Story: Ah, I couldn’t follow it.. The sex scene was kinda random.
Art: how old is this doujin!? it looks to be about 6 years old, just all cleaned up. (She also has a HUGE head
2/5
omg wtf on
January 30th, 2009 5:36 am
0!
Pokemon Trainer on
January 30th, 2009 5:56 am
so i hurd u guyz leik mudkipz?
Zake on
January 30th, 2009 6:59 am
The person below me is a retard
Twerp on
January 30th, 2009 7:24 am
Nope… the person below me is the retard
Lolimania on
January 30th, 2009 8:04 am
Everyone above me are retards…
This doujin was sorta good though it was like a comedy when i read it huh guess its just me. I didnt notice the censors so i guess thats some points there.
3/5
hentaifollower on
January 30th, 2009 10:44 am
I love LOLIIII…… loli….Loli…..
Dark Matter on
January 30th, 2009 12:43 pm
HeHe…..
That was funny….
I like loli….but this was a gang….bang
I prefer a story with….
a man….and a little girl….not just…
a bunch of perverts…..
the artist/writer…..was funny
Cloud on
January 30th, 2009 1:06 pm
hmm gotta go soon so I will make this short.
the sotry was not as well elaborated as I wished for.
The art was really nice, it definitely enhanced the “cute” quality this Doujin brought. The censors weren’t so bad, think black bars being a plus.
Anything else?: Cute, and fun, but a little short I thought.
Score:
3/5
-Cloud
Lolilover on
January 30th, 2009 3:37 pm
Eh not the best didnt like the story line… not really of a gang bang story liker
3/5
zombie on
January 30th, 2009 5:41 pm
Less loli, please. =/ Gang-bangs are good, but there’s nothing hot about little girls getting raped.
Anonymous on
January 30th, 2009 5:45 pm
MOAR LOLI :D Hooray admin!!
T5J8F8 on
January 30th, 2009 7:48 pm
The artist had me laughing a bit, and smiling a lot. Neat trasition from 4koma to flat-out doujin. Jeez, what is it about that little frame?! Ah, if only I could materialize such beings (or have the powers of Taa-chan (there’s a doujin reference for ya!))…
Would there be laws to protect “underage” imaginary “friends”? Perhaps if they were made to ‘be’ best under those conditions, then it would be cruel NOT to?
Condor on
January 30th, 2009 8:10 pm
More yuri hentai please???
Yotsuba on
January 30th, 2009 8:36 pm
This doujin was oddly reminiscent to the manga comic strip style just like Azumanga Daioh. Even though this is definitely a compliment, the story, overall, was a disappointment.
The art was just like Azumanga, perhaps more of a Lucky Star feel (with the big eyes and what not). Even though this doujin is very cute (and I LOVE cute), it ends up feeling like a big let down, and falls short of making its mark.
The story is very busy, and switches from shopping, to the writer of the doujin, to the sex, then back to the writer.
I like the direction it took, but the pacing was just dumb. The sex part didn’t make much sense at all, and I felt let down by that aspect as well.
Overall, its cute, and has a decent art style. But the story, although reminiscent of Azuma-San’s work, just doesn’t cut it.
2/5
-Yotsuba ^^
P.S. I like the banter between the writer of the doujin and the other worker, adds a good bit of comedy to the mix.
(and the first parts are almost exactly the same style as Azumanga Daioh manga!)
Omnomnom on
January 30th, 2009 10:32 pm
Moar please! :3
whooo on
January 30th, 2009 10:33 pm
i’m gay…my mom is a dickgirl
FurryLover on
January 31st, 2009 12:12 am
I dunno, this one has me torn in two: I’ll give it two short reviews:
On the Doujin side of things (Level of sex story, well played scenes involving sex and whatnot) I’d say the artwork is a solid 4/5 and the story is 2/5. It’s there, just not prominent. As a doujin for sexual purposes I’d give it around a 6/10. Worth a read.
As a Manga with a bit of Sex in it I’d give it a better score.
I love this style of art, Maybe that’s just me. It’s really nice looking, not to harsh on the eyes but not blurry in the least bit~
And the banter between the artists is funny. I just love it. “You know what I love? Cold tofu. But not as much as panties.” xDDD If you want it for the Manga style, not the masturbation material I’d give it a solid 8/10. =3
Mr,Nameless on
January 31st, 2009 2:09 am
sickness,and pervert little fuckers
what else?teachin how to be a pedo,…0/0 SCORE
I Can’t stand loli stuffs
HodgePodge2028 on
January 31st, 2009 5:59 am
HAHAHAHAHA!!! Say what you want about the content, THIS WAS FUCKING HYSTERICAL! I loved the writing in this, when I saw the little box frames in the beginning I told myself they better make up for it in the dialog and it was hit out of the park! This was written by a guy who knows this subject is twisted, hell he practically admits it in the “Talk” sections. The little notes that are scattered throughout display self humiliation and that’s the kind of writing I love! This guy said I maybe sick but I’m gunna have fun with this and it really felt like he did; many of the panels of the guys going crazy were great! He’s basically his own critic in this story and I thought it was great, I enjoyed every page and I think you all are crazy, unless of course maybe the truth hurts a little, but hey at least he was open with himself and try to make it somekinda magical moment, because it’s not. He knew it, you know it. It’s a group of fuck-heads who can’t control their own dicks and decide to kidnap and rape a little girl under hypnosis. Is that wrong? Yes. But it’s a comic, lighten up. I would more likely put my money on the people who aren’t open about their fetishes to be the glue-sniffers who actually go out and do something like this. And actually, isn’t that WHY all the men in the neighborhood did it in the first place? Because they were holding it inside, probably not even admitting it to themselves? Think of it as a therapy session. I give it 4 for the dialog and 1 for the rest, that’s 5/5 bitches! HAHAHAHAHA!
MR.NOBODY on
January 31st, 2009 12:57 pm
OHH SHUT UP U SICK MOLESTERS LOL
Unsigned on
February 1st, 2009 1:03 am
Wow. okay…
The chapter number kinda seemed off by a few million.
I thought it was going to be a normal 4-koma for all ages as I read it.
I thought, “Wow, I thought this was hentai! I kinda like this. I’m going to go research this!”
It instantly turned into rape. I’m kinda disappointed…
4/5
Anonymous on
February 2nd, 2009 12:57 am
What the fucking fuck
HodgePodge2028 on
February 2nd, 2009 9:56 pm
Hahahaha! Honestly though, even though it is what it is, the sex seemed like an after thought, it was rushed and ended as quickly as it came. Get it? Came? Oh, nevermind. I like to base my ratings on how entertained I feel while reading, after all isn’t porn a type of entertainment? If it’s not interesting or feels copied and pasted I just feel bored and ripped off. Also, it’s a drawing on a piece of paper, so lighten up people. If you seriously have that much trouble telling the difference between reality and a drawing, either you’re too young and impressionable to be here or you may be sicker than I am. Hahahaha!
mystic on
February 3rd, 2009 5:36 pm
i enjoyed this doujin, but i have to agree with Yotsuba about the story. this one felt very scattered and the sex didnt make sense. i also found myself laughing more than fapping…
Yakururu 1457th on
February 8th, 2009 7:13 pm
YEY!!! last!
or maybe not o:
sakura-chan on
February 25th, 2009 12:20 am
hihi this is funny! thx alot admin xD
Wicked Sick on
March 1st, 2009 6:37 pm
lol Last xD
jman on
March 2nd, 2009 4:34 pm
“i like cold tofu, but its not my favoutite thing”
“well then what is your favourite thing?”
“panties of course!”
lol
∞ on
June 18th, 2009 10:32 pm
The dumbest and funnies I found on this site to date lol
3/5
thingsw/letters... on
October 12th, 2009 7:04 pm
So I don’t even have to join stuff to leave a comment??…
thingsw/letters... on
October 12th, 2009 7:04 pm
THAT’S FRIKIN’ COOL!!!!!
thingsw/letters... on
October 13th, 2009 12:28 am
I thought it was funny!
Tetsuo on
October 31st, 2009 7:46 pm
Maniacale. Bella lo stile 4koma.
Inuboshi's fan on
December 6th, 2009 1:38 pm
hahaha nice loli XD and nice history
Anonymous on
January 18th, 2010 2:14 pm
has any one notes the chapter of the book. its 5129876 . Must be some sort of a joke
OMFG!!!!!MY 1ST TIME SAYING FIRST!!!!=D
first!
shit
and 4th
5th for great justice
Story: Ah, I couldn’t follow it.. The sex scene was kinda random.
Art: how old is this doujin!? it looks to be about 6 years old, just all cleaned up. (She also has a HUGE head
2/5
0!
so i hurd u guyz leik mudkipz?
The person below me is a retard
Nope… the person below me is the retard
Everyone above me are retards…
This doujin was sorta good though it was like a comedy when i read it huh guess its just me. I didnt notice the censors so i guess thats some points there.
3/5
I love LOLIIII…… loli….Loli…..
HeHe…..
That was funny….
I like loli….but this was a gang….bang
I prefer a story with….
a man….and a little girl….not just…
a bunch of perverts…..
the artist/writer…..was funny
hmm gotta go soon so I will make this short.
the sotry was not as well elaborated as I wished for.
The art was really nice, it definitely enhanced the “cute” quality this Doujin brought. The censors weren’t so bad, think black bars being a plus.
Anything else?: Cute, and fun, but a little short I thought.
Score:
3/5
-Cloud
Eh not the best didnt like the story line… not really of a gang bang story liker
3/5
Less loli, please. =/ Gang-bangs are good, but there’s nothing hot about little girls getting raped.
MOAR LOLI :D Hooray admin!!
The artist had me laughing a bit, and smiling a lot. Neat trasition from 4koma to flat-out doujin. Jeez, what is it about that little frame?! Ah, if only I could materialize such beings (or have the powers of Taa-chan (there’s a doujin reference for ya!))…
Would there be laws to protect “underage” imaginary “friends”? Perhaps if they were made to ‘be’ best under those conditions, then it would be cruel NOT to?
More yuri hentai please???
This doujin was oddly reminiscent to the manga comic strip style just like Azumanga Daioh. Even though this is definitely a compliment, the story, overall, was a disappointment.
The art was just like Azumanga, perhaps more of a Lucky Star feel (with the big eyes and what not). Even though this doujin is very cute (and I LOVE cute), it ends up feeling like a big let down, and falls short of making its mark.
The story is very busy, and switches from shopping, to the writer of the doujin, to the sex, then back to the writer.
I like the direction it took, but the pacing was just dumb. The sex part didn’t make much sense at all, and I felt let down by that aspect as well.
Overall, its cute, and has a decent art style. But the story, although reminiscent of Azuma-San’s work, just doesn’t cut it.
2/5
-Yotsuba ^^
P.S. I like the banter between the writer of the doujin and the other worker, adds a good bit of comedy to the mix.
(and the first parts are almost exactly the same style as Azumanga Daioh manga!)
Moar please! :3
i’m gay…my mom is a dickgirl
I dunno, this one has me torn in two: I’ll give it two short reviews:
On the Doujin side of things (Level of sex story, well played scenes involving sex and whatnot) I’d say the artwork is a solid 4/5 and the story is 2/5. It’s there, just not prominent. As a doujin for sexual purposes I’d give it around a 6/10. Worth a read.
As a Manga with a bit of Sex in it I’d give it a better score.
I love this style of art, Maybe that’s just me. It’s really nice looking, not to harsh on the eyes but not blurry in the least bit~
And the banter between the artists is funny. I just love it. “You know what I love? Cold tofu. But not as much as panties.” xDDD If you want it for the Manga style, not the masturbation material I’d give it a solid 8/10. =3
sickness,and pervert little fuckers
what else?teachin how to be a pedo,…0/0 SCORE
I Can’t stand loli stuffs
HAHAHAHAHA!!! Say what you want about the content, THIS WAS FUCKING HYSTERICAL! I loved the writing in this, when I saw the little box frames in the beginning I told myself they better make up for it in the dialog and it was hit out of the park! This was written by a guy who knows this subject is twisted, hell he practically admits it in the “Talk” sections. The little notes that are scattered throughout display self humiliation and that’s the kind of writing I love! This guy said I maybe sick but I’m gunna have fun with this and it really felt like he did; many of the panels of the guys going crazy were great! He’s basically his own critic in this story and I thought it was great, I enjoyed every page and I think you all are crazy, unless of course maybe the truth hurts a little, but hey at least he was open with himself and try to make it somekinda magical moment, because it’s not. He knew it, you know it. It’s a group of fuck-heads who can’t control their own dicks and decide to kidnap and rape a little girl under hypnosis. Is that wrong? Yes. But it’s a comic, lighten up. I would more likely put my money on the people who aren’t open about their fetishes to be the glue-sniffers who actually go out and do something like this. And actually, isn’t that WHY all the men in the neighborhood did it in the first place? Because they were holding it inside, probably not even admitting it to themselves? Think of it as a therapy session. I give it 4 for the dialog and 1 for the rest, that’s 5/5 bitches! HAHAHAHAHA!
OHH SHUT UP U SICK MOLESTERS LOL
Wow. okay…
The chapter number kinda seemed off by a few million.
I thought it was going to be a normal 4-koma for all ages as I read it.
I thought, “Wow, I thought this was hentai! I kinda like this. I’m going to go research this!”
It instantly turned into rape. I’m kinda disappointed…
4/5
What the fucking fuck
Hahahaha! Honestly though, even though it is what it is, the sex seemed like an after thought, it was rushed and ended as quickly as it came. Get it? Came? Oh, nevermind. I like to base my ratings on how entertained I feel while reading, after all isn’t porn a type of entertainment? If it’s not interesting or feels copied and pasted I just feel bored and ripped off. Also, it’s a drawing on a piece of paper, so lighten up people. If you seriously have that much trouble telling the difference between reality and a drawing, either you’re too young and impressionable to be here or you may be sicker than I am. Hahahaha!
i enjoyed this doujin, but i have to agree with Yotsuba about the story. this one felt very scattered and the sex didnt make sense. i also found myself laughing more than fapping…
YEY!!! last!
or maybe not o:
hihi this is funny! thx alot admin xD
lol Last xD
“i like cold tofu, but its not my favoutite thing”
“well then what is your favourite thing?”
“panties of course!”
lol
The dumbest and funnies I found on this site to date lol
3/5
So I don’t even have to join stuff to leave a comment??…
THAT’S FRIKIN’ COOL!!!!!
I thought it was funny!
Maniacale. Bella lo stile 4koma.
hahaha nice loli XD and nice history
has any one notes the chapter of the book. its 5129876 . Must be some sort of a joke