Rinoa-Chan’s First Time

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  1. Nanashi on April 27th, 2009 4:06 am

    looks good

  2. 4th on April 27th, 2009 4:07 am

    i win 2cnd

  3. hellyeah on April 27th, 2009 4:11 am

    :3 loli

  4. Random on April 27th, 2009 4:17 am

    Something tells me the cover is better than the actual doujin

  5. HelpBot on April 27th, 2009 4:17 am

    Did you know…
    Pants are overrated?

  6. SomaCruz on April 27th, 2009 4:19 am

    nice one :D

  7. me on April 27th, 2009 4:21 am

    first time 7th

  8. Joe Dirtay on April 27th, 2009 4:33 am

    8th. Yay Loli!

  9. gamer on April 27th, 2009 4:53 am

    9th?!

  10. 15y/o lolicon and shotacon fan on April 27th, 2009 5:44 am

    looks good..:D

  11. Dick on April 27th, 2009 6:53 am

    ^

  12. Anon on April 27th, 2009 7:45 am

    would have been better if she fucked with her brother though

  13. bigboy on April 27th, 2009 7:52 am

    i agree

  14. j00ed on April 27th, 2009 7:53 am

    Loli loli loli… pop. Ahem, let’s get to business.

    Ah… the power of averageness… Have you noticed that those titles are getting more and more cliche by the second? I mean, “Rinoa-Chan’s First Time”, whoa, I’m bedazzled by the originality. Whatever.

    Art was good. Regular Inuboshi stuff, most people should be used to it. The censors are barely noticeable, which is a big plus.

    Story… WHAT STORY? There WAS no story, no warm-up time, no nothing. I could’ve guessed 90% of the dialogue even without any kind of translation. Also, there are a few colour pages, which is something I like.

    All in all, I give this release a 4/5.

  15. a-grr on April 27th, 2009 10:11 am

    Ah loli, my favorite genre (^-^) and by my favorite loli artist Inuboshi as well!!!! My day brightened up.

    Cute art and decent quality, as expected. Not his best work, as can be seen in stuff like “Delicate Little Couple”. He doesn’t manage that same ’soft’ feel to the visual appearance of the characters. Still better than most artists =P

    Story had little substance and lack of lead up to the action. What was there of the story wasn’t all bad however. It managed to fit in with the progress neatly enough, and didn’t have random skips that I couldn’t follow.

    I didn’t actually notice any censors while I was reading, but I expect there was some (I can’t be fucked going back over it). Anyway, top marks for that fact alone.

    Overall 4/5, (would be 5/5 but just not his best work). This is still well above most other Loli doujins you will read though.

    P.S. I want some more of Yamatogawa’s stuff. Never seen better doujins from anyone since I read his stuff. ADMIN, if you read, please fulfill a devoted readers dreams (^-^) plssss =]

    P.P.S This is the best site EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    (~,<) peace

  16. James R. Mori on April 27th, 2009 11:55 am

    yes more loli and shota please

  17. poop on April 27th, 2009 12:53 pm

    17th

  18. ISKAPO on April 27th, 2009 1:22 pm

    yeah!!!!!Like It!!!!

  19. Light Bulb on April 27th, 2009 3:49 pm

    Why do you idiots feel the need to review porn? No one cares about your opinion.

  20. jman on April 27th, 2009 5:57 pm

    true that light nulb , rating porn makes you look like a douche!

    ps *fap fap*

  21. jman on April 27th, 2009 6:10 pm

    hes kinda agressive in this comic isnt he?

    ps *fap fap*

  22. Lolimania on April 27th, 2009 7:05 pm

    People need to review porn to feel smart and important because they have a false hope that people will actually stop and read their review and think, how edjumacated, I review cuz everyone else does it. peer pressure, so sue me >:O

  23. Lolimania on April 27th, 2009 7:07 pm

    But yes, there is no story, a story makes people feel less dumb so I like one with a story, though we all know the true reason people come here, *fap*

  24. T5J8F8 on April 28th, 2009 1:32 am

    *reads title*
    … with Seifer.

  25. j00ed on April 28th, 2009 7:19 am

    @Light Bulb: I don’t care about yours either. Got a problem? Nobody forced you to read the comments anyway. Don’t want to see what other people think of porn? Go ahead. Just stay out the way.

    @Lolimania: Story makes hentai moar fapable. G00d stuff.

  26. a-grr on April 28th, 2009 10:09 am

    Seems like jus a tad bit too much hostility for a fap site.
    Can’t we all just get along??

    *giggles girlishly*

    …but seriously (-_-)

  27. Pedo bear on April 28th, 2009 8:00 pm

    Seal of approval, given.

  28. garturo62 on April 29th, 2009 11:26 pm

    yes thanks

  29. slowpoke on April 30th, 2009 1:33 am

    First!

  30. InternetRule#30 on May 2nd, 2009 12:03 am

    I’ve only gotten through the colored paged so far but

    NYAAA she’s cute ^_^ I wish I could pull off a skirt like that. It’s almost 80’s.

    sorry about that >.> -cough-
    Anyway! =^__^=

    it wasn’t bad. Actouly I enjoyed it alot. The story was alright and of course I loved the art style.

    keepin in short like always
    -rulebreaker nya!

  31. meh on May 2nd, 2009 2:24 am

    where’s cloud and pervysage? haha…

  32. ChrisHansonNBC on June 6th, 2009 10:41 am

    hey, what are you guys doin here.

    why don’t you all take a seat, right over there…

    *points at the bar stools in the kitchen*

  33. ChrisHansonNBC on June 6th, 2009 10:43 am

    AHHH HAAA, I’ve finally caught you PEDO BEAR…

    I’m deporting you back to 4chan.

  34. AnimePrincess on July 15th, 2009 10:46 pm

    I love Inuboshi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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