but it was good
srry 4got 2 say that
ty resonance <<< cool name
Deedark on
July 1st, 2009 6:08 am
So sweet this ending! 5/5
@ 5: About the picture in page 9, 2cats? major turn down (esp for a dogs person), hehe
boobfreak( . )( . ) on
July 1st, 2009 6:14 am
finally something worth comenting.ive waited long…to long. anyway nice art and story with a strange haircut.
Reaper on
July 1st, 2009 6:16 am
Really great 5/5 loved the ending
RandomComment on
July 1st, 2009 6:26 am
Another Yagami that wants to be God…
LOVED THE ENDING! I’M NOT A CRYBABY.
Shame on
July 1st, 2009 6:41 am
Great art but sad ending is sad ;_;
iris on
July 1st, 2009 6:57 am
i have to say that this has one of the best doujins i have read
5/5 with a brilliant ending
Dark Hayate on
July 1st, 2009 9:20 am
great ending…….*sniff* ………hope he can come up with an idea to let her see again…. hes a smart guy after all…..
Stranger on
July 1st, 2009 10:13 am
at first, i thought this one was going to be a bad read. the transition was great. poor guy though. sad ending..
anyway. fap value was there, nice art (except for the guys hair), and nice story. 5/5
Shadow on
July 1st, 2009 10:22 am
I didn’t fap on this one. Rather, I just read it instead. What a nice story. Q:-) 5/5
Day Breaker on
July 1st, 2009 10:27 am
Was that a hair? Or a hat?
ugh on
July 1st, 2009 11:53 am
why are there so many in the shower/bath these days
needs more father+daughter
The Truth. on
July 1st, 2009 12:01 pm
Did he cum in his own hair :| ?
The Truth. on
July 1st, 2009 12:06 pm
Dis was too weird for me to feel sad @ the end :/ …
Huh? on
July 1st, 2009 12:15 pm
Damn good, a normal material worth a read.
Anonymous on
July 1st, 2009 1:11 pm
Aww…So sad…
FoolFan on
July 1st, 2009 5:04 pm
nice one, at first i thought it was gonna be bad because i judged the dude with the wacky hair style too fast, but all it was was a wacky hair style all else good haha
napalm on
July 1st, 2009 5:10 pm
i liked it ^-^
Frosty on
July 1st, 2009 5:16 pm
Damn it admin. . i don’t need story’s like this right now ;__;
Chris Redfield on
July 1st, 2009 5:47 pm
wat an emotional ending :(
r (rurouni) on
July 1st, 2009 6:26 pm
truthully this really surprised me this an extremly sweet story so i was very surprised but in a very good way
r (rurouni) on
July 1st, 2009 6:28 pm
oh also looking at these comments i think everyone feels the same way but this was sad
Arbalesto on
July 1st, 2009 6:40 pm
Beautiful ç.ç
Damn on
July 1st, 2009 6:47 pm
awww…. well twas nice
Dough's Nuts on
July 1st, 2009 9:03 pm
I thought she had an STD at the end. Lol. And at the beginning he didn’t even touch himself he looked at his penis and it came out of fear.
Mattmakai on
July 1st, 2009 11:08 pm
I was moved :(
Hana-chan on
July 1st, 2009 11:35 pm
I…I cried. DX
SamHax on
July 1st, 2009 11:44 pm
i cant fap to this shit! the history is way to good for a 18 page doujin. man! the ending made me bawww ;_;
Anonymous on
July 2nd, 2009 1:19 am
Oh come the fuck on.
First, the guy looks like a gigantic mushroom. I thought it will get in the way in the sex scenes, but it didn’t… because there were like three fucking pages of sex in it all. Three pages. In a doujin. It wasn’t even all that good sex.
That would be excusable if the author focused on the story. But that was a fucking airport paperback. And the way blindness thing appeared was just retarded. “OOOPS SHE WENT BLIND LOL”. What the fuck? It was so sudden and deusexmachina that it was almost hilarious.
Anonymous on
July 2nd, 2009 1:56 am
Anonymous above me is correct.
kona on
July 2nd, 2009 1:58 am
im pretty pissed about the ending. i liked the story more than the hentai itself, not to mention that the girl has the same hair as Haruko from FLCL. That was a plus!^-^
I liek loli on
July 2nd, 2009 2:16 am
I don’t know why but that eyepatch thingie was really hot.
Sacheleo on
July 2nd, 2009 2:54 am
Very good read. Cute, sad, ending. Hope that a sequel comes out with the genius finding an antidote or something.
Anonymous on
July 2nd, 2009 3:02 am
Bro…
Baww.
Anonymous on
July 2nd, 2009 8:51 am
Anonymous:
*
Oh come the fuck on.
First, the guy looks like a gigantic mushroom. I thought it will get in the way in the sex scenes, but it didn’t… because there were like three fucking pages of sex in it all. Three pages. In a doujin. It wasn’t even all that good sex.
That would be excusable if the author focused on the story. But that was a fucking airport paperback. And the way blindness thing appeared was just retarded. “OOOPS SHE WENT BLIND LOL”. What the fuck? It was so sudden and deusexmachina that it was almost hilarious.
*
It was because she already knew that she was going to be blind because it was a degenerative sickness. She already could not see from the eye with the eyepatch.
KinkoMan on
July 2nd, 2009 12:04 pm
this has got to be the first doujin to make me feel bad when im jerking off to it. good story. its really dramatic in a romance way. 10/5
Dick on
July 2nd, 2009 1:31 pm
Go suck on dicks, dipshits. if u dont like this doujin, GTFO.
zzzzzzzz on
July 2nd, 2009 1:49 pm
perves need a nice story every now and then.
too right on
July 2nd, 2009 4:26 pm
all i can say is “awwwwwwwwww that was too cute”
Requester on
July 3rd, 2009 12:32 am
Cum ON HIS HAIR!!!
Requester on
July 3rd, 2009 12:41 am
NOT GOOD! SHE GOT BLIND AND THAT IS EITHER A GOOD AND BAD ENDING! THE GOOD THING IS SHE HAVE A (future) HUSBAND AND THE BAD THING IS, THE BABY WILL HAVE A GREATER POSSIBILITY BLIND LIKE HIS or HER MOM!
Sacheleo on
July 3rd, 2009 1:15 am
ARENT CAPS COOLIO?!?!?!?!
Mss_Sundai on
July 3rd, 2009 2:09 am
the boy hairstyle is weird…..
Twerp on
July 3rd, 2009 12:10 pm
nice~ but the ending kinda romantic yet sad… T_T
Yuri Fan on
July 3rd, 2009 5:38 pm
Story: ∞/5
Hentai: 1/5
m on
July 4th, 2009 1:54 am
its so friggin sad,awesome story.
R.B. on
July 4th, 2009 6:53 am
step 1: get creeped out by strange Haircut.
step 2: become interested in eyepatch chick
step 3: cry my eyes out over ending.
im a real sucker for sad storys *cry* even if they have raging hot sexual encounters *sob* in between! *sniff*. WHAAAAAA!
Anonymous on
July 4th, 2009 11:52 am
it was a beautiful ending with a great storyline only a handful of doujins are this good
5/5
Ze Fatman on
July 5th, 2009 6:53 am
Now, now, it was a good story, its not very often in a doujin to actually have an interesting story of how opposites attract. The incredibly smart guy who has a future and will have it all (at age 30) meets a semi-popular runaway that wants to spend her last few days of sight on something she wanted to treasure. I also agree with *Dick* “if u dont like this doujin, GTFO” I dare anyone to show a story that got an 11/10 that didn’t go straight for the sex
Admin keep the good stories coming, but please don’t whip out sad story after sad story, find one with a “to be continued…” kind a thing. THX!!!
Bottom line story 11/10
mecegirl on
July 7th, 2009 2:58 pm
If it were only a bit longer the ending was great but it the story was too rushed. *Sigh* It had so much potential.
ProjectX on
July 8th, 2009 9:00 am
I QQ’d that was SUCH a touching story my eyes watered up at the ending…this was such a good story~ MUST NOT CRYYY
MUST NOT-
bawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ;_;
Blitx on
July 29th, 2009 4:07 pm
woah.. great storyline. damn tragic. 20/10
Izu on
August 21st, 2009 1:29 am
BAWWWW. ; A;
Wts, the ending was really fucking sudden.
I thought the eyepatch was just for kicks.
But still. BAWWWWWWWWWWW. I wept like a friggin’ baby.
Not much hentai going on in this doujin, though.
But, in my opinion, the story makes up for it.
..But honestly, that guy needs a better haircut. I just can’t take him seriously.
Cute story 11/10. Would be better if it had an epilogue to it or something.
And the sex scenes could’ve had moar depth. But overall, awesome doujin.
<33
/rant.
Shadows on
August 23rd, 2009 2:21 pm
It’s not that i didn’t like it, i thought it was great. But has anyone noticed the pattern to the sadder doujins? I guess blindness is good material for the tragic stuff…
Mexican on
August 24th, 2009 12:16 am
Wow, this is the first real sex-love story i´ve read, still sad ending.
Analytical on
August 30th, 2009 5:45 pm
It’s kind of disjointed. Good art and funny main character, but plot was a bi t jumpy.
Sandaan on
September 12th, 2009 8:57 pm
Aww the ending is sad. I would like to see more mangas like this
YES 1st!
the babe look so HOT
Great Ending
∞/5
THIRD
the picture on the wall in page 9 is creepy
great ending 5/5 i love it :D
wow this made me sad
but it was good
srry 4got 2 say that
ty resonance <<< cool name
So sweet this ending! 5/5
@ 5: About the picture in page 9, 2cats? major turn down (esp for a dogs person), hehe
finally something worth comenting.ive waited long…to long. anyway nice art and story with a strange haircut.
Really great 5/5 loved the ending
Another Yagami that wants to be God…
LOVED THE ENDING! I’M NOT A CRYBABY.
Great art but sad ending is sad ;_;
i have to say that this has one of the best doujins i have read
5/5 with a brilliant ending
great ending…….*sniff* ………hope he can come up with an idea to let her see again…. hes a smart guy after all…..
at first, i thought this one was going to be a bad read. the transition was great. poor guy though. sad ending..
anyway. fap value was there, nice art (except for the guys hair), and nice story. 5/5
I didn’t fap on this one. Rather, I just read it instead. What a nice story. Q:-) 5/5
Was that a hair? Or a hat?
why are there so many in the shower/bath these days
needs more father+daughter
Did he cum in his own hair :| ?
Dis was too weird for me to feel sad @ the end :/ …
Damn good, a normal material worth a read.
Aww…So sad…
nice one, at first i thought it was gonna be bad because i judged the dude with the wacky hair style too fast, but all it was was a wacky hair style all else good haha
i liked it ^-^
Damn it admin. . i don’t need story’s like this right now ;__;
wat an emotional ending :(
truthully this really surprised me this an extremly sweet story so i was very surprised but in a very good way
oh also looking at these comments i think everyone feels the same way but this was sad
Beautiful ç.ç
awww…. well twas nice
I thought she had an STD at the end. Lol. And at the beginning he didn’t even touch himself he looked at his penis and it came out of fear.
I was moved :(
I…I cried. DX
i cant fap to this shit! the history is way to good for a 18 page doujin. man! the ending made me bawww ;_;
Oh come the fuck on.
First, the guy looks like a gigantic mushroom. I thought it will get in the way in the sex scenes, but it didn’t… because there were like three fucking pages of sex in it all. Three pages. In a doujin. It wasn’t even all that good sex.
That would be excusable if the author focused on the story. But that was a fucking airport paperback. And the way blindness thing appeared was just retarded. “OOOPS SHE WENT BLIND LOL”. What the fuck? It was so sudden and deusexmachina that it was almost hilarious.
Anonymous above me is correct.
im pretty pissed about the ending. i liked the story more than the hentai itself, not to mention that the girl has the same hair as Haruko from FLCL. That was a plus!^-^
I don’t know why but that eyepatch thingie was really hot.
Very good read. Cute, sad, ending. Hope that a sequel comes out with the genius finding an antidote or something.
Bro…
Baww.
Anonymous:
*
Oh come the fuck on.
First, the guy looks like a gigantic mushroom. I thought it will get in the way in the sex scenes, but it didn’t… because there were like three fucking pages of sex in it all. Three pages. In a doujin. It wasn’t even all that good sex.
That would be excusable if the author focused on the story. But that was a fucking airport paperback. And the way blindness thing appeared was just retarded. “OOOPS SHE WENT BLIND LOL”. What the fuck? It was so sudden and deusexmachina that it was almost hilarious.
*
It was because she already knew that she was going to be blind because it was a degenerative sickness. She already could not see from the eye with the eyepatch.
this has got to be the first doujin to make me feel bad when im jerking off to it. good story. its really dramatic in a romance way. 10/5
Go suck on dicks, dipshits. if u dont like this doujin, GTFO.
perves need a nice story every now and then.
all i can say is “awwwwwwwwww that was too cute”
Cum ON HIS HAIR!!!
NOT GOOD! SHE GOT BLIND AND THAT IS EITHER A GOOD AND BAD ENDING! THE GOOD THING IS SHE HAVE A (future) HUSBAND AND THE BAD THING IS, THE BABY WILL HAVE A GREATER POSSIBILITY BLIND LIKE HIS or HER MOM!
ARENT CAPS COOLIO?!?!?!?!
the boy hairstyle is weird…..
nice~ but the ending kinda romantic yet sad… T_T
Story: ∞/5
Hentai: 1/5
its so friggin sad,awesome story.
step 1: get creeped out by strange Haircut.
step 2: become interested in eyepatch chick
step 3: cry my eyes out over ending.
im a real sucker for sad storys *cry* even if they have raging hot sexual encounters *sob* in between! *sniff*. WHAAAAAA!
it was a beautiful ending with a great storyline only a handful of doujins are this good
5/5
Now, now, it was a good story, its not very often in a doujin to actually have an interesting story of how opposites attract. The incredibly smart guy who has a future and will have it all (at age 30) meets a semi-popular runaway that wants to spend her last few days of sight on something she wanted to treasure. I also agree with *Dick* “if u dont like this doujin, GTFO” I dare anyone to show a story that got an 11/10 that didn’t go straight for the sex
Admin keep the good stories coming, but please don’t whip out sad story after sad story, find one with a “to be continued…” kind a thing. THX!!!
Bottom line story 11/10
If it were only a bit longer the ending was great but it the story was too rushed. *Sigh* It had so much potential.
I QQ’d that was SUCH a touching story my eyes watered up at the ending…this was such a good story~ MUST NOT CRYYY
MUST NOT-
bawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ;_;
woah.. great storyline. damn tragic. 20/10
BAWWWW. ; A;
Wts, the ending was really fucking sudden.
I thought the eyepatch was just for kicks.
But still. BAWWWWWWWWWWW. I wept like a friggin’ baby.
Not much hentai going on in this doujin, though.
But, in my opinion, the story makes up for it.
..But honestly, that guy needs a better haircut. I just can’t take him seriously.
Cute story 11/10. Would be better if it had an epilogue to it or something.
And the sex scenes could’ve had moar depth. But overall, awesome doujin.
<33
/rant.
It’s not that i didn’t like it, i thought it was great. But has anyone noticed the pattern to the sadder doujins? I guess blindness is good material for the tragic stuff…
Wow, this is the first real sex-love story i´ve read, still sad ending.
It’s kind of disjointed. Good art and funny main character, but plot was a bi t jumpy.
Aww the ending is sad. I would like to see more mangas like this