Athletic Error

1. bleachespada on April 5th, 2009 1:50 am

   first finally!!!!

2. yeaaaaa on April 5th, 2009 1:50 am

   im first now bitches

3. danny on April 5th, 2009 1:50 am

   comment box told me i was to fast

4. antialias on April 5th, 2009 1:51 am

   A nice break from the shota/loli here. Funny story and great artwork. 4/5

5. chowking on April 5th, 2009 1:51 am

   4th

6. Tsubasa on April 5th, 2009 1:53 am

   Yamatogawa doujin nice =O
   The fact his the artist makes me wanto read it.
   Anyway ,maybe i will comment a rating later.

7. Tsubasa on April 5th, 2009 1:54 am

   wats with the posting to fast o.O
   and srry for double post

8. Tsubasa on April 5th, 2009 2:10 am

   i liked the story very much , the ending was unexpected but not very intresting. Also the girl made me remember Midori from Tayu-tayu.
   Great art like always , yamatogawa really is the best 5/5 no doubt. For the story 4/5, cause the ending could have been better…

9. Anonymous on April 5th, 2009 4:50 am

   As always awesome 5/5

   lol’d at the Lupin the 3rd reference

10. The Buster on April 5th, 2009 4:56 am

    10th,huh?

11. ZOMG on April 5th, 2009 6:43 am

    lol @ ending. Pretty good doujin!

12. saisgirlfriend on April 5th, 2009 7:45 am

    12th I love the artist!

13. a-grr on April 5th, 2009 10:00 am

    Ah Yamatogawa, a legend. I’ve loved everything that I’ve come across that bares His name.

    Wicked stuff as always, but the story was, well… slightly cliche and not as imaginative as I have come to expect (not that it really mattered to me).

    Besides that, everything else lived up to standard. Yamatogawa’s artwork is among the best ive seen for this ‘genre’. It was cute and sexy, an dam erotic.

    F**k I talk to much. Anway, 5/5 even despite the story, jus cus it’s Yamatogawa!

    ~,< peace

14. Hitler on April 5th, 2009 11:01 am

    not loli?

15. PervySage on April 5th, 2009 2:05 pm

    No lolis? Aaawww.

    Wait, this is Yamatogawa! Well, no complaints here. XD

    Story good. Good transition with a twist at the end. Never expected THAT. DEFINITELY WORTH A READ.

    Art was, well, Yamatogawa. He’s simply the best. Black censor strips was a plus. But I barely noticed them at all.

    SCORE 5/5

    MORE LOLIS!!!

    PS. Lol at the Lupin easter egg. XD

16. loli is sick on April 5th, 2009 3:49 pm

    That was an AWESOME one. 5/5

17. XD on April 5th, 2009 11:11 pm

    damn awesome job keep doin wat your doin dudes 5/5 always a pleasure 2 read doujins from here

18. loli is so sick cuz this was not on April 6th, 2009 12:19 am

    ;

19. lawl on April 6th, 2009 12:58 am

    awesome! more NORMAL PLZ! :D

20. Huh? on April 6th, 2009 4:26 am

    Heyyy where’s loli?? its been too long ald!

21. hellyeah on April 6th, 2009 9:13 am

    loli plz :3

22. Loli! Loli! Loli! on April 6th, 2009 9:21 am

    Oi! Oi! Oi!

    (pls pls pls >.< )

23. kid rawk on April 6th, 2009 9:51 am

    Loli is for chumps. I liked this, though, the ending made me laugh my ass off! Who’d have thunk?

    I don’t know why, but normal just doesn’t do it for me anymore. There just has to be a catch somewhere, you know? Does anyone else feel like that around here?

24. Lolocon = for pedophyle on April 8th, 2009 12:26 pm

    no more lolis more normals

25. avatar on April 12th, 2009 3:39 am

    ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

26. lol on April 16th, 2009 7:59 pm

    lol what these ppl do, stake out the site until a new one comes out, then hurry to comment: “first”?????

    lmao

    cute doujinshi though ^^

27. TARADÃO on April 19th, 2009 10:05 am

    yamatogaya is great!!!
    but is he or she?

28. Anonymous on July 30th, 2009 12:41 am

    Nice >.<
    ∞/5

29. jake400 on November 1st, 2009 4:32 am

    napaurag man iton! ! ! ! !

30. Anonymous on November 1st, 2009 4:36 am

    bisaya ka jake?

31. Incognito on May 11th, 2010 12:29 am

    Wow this is a good one…I like yamatogawa’s art style…

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