The Story was so plain, cliche, and dull, till I got to the ending, what a surprise! It was somewhat worth it.
The Art seemed “so-so” it seemed like they were drawn for paper mario, anime style!
The censors were white out stripes.. on the guy. There wasn’t much views on the girl.
I give this: 3/5
(I think the story saved this doujin from crashing and burning)
-TheBigBoom
P.S Beware of “Molsters”!
loli!!! on
February 22nd, 2009 2:48 am
5555555555555555555555………………FIFTH!!!! Out Of Hell
Anonymous on
February 22nd, 2009 3:11 am
Pwned.
SOMEONE on
February 22nd, 2009 3:13 am
messed up,messed up,messed up need i say more?? messed up,but still good
Lolilover on
February 22nd, 2009 4:00 am
Nice. ASS!
^ on
February 22nd, 2009 6:42 am
Ugh, this isn’t lolicon at all.
Girl’s got tits.
Twerp on
February 22nd, 2009 7:07 am
Lol…
ISKAPO on
February 22nd, 2009 7:30 am
love it love the gurl on this doujin i wish i can fuck him PALO PALO it means in the Philipines Beautiful
Name on
February 22nd, 2009 8:56 am
the ending was sooo obvious
Yotsuba on
February 22nd, 2009 9:46 am
I didn’t really like the story to this one to much. I actually saw the ending coming, which is strange, because train doujin’s rarely end like this one does.
The art was very… well, unique. But it’s not exactly that well made, lets just say. Theres an OK build on character’s, but their faces are a mess, and the backgrounds are light, and almost non-existent. There was a few panels in which the art is OK, but overall, it wasn’t all that good.
For a train story, this one stands out by being a bit different, but it still lacks a bit of creativity. That, mixed with so-so art gives it:
2/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. The bullet train is popular for, well, you-know-what. Or, at least, in doujin’s they are. :D
Frostbyte on
February 22nd, 2009 10:17 am
I enjoyed it . . i never expected the ending at all X_X laughed my ass off but yeah it was good.
12/20 so - so score from me i suppose.
anon on
February 22nd, 2009 12:07 pm
Didn’t like it at all …
the drawing were so-so but the ending made me hate it.
but its better then nothing.
Thanks admin!
Lol on
February 22nd, 2009 1:09 pm
Girl was a bitch.
Anonymous on
February 22nd, 2009 1:14 pm
i liked it all but the last page.. i think i shall delete the last page from my collection..
T5J8F8 on
February 22nd, 2009 2:44 pm
Things went along kinda ploddingly, and damn, those typos! However, the physical climax resonated with me (ah, when bodies move and tense like that), and that ending… jeebus…
I gave it a 4, simply because of those two factors.
Yotsuba on
February 22nd, 2009 4:47 pm
@ Anonymous 2 up,
If the ending wasn’t so… ugh, I probably would have given it a 3/5.
But thats a good fix, just removing the last page, lol!
^.^
Cloud on
February 22nd, 2009 5:39 pm
well, god damn it, that last page ruined it! I was really liking the the Doujin, when BAM! The last page hit like a bullet and my mood instantly changed like a flash of lightning. I gotta say, I agree that the last page should be deleted, or never been printed, damn it!
The story, was decent, but I wasn’t one who saw that end coming, and it totally ruined it for me. I like Doujins to be fantasies, and in no fantasy do I want to be taken to jail for having a BITCH use me.
The art was.. ehh. The white bars were annoying because the pages themselves were so white, making the art really bland to me. And the direction sucked.
Art/translation: Poor. The art was pretty good, but the total translation threw it to the ground and molested it. There was nothing left to be happy about -_-;
Story: SON OF A- It was good, actually. That story saved the whole thing. =3
Total Score: 6/10. Read it to read it. Seriously. xD
Late as always: FurryLover. =3
Buckethead on
February 22nd, 2009 11:37 pm
What a BITCH!
Flamebait on
February 23rd, 2009 1:03 am
Damn, dudes. I’d fucking kill that ho. This story was wrong on so many levels, and it is because of this doujin that I’ll never seek sexual relations on a train. Or any public transportation, for that matter.
Lol on
February 23rd, 2009 1:23 am
Don’t worry. He can study abroad instead. In Japan, with a little bribe, he can do anything.
(shazam!)
Lol on
February 23rd, 2009 1:54 am
Hm, anyway I hope there’s a sequel where both of them reconcile. Or else I’ll have a very bitter memory about this short manga story.
romonechevy2 on
February 23rd, 2009 2:25 am
that fuck up ending that bitch
Lol on
February 23rd, 2009 2:28 am
I hope she gets wrongfully pregnant.
From on
February 23rd, 2009 6:44 am
From my Japanese friends, it’s darn hard to have sex in a jam-packed train. It’s just that Japan is reverse-psychologically fascinated about sexual activities in public transportations.
Besides this, Japan’s legal system is a joke on sex-related petty crimes.
Like Lol said, he can always study in a foreign country.
This story itself is an influence from the grossly exaggerated train fantasy that many Japanese have from the media anyways.
bigboy on
February 24th, 2009 2:01 am
wow i liked the story all the way up until the last page then i was like wtf
Sato on
February 26th, 2009 6:34 pm
What a bitch!!!
heh on
March 7th, 2009 10:52 pm
The Big Boom: It actually is spelled “molesters”. I haven’t read it yet, but the cover looks nice.
Anonymous on
March 26th, 2009 1:17 pm
saw that coming
Anonymous on
May 15th, 2009 12:39 am
I would kill that bitch somehow if that ever happened to me
Na on
July 22nd, 2009 8:53 pm
i would raped that bitch if that ever happen to me
nice looking doujin
Second
hot.
messed up though.
what a bitch
Wow, horrible typos and spelling…
The Story was so plain, cliche, and dull, till I got to the ending, what a surprise! It was somewhat worth it.
The Art seemed “so-so” it seemed like they were drawn for paper mario, anime style!
The censors were white out stripes.. on the guy. There wasn’t much views on the girl.
I give this: 3/5
(I think the story saved this doujin from crashing and burning)
-TheBigBoom
P.S Beware of “Molsters”!
5555555555555555555555………………FIFTH!!!! Out Of Hell
Pwned.
messed up,messed up,messed up need i say more?? messed up,but still good
Nice. ASS!
Ugh, this isn’t lolicon at all.
Girl’s got tits.
Lol…
love it love the gurl on this doujin i wish i can fuck him PALO PALO it means in the Philipines Beautiful
the ending was sooo obvious
I didn’t really like the story to this one to much. I actually saw the ending coming, which is strange, because train doujin’s rarely end like this one does.
The art was very… well, unique. But it’s not exactly that well made, lets just say. Theres an OK build on character’s, but their faces are a mess, and the backgrounds are light, and almost non-existent. There was a few panels in which the art is OK, but overall, it wasn’t all that good.
For a train story, this one stands out by being a bit different, but it still lacks a bit of creativity. That, mixed with so-so art gives it:
2/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. The bullet train is popular for, well, you-know-what. Or, at least, in doujin’s they are. :D
I enjoyed it . . i never expected the ending at all X_X laughed my ass off but yeah it was good.
12/20 so - so score from me i suppose.
Didn’t like it at all …
the drawing were so-so but the ending made me hate it.
but its better then nothing.
Thanks admin!
Girl was a bitch.
i liked it all but the last page.. i think i shall delete the last page from my collection..
Things went along kinda ploddingly, and damn, those typos! However, the physical climax resonated with me (ah, when bodies move and tense like that), and that ending… jeebus…
I gave it a 4, simply because of those two factors.
@ Anonymous 2 up,
If the ending wasn’t so… ugh, I probably would have given it a 3/5.
But thats a good fix, just removing the last page, lol!
^.^
well, god damn it, that last page ruined it! I was really liking the the Doujin, when BAM! The last page hit like a bullet and my mood instantly changed like a flash of lightning. I gotta say, I agree that the last page should be deleted, or never been printed, damn it!
The story, was decent, but I wasn’t one who saw that end coming, and it totally ruined it for me. I like Doujins to be fantasies, and in no fantasy do I want to be taken to jail for having a BITCH use me.
The art was.. ehh. The white bars were annoying because the pages themselves were so white, making the art really bland to me. And the direction sucked.
Anything else: How was that Loli? I don’t agree..
Score:
1.5/5
-Cloud
Chose the wrong category, its normal now.
This story was funny! What a nice ending.
P.S. Moar loli plz :D
Hate that bitch.
Am i the only one here who liked the ending? i thought it was hilarious. she get’s a good screw, and bumps off competition, it’s perfect!
I hard to believe no one would notice, is people that blind?? lol
bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,bitch,
Son of a bitch!
I’m like, “Okay, okay. Yeah, okay. Sure. WAIT WHAT!?” O_o;;
Fucking son of a . . . -_-;;
Okay:
Art/translation: Poor. The art was pretty good, but the total translation threw it to the ground and molested it. There was nothing left to be happy about -_-;
Story: SON OF A- It was good, actually. That story saved the whole thing. =3
Total Score: 6/10. Read it to read it. Seriously. xD
Late as always: FurryLover. =3
What a BITCH!
Damn, dudes. I’d fucking kill that ho. This story was wrong on so many levels, and it is because of this doujin that I’ll never seek sexual relations on a train. Or any public transportation, for that matter.
Don’t worry. He can study abroad instead. In Japan, with a little bribe, he can do anything.
(shazam!)
Hm, anyway I hope there’s a sequel where both of them reconcile. Or else I’ll have a very bitter memory about this short manga story.
that fuck up ending that bitch
I hope she gets wrongfully pregnant.
From my Japanese friends, it’s darn hard to have sex in a jam-packed train. It’s just that Japan is reverse-psychologically fascinated about sexual activities in public transportations.
Besides this, Japan’s legal system is a joke on sex-related petty crimes.
Like Lol said, he can always study in a foreign country.
This story itself is an influence from the grossly exaggerated train fantasy that many Japanese have from the media anyways.
wow i liked the story all the way up until the last page then i was like wtf
What a bitch!!!
The Big Boom: It actually is spelled “molesters”. I haven’t read it yet, but the cover looks nice.
saw that coming
I would kill that bitch somehow if that ever happened to me
i would raped that bitch if that ever happen to me
Nice lol
rape it and leave it
What a bitch.
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