An Erotic Story

1. Tero Zetsumei on December 25th, 2008 10:30 am

   wow, no one has commented yet? Well I wont do numbers, but hey Merry Christmas everyone.

2. loki_of_oz on December 25th, 2008 10:56 am

   Merry Christmas, hope u guys got what u wanted if ya get anything, i got a 1887 shot gun :) im happy

3. loki_of_oz on December 25th, 2008 11:05 am

   um ok that was… horrific i cant say the art was bad butdamn -2 for crazy girl -3 for the piss, -1 for the look on the dudes face
   tptal 4/10
   i was expecting more from this artist

4. ill do numbers on December 25th, 2008 11:06 am

   4

5. PervySage on December 25th, 2008 11:15 am

   A bit of a change of pace from the recent lolis and shotas.

   Typical school romance doujin. It was kinda cute to start with. However, to me, it seemed as though it wasn’t transitioned well. Skipped a few pages.

   Art was average. Black strips was okay. They just used one too many black strips, though.

   SCORE 3.5/5

   MORE LOLIS!!!

6. JackP()T on December 25th, 2008 12:23 pm

   wahahahahahaha…. still a new doujin,… weeeeeeeeeeeee.. MERRY CHRISTMAS GUYS!!!!!

7. nanashi on December 25th, 2008 6:04 pm

   merry christmas

8. Kimmi on December 25th, 2008 6:05 pm

   Love it! Keep up the good work guys, and have a very Merry Christmas to all!

9. Randomdude on December 25th, 2008 8:46 pm

   Is it just me or does ’shinji’ the girl look alot like Meiko from the Meiko saga? (you know, the one with ‘a sister’s unusual behavior’, ‘a long awaited thing’ and ‘birthday extortion’

10. wooo close 1 on December 25th, 2008 9:36 pm

    Randomdude i agree with you

11. Hitler on December 25th, 2008 10:15 pm

    THIS IS NOT YAOI. 0/10.

12. ahhh on December 25th, 2008 10:38 pm

    nothing

13. Still Alive on December 25th, 2008 11:57 pm

    recycle characters?

14. Incognito on December 26th, 2008 2:19 am

    ….psycho bitch o.O

15. Renesme123 on December 26th, 2008 2:52 am

    yay another Christmas present sweet!

16. jeniffer on December 26th, 2008 6:41 am

    :) i love it 6/10 :D

17. Merry Christmas(not) on December 26th, 2008 9:31 am

    the guy looks like a fucking retarded guy that pisses on the toliet seat. 1/5

18. wooo close 1 on December 26th, 2008 11:57 am

    crazy bitches are sexy

19. RandomComment on December 26th, 2008 12:13 pm

    Page 12, he says “Eh 1?”

20. Will on December 27th, 2008 1:35 am

    I lol’d at the “eh 1″ thing, it was probably meant to be an exclamation mark though.

21. Merry Christmas on December 30th, 2008 4:13 am

    wow

    *putting in a hidden file folder*

    guess what?

    i got a M249 MINIMI

    beats the crap out of that shotgun

22. joker on December 31st, 2008 3:59 am

    last i knew, an m249 was known as a SAW (Squad Automatic Weapon), not a minimi ^.^

23. Zeff on January 1st, 2009 12:55 pm

    : ) happy new yearrr

24. Senpai on January 2nd, 2009 11:54 am

    dead link……

25. admin on January 2nd, 2009 4:47 pm

    Happens sometimes, reuploaded.

26. ∞ on June 10th, 2009 8:52 am

    I like the ending of this one
    5/5

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