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*removes the ability for people to call first*
yay loli like it btw FIRST
i still can say first
A very nice story, with an ending I actually enjoyed. The censors weren’t too bad (a small black strip) and the story was very cute. I can’t find any complaints with this one.
5/5
nice work really love it ^^ 5/5
i liked it but somehow i feel like something was missing. maybe it was MOAR FELLA, or maybe it was because the story wasn’t long enough for my liking. all in all, i’d give it a 4/5
Oh very nice story and art!
I really enjoyed this! The story was fun and had some humor, and transitioned well. The story really took me in, and it was believable to me. This was very cute, and I hope there might be a sequel.
The art was fantastic! Inuboshi knows how to draw some hot loli! Small black censor bars, a plus! The direction of the Doujin was a well superb.
Anything else?: A very nice Doujin for loli lovers!
Score:
5/5
-Cloud
Yoooo LOli……. Thank you admin
Inuboshi-san knows what he is doing! The art is the definitive high point of this doujin, with the style cute and very personal.
And when I say cute, I mean KAWAIIIIII!!!!
Just like the rest of Inuboshi’s works, the cute factor is just dominant.
Momo, the girl in the story, finds a lover in her onii-chan. From that point the story is just classic Loli. The development of both characters stems from a point of what love is.
I really, truly loved this story, and defiantly LOVED how cute this doujin was, but it still wasn’t perfect. The start felt a bit forced, as the sexual presence was already there. I thought it could have developed better if it stemmed right from the brother-sister relationship, to lovers.
Thats aside, the art was bliss, censors discreet (black lines), and the story was near perfection.
4.5/5
-Yotsuba ^^
P.S. Momo is Japanese for Peach, thats where the title comes from.
Once again Inuboshi delivers another masterpiece. The art from this guy is always the best and he did not disappoint. The story always seems to complement his artwork because the its also always good. I find it difficult to see anything bad with this one, although the censors could always be better, its not really all that bad.
Overall Damn Good
10/10
BTW Inuboshi KICKS ASS
MASTER CHIEF DEMANDS MORE LOLI
Alright alright, this was your typical loli, blah blah blah BULLSHIT! Ya know, I wanna see a loli where the guy fantasizes about having sex with his little sister and then when he decides to set it all up she tells him to FUCK OFF! I stopped reading once the sex came because I was so utterly bored with the dialog, that’s not suposed to happen!Same old same old. The real twist I saw was: What school has curtains on the windows? I went to a public school and a private school as a kid, none had curtains for the windows. I guess it’s kinda different that the guy had the balls to jump his sister when she came to wake him up, but then it just got stale. The art was good, but it lacked a soul of it’s own. 3/5
If I was running this website, everyone who says “first” would be immediately banned.
sighs*……
loli…..its ok…..
I hate master….chief….
sorry….just an opinion……
@ Dark Matter
I like loli’s because most of the time they are extremely cute, and I melt when it comes to cute things!
I might not share the same enthusiasm that Master Chief might have over loli’s, but I don’t think there’s anthting wrong with liking them.
There’s also nothing wrong with not liking them! ^^
-Yotsuba
…i don’t believe…
i expressed…any emotion…….
against….or towards…..loli……
……just strictly against……
…master chief…….
i also believe…….that loli may be….
cute…..at times……but i mainly….
like the art…….
I luffs it! Gj Adim. Moar pwease? n.n
…….i also hate….
omnmnom……
……thats…..just annoying….
….why wasn’t……
….my name….posted
You’re really sticking with that “…” thing, huh? :D
I think it would be nice to have a log in system, or maybe a forum, that way we could have disscussions and such! ^^
But I just hope theres a good one tomorrow! I’ll have to check before and after work, just so I don’t miss it! :D
-Yotsuba
….An idea…..
we could….pick a doujin….
at random….and use it as a forum….
…..or maybe….we could use it….
..to set the goal….for most….
…….comments….my vote…says….we start…
it…with the next….new….doujin
I actually got the onset of chocked-ups during her confession/proposition/ultimatum, though that and possible eye moistenings might be blameable on being a bit laying down at the time* (was I?), and maybe some tiredness.
Unfortunately for me, I’ve got “onii-chan” moans in my head (and maybe general usage) in that annoying voice you’d expect to hear in animus or similarly voiced materials, which irritates me to whichever degrees.
*an anagram of “item”, as budgeoning typoing made me aware
Well Dark Matter is the master of elipsies.
@ T5J8F8
I like having the sound of her saying “onii-chan” in my head, is so cute! And imagining her with tear in her eyes… kawaii!!! ^^
But thats just me, as cute is my only weakness. :D
its…ellipses….
grammatical…error…..
…..sighs*…..maybe…
i’ll go to…. sleep……
Ha ha ha ha
bunch of porno infected brain
ops that include me too….
Loli sure the best cure for ED
ha ha ha ha
Sorry Dark Matter, I didn’t mean to pull you away from your busy schedule and make you spell check “ellipses”. But if you’re so concerned about grammar than you’d know that ellipses used 20 times in one sentece is in-of-itself a gramatical error. Also, in your fourth and fifth posts you failed to end your sentences with periods. But lighten up, I wasn’t attacking you, Just making a joke. Heh, maybe you do need sleep.
…..Can’t sleep…
..Noticed comment….
….Liked it…..very….real…
I…like you…to some…degree…
MOAR LOLI
Also 28th!!!!!!!!!!
Really not bad Actouly, i loved it!
5/5
More k? kthnx!
Just a question … Is a permanent ban possible ?
wow PervySage isn’t here yet… wierd.
anyway great doujin and i completly agree with Cloud.
Dang, I’m really late~
I guess it’s been covered that this Doujin is the Cutest thing ever~! n///n
Momo is 100% adorable, all the way~ I love the artwork. =3 And the storyline is really good to, she’s a little girl who’s easily persuaded. =3 I love this one~!
Total Score, 10/10! A+ Work there~ Admin, I love the work you’re doing with the site, keep it up~!
holy crap, Yotsuba and Dark Matter
This isn’t a forum.
And ya mystic! Where is PervySage.. I hope he didn’t leave.
-Cloud
yeah i hope he didn’t leave either. he was one of my favorite reviewers.
@ Cloud
Lol, you don’t want to see me when I really get into something. I could type all day! ^^
Holy crap !
Cloud !
No matter this is a forum or not
They make me :
=)) =))
That I give 4/5 =))
amazing
this is total shit
y’know, i’ve always liked it when in loli doujins it’s a nerdy brother with his kid sister. i guess it’s because i’m kind of a nerdy dork with no friends who wishes he had a sister. hence i waste my life away, fapping to loli all day long. thank you, inuboshi. lol
…ofcourse, if i did have a little sis. i don’t think i’d ever do anything like that to her, i’m just a lonely guy who wants love in his life. :(
I love Inuboshi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice manga
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