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  1. first on October 20th, 2009 11:23 am

    firsties

    prettymucha normal loli id say at least

  2. second on October 20th, 2009 11:24 am

    2nd

  3. Shadow42085 on October 20th, 2009 11:24 am

    Interesting to say at least the story is a basic rescue and love plot art is nice very well done
    9/10

    and number counters take your numbers and SHOVE THEM UP YOUR ASS

  4. first on October 20th, 2009 11:30 am

    i take that back its extremely wrong but nice

  5. on October 20th, 2009 11:40 am

    A good story
    4.7/5

  6. bob on October 20th, 2009 12:29 pm

    its alright

  7. Arbalesto on October 20th, 2009 12:58 pm

    Thaaaaaaaaaanks Adm 8D

  8. 8th on October 20th, 2009 1:14 pm

    Yippee best ever.

  9. Wilsonxmct on October 20th, 2009 2:15 pm

    OHH YEAH!! 8th LOL!! FUCK YOU WHO PLAYS NUMBERS!! LOL XD

  10. 10th on October 20th, 2009 3:07 pm

    10th baby
    wilson fuck you too
    yeah nice loli

  11. Anonymous on October 20th, 2009 4:41 pm

    YES!

  12. RandomComment on October 20th, 2009 4:42 pm

    “Good God, child! The fork, where is it!?” Yells a furious Wilson.

  13. Lolipawn on October 20th, 2009 6:00 pm

    Yey tanned loli

  14. moar loli? on October 20th, 2009 6:14 pm

    MOAR LOLI!? is it my birthday?!… nope. it’s not. but fyi: for my birthday. i do want loli.

  15. Sandaan on October 20th, 2009 6:23 pm

    No offense loli lovers but I kinda found the story quite disturbing

  16. TsubasaChan on October 20th, 2009 6:42 pm

    You people who do these stupid number games are nothing but a bunch of immature, underaged, disgusting, asswipes. Please stop. If you guys want to play childish games then go to some stupid child chat forum. This is a doujinshi and hentai manga website. This website is for adults and mature people. It is people like you that people think we are stupid people.

  17. HULA on October 20th, 2009 6:50 pm

    1000th

    got yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

  18. Anonymous on October 20th, 2009 8:40 pm

    damn some people r so serious

  19. Anonymous on October 20th, 2009 8:41 pm

    Oh and 18th

  20. Master of Puppets on October 20th, 2009 8:46 pm

    Hah, for mature people coming from the guy with the name that ends with -chan. I don’t know if you’ve read these comments, but it’s like an elementary school in here. Not just this, but the entire website. Someone needs to LURK MOAR

    anyways nice doujin

  21. Anonymous on October 20th, 2009 8:46 pm

    Two lolis in a row? I must be in heaven. Thanks admin, and MOAR LOLI please :D

  22. Okami on October 20th, 2009 10:18 pm

    What loli story isn’t disturbing? Love the tan.

  23. kozablade on October 20th, 2009 10:43 pm

    i love you admin i really do hope you can continue putting up doujins for years to come and remember were there is japanese pervs there is doujin

  24. Jetslide on October 20th, 2009 11:18 pm

    Wow That was a bit weird but ok i guess … 4/5

  25. Sailorloli on October 20th, 2009 11:26 pm

    @tsubasa
    Maturity and hentai don’t often go hand in hand :/
    23rd btw ;o

  26. Asterion on October 20th, 2009 11:39 pm

    Dude, give it a rest with the lolicon stuff. Is almost like pedophilia. That particular item apart, you`re running a good site.

  27. RandomComment on October 20th, 2009 11:46 pm

    I agree with Asterion. More shota and incest!

  28. Asterion's Master on October 20th, 2009 11:47 pm

    asterion, no, its not pedophilia, since no one here is actively pursuing little girls to do bad things to. Its pen and paper art, nothing more than that to just fap to. please actually look up the big words before you throw them around and label people.

  29. Loliguy on October 20th, 2009 11:55 pm

    ANother LOLI….YESSS!!! fap…fap…fap…

  30. Dig dug on October 21st, 2009 12:08 am

    the story was disturbing, and this kind stuff happens in real life

  31. Bountykat on October 21st, 2009 12:23 am

    @RandomComment: What are you talking about you agree with Asterion? He said loli is like pedophilia but you’re pushing for shota?? Uhm, same concept, different gender.
    AND, why the fuck are all of you people who “don’t like loli” on the viewing page for this manga in the first place?
    Retreat back to your own fetishes.

  32. RandomComment on October 21st, 2009 12:33 am

    I agree with Bountykat. More shota on shota like Promiscuity Classroom!

  33. lololol on October 21st, 2009 12:45 am

    I don’t know why but this turns me on more than other loli doujins I’ve seen.

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  34. lololol on October 21st, 2009 12:45 am

    I totally forgot ASCII won’t work here because it’s not wide enough :p

  35. kontol on October 21st, 2009 1:28 am

    gila seru abiz…………. lain kali yg mak sm naknya lebih banyak lagi ngentot………..gw pengen ngentot………………………………………

  36. gerr on October 21st, 2009 1:46 am

    last

  37. Asterion on October 21st, 2009 2:18 am

    “Almost like”….learn how to read, then come talk to me kid.

  38. . on October 21st, 2009 2:30 am

    1st

  39. krystal on October 21st, 2009 3:14 am

    lol the guy way up near the top who is telling everyone to stop playing number games its “childish” yes it is but…. THIS IS A FUCKING LOLICON EVERYONE ON HERE IS ATTRACTED TO KIDS lol cause there brains stopped growing at the w.e age they prefer lol im a lolicon lover and im 15 my mind stopped growing 3 yrs ago lol no offense to the loli lovers peace :)

  40. Wilsonxmct on October 21st, 2009 3:32 am

    LOLICON!!! DANM WISH I CAN HAVE CHILD SEX WITH SOME KIDS !! LOL if there is one that was Legal LOL!!

  41. Wilsonxmct on October 21st, 2009 3:32 am

    Since I was a Lolicon type guy( in non HEntai Matters)

  42. Anonymous on October 21st, 2009 4:30 am

    The guy came super quick, like within the first 7 pages or so.

  43. Anonymous on October 21st, 2009 9:54 am

    That was quite good, liked the ending.

  44. TsubasaChan on October 21st, 2009 3:20 pm

    I am not a guy

  45. TsubasaChan on October 21st, 2009 3:21 pm

    This is doujinshi it is not about you “boys” fapping it is all about art and showing people that you like someones work

  46. TsubasaChan on October 21st, 2009 3:23 pm

    You are a funning person Krystal. I am also a lolicon/shotacon but I am still mature. I would probably be your friend but I am 21 years old. a little too old to be friends in real life but not on the internet.

  47. RandomComment on October 21st, 2009 5:05 pm

    Tsubasa, I don’t have the slightest clue why telling us your gender is important to mention.

    Tsubasa, Hentai doujinshi is porn and we all know porn is for sexual excitement. Therefore the more fap it gets, the more people likes their “art”. Therefore, I FAP TO ART!

    Tsubasa, you have a weird way to define maturity after advertising yourself as a lolicon/shotacon that would befriend a 15 year old on the internet, but not in real life. That, my friend, makes you a a bit immature, also a internet predator.

    Tsubasa, It’s easy to lie on the internet, isn’t it?

  48. IncubusOkami on October 21st, 2009 11:02 pm

    “I FAP TO ART” ROFLMFAO…”tear” that was awesome.

    i agree with Bountykat, if you don’t like loli, leave us loli lovers in peace, i mean seriously we’re all normal perverts here.

    pesonaly i think statuary rape [spelled it wrong on purpose] is retarded if both parties are old enough for intercourse and consenting…i guess some people like taking the law too far

  49. Joe on October 21st, 2009 11:05 pm

    that guys penis makes me hard

  50. Valentine on October 22nd, 2009 1:49 am

    “Paraiso” means Paradise……Paraiso is a Filipino Word

  51. TsubasaChan on October 22nd, 2009 6:20 am

    it is easy to lie on the internet but I would never want to see any of you in real life. I may be a lolicon/sotacon but not for real people. I just like it in the hentai aspect. while it is true that gender does not matter on the internet I still do not like being called a guy. I am not a stinky smelly slob who doesn’t clean. I like order and a tidy living place.

  52. TsubasaChan on October 22nd, 2009 6:21 am

    it is fine to fap to art but please if you are not 18 or older you should not be on this website.

  53. olekirkrocks on October 22nd, 2009 7:10 am

    ditto. and if you think loli is disturbing, dont read it and be a dick to everyone else. its just annoying. its like spam, no one wants to hear it. it makes you as bad as the numberfags.

  54. Ω on October 22nd, 2009 10:02 am

    “I am not a stinky smelly slob who doesn’t clean. I like order and a tidy living place.”

    Hmmm…

  55. (o-0) on October 22nd, 2009 11:36 am

    yes loli muahahahahshahahahaha……oh and im a dude but i agree this can be counted as art

  56. TsubasaChan on October 22nd, 2009 3:23 pm

    I don’t think Loli is bad I love it

  57. tubass on October 22nd, 2009 3:42 pm

    “I am not a stinky smelly slob who doesn’t clean. I like order and a tidy living place.”

    If you weren’t ostracizing yourself enough already, well, now you’re done.

  58. LazyBUTt on October 22nd, 2009 5:33 pm

    “PARAISO”? I think it’s foreign term for “PARADISE”. I love the story btw..>4.5/5

  59. Asterion's Master on October 22nd, 2009 5:51 pm

    “Almost like” is as good as saying it is, kid. your comparing 1 thing to a whole and opposite thing. It is just art, so please go back to fapping to granny porn and leave us to our appreciation of the finer arts.

  60. RandomComment on October 22nd, 2009 6:23 pm

    Tsubasa, if you portray all men or even the stereotype as “stinky smelly slob who doesn’t clean” is really immature of you.

    Tsubasa, what “is” the age requirement to view porn? Some say 16, others say 13, and a most say 18 and 21. Now, restricting people of porn, because of age differences is going against a person’s freedom.
    You like freedom, don’t you? You’re not greedy for freedom, are you?

    I, myself say “I don’t give a damn about those kids, I just wanna see the porn myself”

  61. LiL sToNeR dUdE on October 23rd, 2009 4:13 am

    uhh… technically it’s against the law (atleast in the United States) to view pornography of any kind if you’re under the age of 18… as in there IS an age requirement… and breaking laws would require what you’re doing ISN’T part of your freedoms, I kind of know…

  62. Sacheleo on October 23rd, 2009 6:13 am

    TsubaChan….Holy shit man, you are one of the most immature ignorant little snot-brat I’ve seen in quite awhile. Why don’t you stop typing this “online argument” and just have fun? You alone posting something that ENTIRELY has nothing to do with the doujin (which was a nice doujin I liked it a lot) makes you just as immature, moronic, slobbish, and unclean, and disorderly as anyone else claims NOT to be… What the fuck are you, an alien that is attracted to Japanese “fappable art-porn”? Holy shit, you say you are mature and over the age of 18 but I doubt you have yet to pass the age of 8, come on speak the truth TsubaChan… You are crying over comments that, in particularly, well never end, no matter how much your dumb lone soul tries. And more specifically you are crying while being a 21 year old who would befriend a 15 year old in real life through a series of Lolicon? Now try to tell me there is nothing wrong with that statement, please… Don’t comment back and expect me to comment back because I’m less prone to even read the comments, this Doujinshi Art is for excitement therefore I say, admin take out the comment boxes it is giving to many people to many problems. The Lolicon Doujin was nice, cute little story, Good Art. Good job Admin.

  63. RandomComment on October 23rd, 2009 7:19 am

    “LiL sToNeR dUdE”

    “Laws”, looking at your name you shouldn’t agree to some “laws” from the USA. Legalized it, amirite?

    Also, it’s really absurd to only pick out one single place and time (USA and present). Why not look at the whole picture? Why not look at the forefathers all around the world? Why not roll a chocolate blunt and visualize what freedom really is?

    I’m sure you’ll find it unfair to your freedom if they raise their age requirement for porn to age 25 (or whatever age you are). That’s law for you.

    Oh and Sacheleo. No need to overkill what has already been stated.

  64. mother fucker on October 23rd, 2009 9:48 am

    whatever dudz….tsubasa-chan? think she’s a bit loosed on the head… all of you lolis keep loli-ing… juz do your thing numbers..letters… heck do an entire constillation…WHA-DA-FA-EVER,…,
    anyway, this is the 1st time i’ve read these and for once i actually browsed till the last comment..
    nice loli… i’m underaged,feline & a little cooped up with my boring life under guard and tow… so???
    nyahaha! nice loli though.. love it…

  65. the preacher on October 23rd, 2009 10:38 am

    sometimes the comments are A LOT better than the doujins themselves.. xD

  66. Takashi on October 23rd, 2009 8:09 pm

    WDF 10/10 And shut the fk up number assholes

  67. olekirkrocks on October 23rd, 2009 11:46 pm

    youre all a bunch of condecsending assholes. lol jk we’re all friends here right? i mean seriously, correct me if im wrong!!!!

  68. Joe on October 24th, 2009 1:33 am

    As i said nice dick i am not gay but that dick is well drawn i must emite tho mine is and hal intches i can hold two hands around and have intch and bit left but i am 18 so i can do that u lil boys need to grow up to have a street fighters dick like mine i am goku i collected the 7 dragon balls and wished this dick come true i did it is a free willy and no 1 can beat it who whacks off to this site as much as me btw i am plasterd captain morgan FTW = for the win :D lol
    I LOVE U BABY

  69. olekirkrocks on October 24th, 2009 1:49 am

    douche.

  70. Master of Puppets on October 24th, 2009 1:51 am

    What the fuck does the paragraph above me say? There is this wall of faggotry I can’t seem to get past. Someone who can’t spell “inch” shouldn’t be on this site

  71. Master of Puppets on October 24th, 2009 1:59 am

    Just finished reading the above comments. Wow you guys, seriously? I remember having better arguements in the fourth grade. Not too long ago for some of these people…

  72. Anonymous on October 24th, 2009 5:10 am

    translation: Just skimmed through the above comments. Wow you guys, seriously? I remember having imaginary arguements in the fourth grade. ??? ??? ???? ??? ??? ???? ?? ????? ??????…

    no one respects bashers who don’t contribute to arguments :)

  73. Anonymous on October 24th, 2009 11:14 am

    lol someone just commented to stop the loli and post more incest… in my opinion loli is much better than wanting to fuck your own sister/mother

  74. Manga Master on October 25th, 2009 1:50 pm

    how bout incest loli?

  75. Lolita Boy on October 26th, 2009 12:03 am

    Sandman should have a good time with this one.

  76. Sandman on October 26th, 2009 12:16 am

    indead I shall Fan … Guy.

    Art 3
    Good but she had a tad bit of detail for a vergin and the Fat japanese guy looked like a diffrent art style.
    Story 3
    Good but pointles in these sex slave doujins. plus who was haveing sex at the bagining.
    Style 2
    Not all that origanel and the transision sucks.

    overall 8. not normally a pass but ill make a acception for this one if story isnt all that importent to you.

  77. LiL sToNeR dUdE on October 26th, 2009 2:31 am

    RandomComment, personally yeah I don’t agree with many laws as you pointed out but I do understand the reasons for them which is why I pointed it out. Although I’m not sure if you’ll ever see this I thank you for giving me much to ponder. Perhaps I may eventually come up with a reasonable response to your inquiry..

  78. Anon on October 26th, 2009 4:00 pm

    Lol I think I know what country this is

  79. fuckrealgirls on October 27th, 2009 10:14 pm

    Commentors thanks for the laughs… on the the doujin. I really don’t think loli is my thing, once in a great while I’ll read an interesting one but this one wasn’t that great. Plus did anyone notice that the girls “Dad” looked like he was from Lupin the 3rd or something…. seriously now it’s gonna bug the shit out of me. Who does that guy look like!!! He’s from something I know it! If anyone can place him I’ll be so happy. What was the name of that pirate anime… One Peice maybe that’s it. Anyway.

    Rating: Thanks for saving me and all but it turns out we you didn’t have too… The place got shut down… and as for the sex well you wern’t that great… just like this doujin. ( I was going somewheere :-) )

  80. olekirkrocks on October 28th, 2009 9:26 pm

    kiss my ass

  81. thingsw/letters... on October 31st, 2009 11:53 am

    I liked it.

  82. Fzygdkeh on November 10th, 2009 7:16 pm

    comment3

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