Now this is some heavy stuff… 9/10
(pervysage is gonna go berserk on this)
CaptTan on
February 8th, 2009 9:07 am
The cake… *pukes blood and dies*
Yotsuba on
February 8th, 2009 9:32 am
Wow… ok I need sometime later to read this, but I’m so glad that there is another wanyanaguda doujin up! I can’t wait to read it!!!
Stupid work… :(
-Yotsuba
Bran on
February 8th, 2009 10:14 am
What the heck !
At the first scene his dick appears, it is as big as her legs and he can insert it fully inside her !?
I go fainted !
Doujin Freak on
February 8th, 2009 12:24 pm
why this artist keep drawing dick girl doujin
dick girl dont really exist…
MORE LOLIS !!!
keka on
February 8th, 2009 2:35 pm
loli!
Samael on
February 8th, 2009 3:25 pm
Actually, Doujin Freak, that’s not entirely correct; it’s extremely rare, but sometimes people are born with both sets of reproductive organs… All though, Dick Girls don’t have balls, so I see your point. At any rate, the doujin itself was pretty good.
TheBigBoom on
February 8th, 2009 3:27 pm
The Characters kept reminding me of Sweeney Todd and Mrs Lovette, so that’s gonna affect my review.
The story… there was barely a story. though what is there it had a gross sense in it, and I thought Mrs. Lovette’s meat pies were to die for. Having to think other people is gonna eat that for dessert was a turn off.
The sex scene, boy there was a lot of it and it was disturbing, page 1 you’ll think “Oh, that’s a sweet girl” and page 2 you’ll go “OH WTF”
The art was enjoyable. Sure she doesn’t even look like a 6th grader and her head is huge, but that’s just nitpicking. The censorships are barely noticable, and when it’s there most of the time it’s on the guy.
I give this: 2/5
-TheBigBoom
RandomComment on
February 8th, 2009 3:42 pm
This cake smells like fish!
“Attention people, attention! Korone’s cakes are made out of people!… nah, just kidding, it just has pre-cum, semen, sweat, dead skin cells, and sebum in them.”
ya, the Cloud above me is obviously not me.. and that fake PervySage, does he feel special doing that?
ok, well why all the negative reviews! omg this was some HOT loli with F’ing NO CENSORS! OMG
1. Page 3… omg… so good.
2. F’ing NO CENSORS!
3. and LOLI
4. Interesting plot
These are all reasons why this was SO hot!
There was story here.. But just not revolving around characters so much, and more of an idea, which was “what if a cake shop own made a cake with a special ingredient (wonder what that is? lol) and sold it”. It was an interesting idea, and I liked it.
The art, love it. I have liked this artist works before, and this is no exception. PLUS DID I MENTION NO CENSORS?!
Anything else?: *NO CENSORS!!*, I really liked it, if your a loli fan pick this up.
Score:
4.5/5
-Cloud
PS. eww RandomComment, you kinda ruined that for me. And WHERE IS PERVY! aww come on.
LolipopIsGood on
February 8th, 2009 5:59 pm
YEah…..
Another loli…. make me feel good…..
InternetRule#30 on
February 8th, 2009 6:14 pm
^///^ I liked it
Yep yep…mine are always so short, but I never know what truely to say so i;ll just fail at being witty for a few seconds
“The cake is a lie”
“Like warm apple pie”
“Let them eat cake!”
^______^ that is all hehe
-rulebreaker
Cloud on
February 8th, 2009 6:34 pm
wow… After re-reading again, I realized that there are in fact small censors.
I guess the first time I read, I was so turned on my brain block them out!
But don’t worry, they don’t cover up anything good, and they are mostly not used..
lol, that was weird, I could have swore there was no censors.
-Cloud
Yotsuba on
February 8th, 2009 6:52 pm
Sorry, Cloud. The small square censors rained on your parade…
I had fun with this loli. It might not be as well writen as some of the other Round Shell works, but its… interesting, to say the least. :)
The art is exactly what you would expect from Wanyanaguda-san. Detailed character designs, well thought out placing, smooth movment lines, and a simple design. Of course, reading the other Round Shell doujin’s point out his skill for art.
The story is a lot stranger than his other works, but not enough to derive from the main series. I was a little, how do I say, sickened at first. I mean, it is a bit gross. But the main swing to the story is the cake aspect, and the wordplay ties in well, even if it’s a little extreme.
The censoring is light, small black see-through squares, a good choice, as it’s not easily noticed, (see Cloud lol).
4/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. Maybe I just felt a little sick because I had a busy day? No, its probably the doujin, lol!
Yakururu on
February 8th, 2009 7:11 pm
Yey loli… as long it’s not real kids it’s great! ^^
Random on
February 8th, 2009 7:37 pm
wow 2/3 reviews gave it 4s? seems like it was overrated.
Nagato on
February 8th, 2009 8:42 pm
pedo-dad doujing always disgust me, and is disturbing to see that huge dick fitting in such small place o_0
Shameless Monk on
February 8th, 2009 8:43 pm
Good story,with a lovely lolita and a delicious…cake!But I prefer “eat” the cook! ;)
Wise Words from a Perverted Gentleman on
February 8th, 2009 9:18 pm
hmmm interesting
Cherry-Loli-Pop on
February 8th, 2009 9:23 pm
yay new 1 i have every1 stored on my pc cant wait for the next 1
Dark Matter on
February 8th, 2009 9:26 pm
…I give people panic attacks,
and the impression that i’m a jerk….
Anonymous on
February 8th, 2009 9:52 pm
Woohoo loli! :D
MOAR LOLI PLZ!
kaze343 on
February 8th, 2009 10:49 pm
@ mystic
its not new at all. the tankubon it came from is from like 4 years ago. round shell second. just took a while for someone to translate it and share.
Weeaboo on
February 8th, 2009 11:20 pm
Heh, I already have this one but rereading it surely was not a bad experience =P. I love this one; definitely a keeper.
Only, this is part of the 2nd Round Shell doujin. I wish someone would translate the rest of the 2nd round shell, ’cause the first Round Shell caused a nosebleed and a half for me =).
5/5
To Cloud on
February 9th, 2009 1:22 am
the fake pervysage is funny so leave him alone.
PervySage on
February 9th, 2009 3:24 am
I say we’re all pervy, we all enjoy loli, and we’re all sages. So we all have a little PervySage in us all.
-Not PervySage, but I would like to see more lolis
DarkWarrior on
February 9th, 2009 6:16 am
Only the story is interesting, but it would have been beter with a more mature girl.
mystic on
February 9th, 2009 10:30 am
@kaze343
yeah i figured that was the case after reading the doujin, his art seemed a little bit in the development stage.
Omnomnom on
February 9th, 2009 8:15 pm
Read my name.
Moar please! :3
DarkWarrior on
February 9th, 2009 9:48 pm
hello y’all need some therapy i’m gonna take a bath
Hullabaloo on
February 10th, 2009 2:54 am
that was… just weird
normally I’d give a better description but…
wow…
Death on
February 10th, 2009 3:45 pm
It was a good doujin good, but I never liked mixing food and bodily fluids, I also do not like an unrealistically huge dick.
Anonymous on
February 22nd, 2009 12:03 am
DO WANT CAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scrathes his ass and says on
February 28th, 2009 12:21 am
Well, the sex seen made my dick harder than rock and I shot three loads :P I feel great!
Joe on
March 1st, 2009 3:12 am
ok this is just disgusting i like lolicon but this is sick, and not really very sexy
T5J8F8 on
April 17th, 2009 4:31 am
Delicious flat ch–ehh…CAKE! Yeah… heheh.
∞ on
June 20th, 2009 10:42 pm
I not going to buy a cake from a bakery again if a kid even walk by the store lol
∞/5
riikonightraider on
June 22nd, 2009 5:07 pm
this is so cute and so damn hot! I like the combination of whiped cream and come makes it sweeter and interesting to make your pussy *or gf pussy* to look like a cake food sex always good or is this pastry sex?
YAH!!!!!!!!!! 1st love it ^_^
first, crap pedo bait
oh well, still think theres been an excessive swing to loli in the last few months
nice doujin
btw third ^^
Aaholes!!!
wow a new wanyanaguda doujin. its been a while hope its good.
YAYYYYYYY!!!!! LOLIIIII!!!!!
*EXTREME NOSE BLEED* cant feel limbs……. anemia kicks in…….. *cough* *cough* shit………
LOLI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now this is some heavy stuff… 9/10
(pervysage is gonna go berserk on this)
The cake… *pukes blood and dies*
Wow… ok I need sometime later to read this, but I’m so glad that there is another wanyanaguda doujin up! I can’t wait to read it!!!
Stupid work… :(
-Yotsuba
What the heck !
At the first scene his dick appears, it is as big as her legs and he can insert it fully inside her !?
I go fainted !
why this artist keep drawing dick girl doujin
dick girl dont really exist…
MORE LOLIS !!!
loli!
Actually, Doujin Freak, that’s not entirely correct; it’s extremely rare, but sometimes people are born with both sets of reproductive organs… All though, Dick Girls don’t have balls, so I see your point. At any rate, the doujin itself was pretty good.
The Characters kept reminding me of Sweeney Todd and Mrs Lovette, so that’s gonna affect my review.
The story… there was barely a story. though what is there it had a gross sense in it, and I thought Mrs. Lovette’s meat pies were to die for. Having to think other people is gonna eat that for dessert was a turn off.
The sex scene, boy there was a lot of it and it was disturbing, page 1 you’ll think “Oh, that’s a sweet girl” and page 2 you’ll go “OH WTF”
The art was enjoyable. Sure she doesn’t even look like a 6th grader and her head is huge, but that’s just nitpicking. The censorships are barely noticable, and when it’s there most of the time it’s on the guy.
I give this: 2/5
-TheBigBoom
This cake smells like fish!
“Attention people, attention! Korone’s cakes are made out of people!… nah, just kidding, it just has pre-cum, semen, sweat, dead skin cells, and sebum in them.”
LOLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!
ya, the Cloud above me is obviously not me.. and that fake PervySage, does he feel special doing that?
ok, well why all the negative reviews! omg this was some HOT loli with F’ing NO CENSORS! OMG
1. Page 3… omg… so good.
2. F’ing NO CENSORS!
3. and LOLI
4. Interesting plot
These are all reasons why this was SO hot!
There was story here.. But just not revolving around characters so much, and more of an idea, which was “what if a cake shop own made a cake with a special ingredient (wonder what that is? lol) and sold it”. It was an interesting idea, and I liked it.
The art, love it. I have liked this artist works before, and this is no exception. PLUS DID I MENTION NO CENSORS?!
Anything else?: *NO CENSORS!!*, I really liked it, if your a loli fan pick this up.
Score:
4.5/5
-Cloud
PS. eww RandomComment, you kinda ruined that for me. And WHERE IS PERVY! aww come on.
YEah…..
Another loli…. make me feel good…..
^///^ I liked it
Yep yep…mine are always so short, but I never know what truely to say so i;ll just fail at being witty for a few seconds
“The cake is a lie”
“Like warm apple pie”
“Let them eat cake!”
^______^ that is all hehe
-rulebreaker
wow… After re-reading again, I realized that there are in fact small censors.
I guess the first time I read, I was so turned on my brain block them out!
But don’t worry, they don’t cover up anything good, and they are mostly not used..
lol, that was weird, I could have swore there was no censors.
-Cloud
Sorry, Cloud. The small square censors rained on your parade…
I had fun with this loli. It might not be as well writen as some of the other Round Shell works, but its… interesting, to say the least. :)
The art is exactly what you would expect from Wanyanaguda-san. Detailed character designs, well thought out placing, smooth movment lines, and a simple design. Of course, reading the other Round Shell doujin’s point out his skill for art.
The story is a lot stranger than his other works, but not enough to derive from the main series. I was a little, how do I say, sickened at first. I mean, it is a bit gross. But the main swing to the story is the cake aspect, and the wordplay ties in well, even if it’s a little extreme.
The censoring is light, small black see-through squares, a good choice, as it’s not easily noticed, (see Cloud lol).
4/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. Maybe I just felt a little sick because I had a busy day? No, its probably the doujin, lol!
Yey loli… as long it’s not real kids it’s great! ^^
wow 2/3 reviews gave it 4s? seems like it was overrated.
pedo-dad doujing always disgust me, and is disturbing to see that huge dick fitting in such small place o_0
Good story,with a lovely lolita and a delicious…cake!But I prefer “eat” the cook! ;)
hmmm interesting
yay new 1 i have every1 stored on my pc cant wait for the next 1
…I give people panic attacks,
and the impression that i’m a jerk….
Woohoo loli! :D
MOAR LOLI PLZ!
@ mystic
its not new at all. the tankubon it came from is from like 4 years ago. round shell second. just took a while for someone to translate it and share.
Heh, I already have this one but rereading it surely was not a bad experience =P. I love this one; definitely a keeper.
Only, this is part of the 2nd Round Shell doujin. I wish someone would translate the rest of the 2nd round shell, ’cause the first Round Shell caused a nosebleed and a half for me =).
5/5
the fake pervysage is funny so leave him alone.
I say we’re all pervy, we all enjoy loli, and we’re all sages. So we all have a little PervySage in us all.
-Not PervySage, but I would like to see more lolis
Only the story is interesting, but it would have been beter with a more mature girl.
@kaze343
yeah i figured that was the case after reading the doujin, his art seemed a little bit in the development stage.
Read my name.
Moar please! :3
hello y’all need some therapy i’m gonna take a bath
that was… just weird
normally I’d give a better description but…
wow…
It was a good doujin good, but I never liked mixing food and bodily fluids, I also do not like an unrealistically huge dick.
DO WANT CAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, the sex seen made my dick harder than rock and I shot three loads :P I feel great!
ok this is just disgusting i like lolicon but this is sick, and not really very sexy
Delicious flat ch–ehh…CAKE! Yeah… heheh.
I not going to buy a cake from a bakery again if a kid even walk by the store lol
∞/5
this is so cute and so damn hot! I like the combination of whiped cream and come makes it sweeter and interesting to make your pussy *or gf pussy* to look like a cake food sex always good or is this pastry sex?
I love loli.. geeze
I am the new pervey sage and cloud