I read it… The girl was hot, the guy was NOT NOT NOT!
I don’t know, the story was good, but… “da fuck dude, da fuck” (southpark)…
the art was goooood, but… ughhh DA FUCK?!
Anything else?: da fuck!
*Important*: *FAT BASTARD* … a warning
Score:
da fuck? / 5
-Cloud
Anonymous on
May 11th, 2009 1:31 am
oi
Dig dug on
May 11th, 2009 1:40 am
wow, the fat guy ruined everything :s
CaptTan on
May 11th, 2009 1:59 am
oh my god…
WTF CANT FAP TO THIS on
May 11th, 2009 2:32 am
THe girl is hot and the art is good but fuck i cant fap to this with that fat ugly dude in it
jman on
May 11th, 2009 3:13 am
waffles
Impresive on
May 11th, 2009 3:40 am
True to that man.. fat bastard..
^_^ on
May 11th, 2009 5:14 am
you guys FTW!!!!
a-grr on
May 11th, 2009 9:56 am
LOLI!!! Ah I have been waiting for some =)
But those comments above are scaring me =(
We shall see…
a-grr on
May 11th, 2009 10:18 am
Wow, I was so turned on, yet so NOT turned on all at the same time. It confused my senses. A cute loli like that should NEVER be presented with an ugly, fat sweaty-balled bloke like him (apologies to anyone who perhaps resembles him).
The story started out promising, until all the main parts presented themselves. The “pee” theme was particularly weird, and a mild turnoff. It wasn’t new to me at all, its just not my thing. Normally it wouldn’t even bother me, but when he drank it the way he did =P I almost gagged.
Art was fine. Not great but no real complaints. I suppose it could of used a little more depth via more shading, but what was there was fine.
Censors not to bad. Just the usual black strip.
Um, I don’t know what score to give it. If the guy was presented as normal I would have given MAYBE 4/5 because I have been missing Loli. But that bloke… AHHH THAT BLOKE!!!! He makes me evil, and give it a 1/5.
This one will have many people either loving this cuz it’s their fetish, or hating it.
Peace? (@_-)
O.O on
May 11th, 2009 10:52 pm
Can I give this less than one star?
:P on
May 12th, 2009 2:01 am
rofl….great story, great art too bad wat made a great story is what made a bad sex scene :/ the fat dude *shivers* i mean sure he was the one that made the story great but he ruined it too T_T 2.5/5
sf on
May 12th, 2009 5:14 am
My eyes are bleeding…
jman on
May 12th, 2009 5:49 am
she had sex with santa and he shook his belly, like a bowl full of jelly! seriously though santa = loli-lover, why else do what he does?
RandomComment on
May 12th, 2009 6:00 am
boobies on the guy and flat chested on the girl isn’t a nice doujin to read, dude.
O grande morador do Rio de Janeiro on
May 12th, 2009 7:21 pm
This is definitely one of the funniest doujins ever! It’s not fap material at all, but still really really funny. It’s right there on the top along with grandma’s kitten! 8,5/10 (out of just plain fun)
lolio on
May 12th, 2009 10:19 pm
well, it certanly is a change and not nececarily in a bad way… I personally find that looking at the girl, while she is with her fat brother, makes me notice the girl more, since im trying to ignore the guy… Kind of hard to explain, but i find it works with the story(wich was one of the funnier ones that i have read). All in all a pretty mediocre doujin…
2.8
—–
((5))
your bud
Lolio
Boludo on
May 12th, 2009 10:38 pm
Gross.
The Truth. on
May 13th, 2009 7:11 am
Actually, every single one of you is like the fat kid here ;) .
j00ed on
May 13th, 2009 7:48 am
@The Truth: You have a VERY wrong impression about lolicon fans. There is nothing that proves that obesity and attraction to this kind of stuff are somehow related. I, for one, may not be the most attractive male around but I’m still FAR from this guy. In fact, I have reasons to believe most people into lolicon (artists and fans alike) are in fact quite handsome guys (and girls, surprisingly).
So, yeah, if you wanted to offend anyone by offering the ‘truth’, you’ve failed.
By the way, this doujin IS gross. Ew.
Someone on
May 13th, 2009 7:42 pm
One of those princesses kisses toad and gets a prince stories.
GotHouse on
May 16th, 2009 11:40 pm
Fuck off peeps
Im last
btw i got the biggest house in the Atlantic connecting to pacific biatch!
HodgePodge2028 on
May 20th, 2009 2:47 pm
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That’s, that’s just silly, the whole thing was just silly. I didn’t like the tricking into sex bit or the fact that the girl’s never even seen a dick apparently but when she gets penetrated, no blood. Just no blood, I wunder if that says anything about her… Nah, then she’d know what he was doing… I guess she must’ve popped her cherry by acident or maybe I’m over analyzing it and the guy’s dick was just that small. But it’s just silly, nothing special or even that interesting, although I nearly stopped reading cause I was laughing so hard at that pathetic scene of the fat bastard jerking off in his room. But oh well.
Queero McGayGay on
May 21st, 2009 11:08 pm
Ok since some prople cogh cogh coughodgepodge2028… dont seem to know exactly what that bleeding is, heres a litle anatomy lesson for y’all. The bleeding when a girl is having sex is caused by one of two things… an infant geting penetrated (this only includes girls of up to 9 to 10 yrs of age) and the tearing of the skin covering the uterus. If the girl is developed, and has already lost the skin (masterbation??? And i even have a friend that has lost it during sports, do to stranious mouvements… wierd?) then they will not bleed unless u have a razor sharp dick! thanks for listening.
Anonymous on
May 24th, 2009 12:24 pm
first
anonymouse on
June 4th, 2009 2:18 am
LOL! so funny, “what are you doing?” - “dieiting… WANNA HELP! :D”
HodgePodge2028 on
June 5th, 2009 1:03 pm
@ Queero McGayGay
I’ll admit I never knew about the possibilty of tearing with strenious activity, and don’t get me wrong I love to have my mouth thrown back in my face, so I have to give you credit there. I didn’t know about it because I knew a girl who was in her early twenties and she bled on her first time.
However, for masturbation, I don’t believe for a second that the girl in this comic has ever had anything in or around her body considering the fact that she catches him jerking off, he tells her it a work out regimen and she believes him? I can’t speak for anyone else, but when I discovered myself some years ago I didn’t think, “Oh wow, this is all me, I’m so special.” I figured out that girls probably did something too, and being a little pervet used the internet for what it was meant to be used for, learning.
I’m glad I could inspire an intellegent response from someone, I even learned something, I guess it was only a matter of time. However, if I have to say one thing, your (cough cough) “Joke” (cough cough) was completely botched, you used too many and the majority of the “coughs” are spelled wrong. I thought your lung was collapsing and you decided to dictated to us what was happening, but then I realized you were making a joke.
I can take a punch, I’ll admit I hadn’t had the life experience yet to assume that she was an active even though at no point does it suggest that she’s into sports or other “strenious” activities. I can only work with what I’ve got and I have to admit you could be right there.
So, as a closing, gleep gloop bleep bloop, shanti shanti shanti, shalom, and peaceful tides.
Anonymous on
June 10th, 2009 12:26 pm
hes a oktaku and is known for his obsessions of anime he’s from tokyo and he weighs a metric ton his name fat bastard
Conker on
June 12th, 2009 11:21 am
Don’t really like the idea of fat dudes doing lolis but meh it had urine in it and its one of my fetishes
∞ on
June 14th, 2009 7:42 pm
First dunjin on this site I hated…
Negative Infinity/Nothing
∞ on
June 14th, 2009 7:43 pm
Edit:
First doujin on this site I hated…
Negative Infinity/Nothing
ariel asiaten on
September 19th, 2009 8:06 pm
thing this manga is not call a art
i call this a stupit art
No first for you assholes….
Loli FTW
looks good haha no one ca nsay second either
second biatches
looks nice overall 4/5
@LMFAO
FAILED
for the manga: I want a little sister ;_; then i would also try this diet :)
Now THAT’s a diet!! Oh, Tsubasa …fap…fap…splurt..SPLURT!!! :p
YAY!!! more LOLI!!!!
7th!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very inventive i like this artist
Hahaha i love doujin like this. Anyway awesome story and the art and everything else was awesome. . . and the last page was funny as well.
96%
O.O Son of a…
What a fat perverted bastard…
*disgust spasm*
Huh…Gross…
“Little sister diet program, 100% works!”
incest = icky
14th
Wow if i was in a manga i will try that diet.
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…. Uhhhh…. asdjkfhlkash
I was wondering why this had so many comments…
Ummmmmmm…. no.. wow.
I read it… The girl was hot, the guy was NOT NOT NOT!
I don’t know, the story was good, but… “da fuck dude, da fuck” (southpark)…
the art was goooood, but… ughhh DA FUCK?!
Anything else?: da fuck!
*Important*: *FAT BASTARD* … a warning
Score:
da fuck? / 5
-Cloud
oi
wow, the fat guy ruined everything :s
oh my god…
THe girl is hot and the art is good but fuck i cant fap to this with that fat ugly dude in it
waffles
True to that man.. fat bastard..
you guys FTW!!!!
LOLI!!! Ah I have been waiting for some =)
But those comments above are scaring me =(
We shall see…
Wow, I was so turned on, yet so NOT turned on all at the same time. It confused my senses. A cute loli like that should NEVER be presented with an ugly, fat sweaty-balled bloke like him (apologies to anyone who perhaps resembles him).
The story started out promising, until all the main parts presented themselves. The “pee” theme was particularly weird, and a mild turnoff. It wasn’t new to me at all, its just not my thing. Normally it wouldn’t even bother me, but when he drank it the way he did =P I almost gagged.
Art was fine. Not great but no real complaints. I suppose it could of used a little more depth via more shading, but what was there was fine.
Censors not to bad. Just the usual black strip.
Um, I don’t know what score to give it. If the guy was presented as normal I would have given MAYBE 4/5 because I have been missing Loli. But that bloke… AHHH THAT BLOKE!!!! He makes me evil, and give it a 1/5.
This one will have many people either loving this cuz it’s their fetish, or hating it.
Peace? (@_-)
Can I give this less than one star?
rofl….great story, great art too bad wat made a great story is what made a bad sex scene :/ the fat dude *shivers* i mean sure he was the one that made the story great but he ruined it too T_T 2.5/5
My eyes are bleeding…
she had sex with santa and he shook his belly, like a bowl full of jelly! seriously though santa = loli-lover, why else do what he does?
boobies on the guy and flat chested on the girl isn’t a nice doujin to read, dude.
This is definitely one of the funniest doujins ever! It’s not fap material at all, but still really really funny. It’s right there on the top along with grandma’s kitten! 8,5/10 (out of just plain fun)
well, it certanly is a change and not nececarily in a bad way… I personally find that looking at the girl, while she is with her fat brother, makes me notice the girl more, since im trying to ignore the guy… Kind of hard to explain, but i find it works with the story(wich was one of the funnier ones that i have read). All in all a pretty mediocre doujin…
2.8
—–
((5))
your bud
Lolio
Gross.
Actually, every single one of you is like the fat kid here ;) .
@The Truth: You have a VERY wrong impression about lolicon fans. There is nothing that proves that obesity and attraction to this kind of stuff are somehow related. I, for one, may not be the most attractive male around but I’m still FAR from this guy. In fact, I have reasons to believe most people into lolicon (artists and fans alike) are in fact quite handsome guys (and girls, surprisingly).
So, yeah, if you wanted to offend anyone by offering the ‘truth’, you’ve failed.
By the way, this doujin IS gross. Ew.
One of those princesses kisses toad and gets a prince stories.
Fuck off peeps
Im last
btw i got the biggest house in the Atlantic connecting to pacific biatch!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That’s, that’s just silly, the whole thing was just silly. I didn’t like the tricking into sex bit or the fact that the girl’s never even seen a dick apparently but when she gets penetrated, no blood. Just no blood, I wunder if that says anything about her… Nah, then she’d know what he was doing… I guess she must’ve popped her cherry by acident or maybe I’m over analyzing it and the guy’s dick was just that small. But it’s just silly, nothing special or even that interesting, although I nearly stopped reading cause I was laughing so hard at that pathetic scene of the fat bastard jerking off in his room. But oh well.
Ok since some prople cogh cogh coughodgepodge2028… dont seem to know exactly what that bleeding is, heres a litle anatomy lesson for y’all. The bleeding when a girl is having sex is caused by one of two things… an infant geting penetrated (this only includes girls of up to 9 to 10 yrs of age) and the tearing of the skin covering the uterus. If the girl is developed, and has already lost the skin (masterbation??? And i even have a friend that has lost it during sports, do to stranious mouvements… wierd?) then they will not bleed unless u have a razor sharp dick! thanks for listening.
first
LOL! so funny, “what are you doing?” - “dieiting… WANNA HELP! :D”
@ Queero McGayGay
I’ll admit I never knew about the possibilty of tearing with strenious activity, and don’t get me wrong I love to have my mouth thrown back in my face, so I have to give you credit there. I didn’t know about it because I knew a girl who was in her early twenties and she bled on her first time.
However, for masturbation, I don’t believe for a second that the girl in this comic has ever had anything in or around her body considering the fact that she catches him jerking off, he tells her it a work out regimen and she believes him? I can’t speak for anyone else, but when I discovered myself some years ago I didn’t think, “Oh wow, this is all me, I’m so special.” I figured out that girls probably did something too, and being a little pervet used the internet for what it was meant to be used for, learning.
I’m glad I could inspire an intellegent response from someone, I even learned something, I guess it was only a matter of time. However, if I have to say one thing, your (cough cough) “Joke” (cough cough) was completely botched, you used too many and the majority of the “coughs” are spelled wrong. I thought your lung was collapsing and you decided to dictated to us what was happening, but then I realized you were making a joke.
I can take a punch, I’ll admit I hadn’t had the life experience yet to assume that she was an active even though at no point does it suggest that she’s into sports or other “strenious” activities. I can only work with what I’ve got and I have to admit you could be right there.
So, as a closing, gleep gloop bleep bloop, shanti shanti shanti, shalom, and peaceful tides.
hes a oktaku and is known for his obsessions of anime he’s from tokyo and he weighs a metric ton his name fat bastard
Don’t really like the idea of fat dudes doing lolis but meh it had urine in it and its one of my fetishes
First dunjin on this site I hated…
Negative Infinity/Nothing
Edit:
First doujin on this site I hated…
Negative Infinity/Nothing
thing this manga is not call a art
i call this a stupit art
Divertentissimo. XD