 9th, 2009 3:17 am

    Finally a new loli :D

    I personally really liked this one.
    Fantastic story, the art was a tad lacking though

27. ∞ on June 14th, 2009 7:22 pm

    I like the story and art
    ∞/5

28. Fire Dance on June 15th, 2009 2:37 am

    i liked the storry but it`s pretty sik that she is
    just a kid abd he`s having sex with her. that is
    relly fuck`ed up. so next time i hope there wont
    be any lolicon stuff. that a side the story was
    kinda cute.

29. doujin fan on June 15th, 2009 12:00 pm

    is fire dance new to the site or something? if he thinks this is fucked up he should check out some of the other ones

30. okrtheabsolute on September 24th, 2009 7:17 am

    why do you guys hate the art; i mean, what abt it do you hate?

31. mrgrey on September 30th, 2009 9:46 pm

    Resolution is not good enough to read the script without having to squint and focus really hard? Wtf? At least upload a decent image. (No my eyes are fine.)

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