maybe if we’re luck noone will put more numbers but i highly doubt it. Liked it btw
CaptTan on
January 29th, 2009 5:43 am
lol wished i had a gf like dat 3/5
Zake on
January 29th, 2009 6:12 am
the guy below me is a retard
Yotsuba on
January 29th, 2009 7:06 am
LOLOLOLOL!!!! “Say, ‘I want your penis, nya!’”
I have to say, for a normal doujin, this one was just… just so… perfect!
The art, man. Its just so messy yet detailed. Static, yet flowing. The character design was top-notch, and the overall detail was spot-on! You couldn’t ask for a better turn on for me.
The story was just sweet. There was plenty of cute moments mixed with just the right amount of humor and sexuality. It was almost like watching an almost modern romantic hentai, maybe early century kind of thing.
The was the sex starts is great, and it leads from the story very well. The way the newlywed wife finds the adult videos was a little weird (I wouldn’t hide stuff like that under my couch, lol).
Besides all that, the censors were minimal (black lines), so its a great package.
It was cute, sexy, funny, romantic, artistic, and did I mention cute?
5/5
-Yotsuba
P.S. I wish cats really said “Nya!”, is soooooo cute!!!!!
Twerp on
January 29th, 2009 7:11 am
Aww…. Im 6th
The person below me also a retard =.=”
exactly on
January 29th, 2009 8:41 am
dwikz and twerp congrats you two are the FIRST and Sixth to suck my dick tonight.Sorry guys they asked first.So drink up and remember your sucking a retards dick.
hentaifollower on
January 29th, 2009 9:16 am
Eighth Please no homo….. and no suck dick… Futa is okay… no yaoi… iyekss…
What? on
January 29th, 2009 9:17 am
No more easyshare? Is it just this time, didnt get to it, or from now on no more?
download busy hater on
January 29th, 2009 10:21 am
yes!!!
im number 10!!
tq admin
Dark Matter on
January 29th, 2009 10:43 am
Hey admin…..
How exactly do you…..
Get all your doujins….
Does like….Somebody give them to you…..
Or what…..i’ve always wondered that……
Cloud on
January 29th, 2009 12:48 pm
the story was fun!
The story was very nice, with the smooth transitions from each panel you can tell it is nicely made. The Doujin is humorous, sweet, and playful, great combination.
The art was nicely done, you can see many different character emotions throughout the Doujin and it made it fun to read. Multiple black censor bars would usually be bad, but they were very small and unnoticeable for the most part. But the censors weren’t so bad because of the one thing this Doujin lacked, the straight up sex. The direction (camera position) was not the best, and much of what you wanted to see was out of the picture for most of the Doujin, either behind clothes or just not in the scene. Plus at times I thought the girl looked a bit fat.
Anything else?: It was a fun story to read! And it got very interesting, but the Doujin was lacking in areas.
Score:
3.5/5
Snowman on
January 29th, 2009 1:08 pm
do we really need people to critique doujin? i just crack up when i read your little “reviews” (bad speller). doujin critics? haha
i really thought this was good
Dark Matter on
January 29th, 2009 1:22 pm
Hey….Snowman…….
The point of…..people criticizing these….
is so that others……don’t waste their time……
with a bad download…..and…….by you posting your comment……
you are no……beter than other critics…..on this site….
airgo……hypocrite…..you…
DOUCHE….
WTF????? on
January 29th, 2009 2:35 pm
WTF just happened to the net? imagefap is down, hentairules got problems, your easyshare link is down, fantasti is down, what the fuck?
did the chinese own the net or what?
RandomComment on
January 29th, 2009 3:07 pm
@Dark Matter- All those periods are really annoying.
Snowman on
January 29th, 2009 3:41 pm
i look at commets that say “i like this” : ] i just think its funny
just cant get over how good this one is
P.Snake on
January 29th, 2009 5:21 pm
I hope your posting some shotas soon. although this one looks not bad. ^^
Easyshare didn’t work but it should be up soon. Press the star to rate the doujin.
Unsigned on
January 29th, 2009 10:10 pm
I’m gonna say the art was good. Only that turned my down was the need to put so many things to one girl, ie: swimsuit, neko, glasses. The glasses kinda ruined it for me.
I gave 4/5
Dark Matter on
January 29th, 2009 10:51 pm
The periods……express my inner…….darkness…
or something like that…….too bad……..
but i recommend……..just ignoring me………
i wish……..we didnt argue…..
on such a peacefull…. site
FurryLover on
January 29th, 2009 11:40 pm
Awwh~! n///n I agree with Yotsuba on this one. Nyaa is so cute~!
The artwork on this one was amazing~ So much happening, but the artist didn’t succumb to “badly drawn too much action itis” xD I loved the art~
And the story was pretty cool~ I’ve never been one for swimsuit stuffs, unless it’s in a pool setting, but I kinda liked it~!
Total Score: 9.5/10~ Amazing story, I’d read it more than once definitely~!
all smiles on
January 30th, 2009 1:06 am
dark matter I think your sexy! :D the periods are sexy! Wwwooo ness may you all fap peacefully this night
Yotsuba on
January 30th, 2009 3:08 am
@Cloud
I’m actually a bit surprised at you! You always are the first to complain is someones boobs or penis is too big, or exaggerated, but because she’s a little chunky, thats a negative? I thought you liked more realism…
And at people asking about “how do you rate doujin’s?” or “Why bother rating them?”
Its a kind of hobby to me. When I was in college (and even when I was little) I collected manga, buying with my small allowance I would save up. After I moved here to the U.S. I started collecting English translated manga.
Now that I’m a translator, I’ve always had a knack with manga, doujin, hentai, and anime. But not as a sexual thing, but as a hobby. I like critiquing them.
It might be a little childish, but it’s one of the things I can still hold on to from childhood.
I just now realized that I typed way too much, ha!
-Yotsuba
P.S. I wasn’t lying, I am a translator! My high school had a English Course, and I liked it so much that I majored English in College. It was either being a teacher, or translator, and I wanted to move to the U.S.
^^
Mr.Nameless on
January 30th, 2009 3:37 am
Its was perfect doujin ever read,yes,and had some moments that neednt to fall to much to what I call ”girlfriend and boyfriend”,they could be more straight to it,but like that way,it is like takin a paper out of the candy to eat ^^
InternetRule#30 on
January 30th, 2009 8:29 pm
Not bad really. I like that she wasn’t horribly thin and I actouly kinda liked the art
8/10
–rulebreaker
Anonymous on
February 1st, 2009 4:08 am
The zipfile contains malware
OneNote Table Of Contents.onetoc2
voncho1 on
February 2nd, 2009 1:14 pm
i like porn…….. oh yeah for me porn= hentai ,sex and bliss………
Anonymous on
February 3rd, 2009 9:12 pm
lol! sorry I just had to respond
@ Yotsuba
I loled so much, I mean you go on to say that I am the first to complain about if boobs or penis are too big, yet you were surprised I would say that about a body being too big… wheres the logic in that?
And just to be clear she was hot, I said ‘at times’ she looked a bit fat. For example, on page 9…
and ps: when have I ever talk about penis being to big?..
-Cloud
Anonymous on
February 4th, 2009 6:40 am
Everyone likes boobs etc diff size =/
kantutero on
February 4th, 2009 9:28 am
fuck you sex tayu payag ka ba!!
Satan on
February 7th, 2009 1:16 pm
Hey Admin, I hope you get money for this because you sure seem to put a lot of time into it. You can always sell your soul to me…
∞ on
June 10th, 2009 9:07 am
I agree with the guy above me til he started acting stupid…
5/5
MoE-_-MoE on
June 16th, 2010 3:25 am
>.< Hii PeØPle lol u guys complain to much
ChikanConductor on
June 21st, 2010 11:09 am
@yotsuba
Even though your comment was from a while ago, I share your sentiments, bro.
And man, I wish I had gone to your high school.
hentailover on
August 20th, 2010 7:37 pm
Wow the two things that really turn me on together in a single doujin. Glasses and cat ears. Im a sucker for those. @_@ =( ^.^ )=
first !!!!!!!!
maybe if we’re luck noone will put more numbers but i highly doubt it. Liked it btw
lol wished i had a gf like dat 3/5
the guy below me is a retard
LOLOLOLOL!!!! “Say, ‘I want your penis, nya!’”
I have to say, for a normal doujin, this one was just… just so… perfect!
The art, man. Its just so messy yet detailed. Static, yet flowing. The character design was top-notch, and the overall detail was spot-on! You couldn’t ask for a better turn on for me.
The story was just sweet. There was plenty of cute moments mixed with just the right amount of humor and sexuality. It was almost like watching an almost modern romantic hentai, maybe early century kind of thing.
The was the sex starts is great, and it leads from the story very well. The way the newlywed wife finds the adult videos was a little weird (I wouldn’t hide stuff like that under my couch, lol).
Besides all that, the censors were minimal (black lines), so its a great package.
It was cute, sexy, funny, romantic, artistic, and did I mention cute?
5/5
-Yotsuba
P.S. I wish cats really said “Nya!”, is soooooo cute!!!!!
Aww…. Im 6th
The person below me also a retard =.=”
dwikz and twerp congrats you two are the FIRST and Sixth to suck my dick tonight.Sorry guys they asked first.So drink up and remember your sucking a retards dick.
Eighth Please no homo….. and no suck dick… Futa is okay… no yaoi… iyekss…
No more easyshare? Is it just this time, didnt get to it, or from now on no more?
yes!!!
im number 10!!
tq admin
Hey admin…..
How exactly do you…..
Get all your doujins….
Does like….Somebody give them to you…..
Or what…..i’ve always wondered that……
the story was fun!
The story was very nice, with the smooth transitions from each panel you can tell it is nicely made. The Doujin is humorous, sweet, and playful, great combination.
The art was nicely done, you can see many different character emotions throughout the Doujin and it made it fun to read. Multiple black censor bars would usually be bad, but they were very small and unnoticeable for the most part. But the censors weren’t so bad because of the one thing this Doujin lacked, the straight up sex. The direction (camera position) was not the best, and much of what you wanted to see was out of the picture for most of the Doujin, either behind clothes or just not in the scene. Plus at times I thought the girl looked a bit fat.
Anything else?: It was a fun story to read! And it got very interesting, but the Doujin was lacking in areas.
Score:
3.5/5
do we really need people to critique doujin? i just crack up when i read your little “reviews” (bad speller). doujin critics? haha
i really thought this was good
Hey….Snowman…….
The point of…..people criticizing these….
is so that others……don’t waste their time……
with a bad download…..and…….by you posting your comment……
you are no……beter than other critics…..on this site….
airgo……hypocrite…..you…
DOUCHE….
WTF just happened to the net? imagefap is down, hentairules got problems, your easyshare link is down, fantasti is down, what the fuck?
did the chinese own the net or what?
@Dark Matter- All those periods are really annoying.
i look at commets that say “i like this” : ] i just think its funny
just cant get over how good this one is
I hope your posting some shotas soon. although this one looks not bad. ^^
how do u rate doujins
Easyshare didn’t work but it should be up soon. Press the star to rate the doujin.
I’m gonna say the art was good. Only that turned my down was the need to put so many things to one girl, ie: swimsuit, neko, glasses. The glasses kinda ruined it for me.
I gave 4/5
The periods……express my inner…….darkness…
or something like that…….too bad……..
but i recommend……..just ignoring me………
i wish……..we didnt argue…..
on such a peacefull…. site
Awwh~! n///n I agree with Yotsuba on this one. Nyaa is so cute~!
The artwork on this one was amazing~ So much happening, but the artist didn’t succumb to “badly drawn too much action itis” xD I loved the art~
And the story was pretty cool~ I’ve never been one for swimsuit stuffs, unless it’s in a pool setting, but I kinda liked it~!
Total Score: 9.5/10~ Amazing story, I’d read it more than once definitely~!
dark matter I think your sexy! :D the periods are sexy! Wwwooo ness may you all fap peacefully this night
@Cloud
I’m actually a bit surprised at you! You always are the first to complain is someones boobs or penis is too big, or exaggerated, but because she’s a little chunky, thats a negative? I thought you liked more realism…
And at people asking about “how do you rate doujin’s?” or “Why bother rating them?”
Its a kind of hobby to me. When I was in college (and even when I was little) I collected manga, buying with my small allowance I would save up. After I moved here to the U.S. I started collecting English translated manga.
Now that I’m a translator, I’ve always had a knack with manga, doujin, hentai, and anime. But not as a sexual thing, but as a hobby. I like critiquing them.
It might be a little childish, but it’s one of the things I can still hold on to from childhood.
I just now realized that I typed way too much, ha!
-Yotsuba
P.S. I wasn’t lying, I am a translator! My high school had a English Course, and I liked it so much that I majored English in College. It was either being a teacher, or translator, and I wanted to move to the U.S.
^^
Its was perfect doujin ever read,yes,and had some moments that neednt to fall to much to what I call ”girlfriend and boyfriend”,they could be more straight to it,but like that way,it is like takin a paper out of the candy to eat ^^
Not bad really. I like that she wasn’t horribly thin and I actouly kinda liked the art
8/10
–rulebreaker
The zipfile contains malware
OneNote Table Of Contents.onetoc2
i like porn…….. oh yeah for me porn= hentai ,sex and bliss………
lol! sorry I just had to respond
@ Yotsuba
I loled so much, I mean you go on to say that I am the first to complain about if boobs or penis are too big, yet you were surprised I would say that about a body being too big… wheres the logic in that?
And just to be clear she was hot, I said ‘at times’ she looked a bit fat. For example, on page 9…
and ps: when have I ever talk about penis being to big?..
-Cloud
Everyone likes boobs etc diff size =/
fuck you sex tayu payag ka ba!!
Hey Admin, I hope you get money for this because you sure seem to put a lot of time into it. You can always sell your soul to me…
I agree with the guy above me til he started acting stupid…
5/5
>.< Hii PeØPle lol u guys complain to much
@yotsuba
Even though your comment was from a while ago, I share your sentiments, bro.
And man, I wish I had gone to your high school.
Wow the two things that really turn me on together in a single doujin. Glasses and cat ears. Im a sucker for those. @_@ =( ^.^ )=