this was actually kinda funny but i dont understand the name D:
I love LOLIS on
February 4th, 2009 3:07 am
Please admin…. Lots of LOLI!!!!! PLEASE! I love LOLIS!!!!
TheBigBoom on
February 4th, 2009 3:47 am
Wow, the beginning of the story I was really lost/confused, but as I read along it pretty much straighten out. That Mistress of his is really slutty, and I’m not into the whole “cheating” scene, so that was a turn off. Did I mention she’s a real slut?
Art was good, of course it’s from the artist who made one of my favourite Naruto Doujin. The sex scene is what you expect from a “cheating” scene.
I know in a lot of reviews they comment of the censoreship so I guess I’ll do the same. The censorship pretty much covers EVERYTHING with white out. if you were a little kid who didn’t know how to read, you would think this guy’s missing his penis.
I give this: 3/5
(would be 4/5, but 1 point off cause of “cheating slut”)
Remember the name suckas!
-TheBigBoom
Yotsuba on
February 4th, 2009 4:06 am
I’m actually surprised about how bland this doujin is. I mean honestly, the story was OK at best, with the Art being just plain bad. While it has a good length, and some character set up, it all crashed down, not with a bang, but with a whimper.
First, the Art.
Let me just say this now. The character designs were terrible. While the overall quality is OK, the face and body designs are just plain sloppy and unimaginative. Proper detail was not given to movement, and the environment design was just regular, nothing special.
Next, the Plot.
It’s your average cheating wife with best-friend story. Absolutely nothing to separate it from the hundreds of other doujin’s like it. I mean, i can barely come up with stuff to say about it because it was so bland. Not much humor, either, which is sad, because it could have saved the story.
Not only that, but the censors were (pardon my language) just plain ass. With the penis not having an outline, and the vagina being filled in with white (pun intended).
Overall, just bad. Bad art, bad story, wait no, not even a bad story. There is nothing appealing about this doujin. End of story.
Art: 2/5
Story: 1/5
Overall Score: 2/5
-Yotsuba ^^
P.S. Honey Bitch? And the translator in off quite a bit in this one, and is lazy at times, not translating sound effects.
need a dispenser here on
February 4th, 2009 5:18 am
I really hate cheating wives storys, its making me fucking damn angry
haha on
February 4th, 2009 5:26 am
yup piss me off 2
Go Die on
February 4th, 2009 6:33 am
Yotsuba, WE DONT CARE.
Hentai Pastor on
February 4th, 2009 8:04 am
I bless to who comment below me with henati master ability….
1. Cheat other wife without any hardship
2. More loli will love him
3. Have a truly man power at any place
4. Be hentai for the whole life
…
Amen…
noxusrules on
February 4th, 2009 9:05 am
The best artist!!!
dude101 on
February 4th, 2009 11:35 am
more loli plz
Anonymous on
February 4th, 2009 2:47 pm
Want To Buy PervySage back!
Yotsuba man.. (or girl?).. I don’t know what to say.
I didn’t like this, mostly cuz the story like some other people said above me, pissed me off.
The story was ehh, but I don’t care for cheating stories, it isn’t a top ranking fantasy of mine.. It didn’t flow very well either.
The art was ok, I like this art at times, but with the story and the horrible *WHITE OUT* censoring it was too much.
Anything else?: *WHITE OUT* censoring.. and a cheating story. Hey if you like go right on ahead, but it wasn’t anything special
Score:
2/5
-Cloud
Cloud on
February 4th, 2009 2:48 pm
sorry.. the person above me is me. FOr some reason my name went away.
-Cloud
Dark Matter on
February 4th, 2009 4:40 pm
It happens….
I’ve decided, to end “….”
…..
or just minimize it
RandomComment on
February 4th, 2009 5:44 pm
Hint 1: she becomes more attractive. If that’s a hint to someone cheating, then I don’t know what is!
Yotsuba on
February 4th, 2009 8:52 pm
Very subtle, Dark Matter. Use those “….” responsibly. :D
@ Cloud
It’s a mystery! Am I female, or male? I leave some subtle clues in a few of my reviews, so keep on guessing, lol! ^^
RandomComment on
February 4th, 2009 9:15 pm
clues? I didn’t know having a gender was suppose to be secretive, and knowing one’s gender is suppose to be a reward for finding out these “clues”.
mystic on
February 4th, 2009 11:33 pm
@Yotsuba
im willing to bet 10 bucks that you’re a guy. theres no way that any girl is gona be here and take the time to make reviews.
as for the doujin… read Yotsuba and Cloud’s reviews… pretty much hits the nail on the head.
haha on
February 5th, 2009 1:51 am
well i dont write reveiws but im a girl and come here read these manga
Cloud on
February 5th, 2009 2:55 am
lol Yotsuba..
The reason I said “or girl” in my review, was because you made it OBVIOUS that you are a girl by the comment you made on Strange Kind Of Women 3.5
“I can imagine getting into a fight with another girl over the same boy, but in bed?”…
… but hell, some people get kicks for mascarading as a girl. But w/e, the reason you didn’t come out and say you are a girl doesn’t help either argument.
-Cloud
Yotsuba on
February 5th, 2009 3:22 am
@ Cloud
Wow! I forgot that I did say that! I was so much into the review that I forgot I wrote that…
But hey, maybe I’m just a hermaphrodit (wow, I actually had to translate that, I didn’t know what it was in english! It’s futanari in japanese, but I never thought I would use it in english. ^^)
Cloud on
February 5th, 2009 3:27 am
ya your a hermaphrodit, or dick-girl, or Futa.. lol you wish..
mystic on
February 5th, 2009 3:56 am
O.o u wana tell us now what gender you are Yotsuba? :D
sen85y on
February 5th, 2009 5:02 am
is there anyone who had samurai deeper kyo hentai manga,im looking for that but not yet found it
Kouchou on
February 5th, 2009 11:05 am
Nekomataya is actually the name of her circle. The artist’s name is Naomi Nekomata
Uruha on
February 6th, 2009 6:13 am
Geeze…
i hate whore story…
ass on
February 10th, 2009 2:14 am
may be Yotsuba is half man half girl.
fits the bill for me.
Engleworth the Third on
March 17th, 2010 3:11 pm
GGGrrrrrr, Fucking BITCH! i hate cheaters, especially ones who say stuff like ‘why cant we have an open relationship’ or ‘i love you, but i need some cock, you dont mind, do you?’
HATE them.
first for every one.
number 2
3rd
4th!
5 stars out of 5! …”1 VOTES”
eh wasnt so hot on the story
decent
3/5
this was actually kinda funny but i dont understand the name D:
Please admin…. Lots of LOLI!!!!! PLEASE! I love LOLIS!!!!
Wow, the beginning of the story I was really lost/confused, but as I read along it pretty much straighten out. That Mistress of his is really slutty, and I’m not into the whole “cheating” scene, so that was a turn off. Did I mention she’s a real slut?
Art was good, of course it’s from the artist who made one of my favourite Naruto Doujin. The sex scene is what you expect from a “cheating” scene.
I know in a lot of reviews they comment of the censoreship so I guess I’ll do the same. The censorship pretty much covers EVERYTHING with white out. if you were a little kid who didn’t know how to read, you would think this guy’s missing his penis.
I give this: 3/5
(would be 4/5, but 1 point off cause of “cheating slut”)
Remember the name suckas!
-TheBigBoom
I’m actually surprised about how bland this doujin is. I mean honestly, the story was OK at best, with the Art being just plain bad. While it has a good length, and some character set up, it all crashed down, not with a bang, but with a whimper.
First, the Art.
Let me just say this now. The character designs were terrible. While the overall quality is OK, the face and body designs are just plain sloppy and unimaginative. Proper detail was not given to movement, and the environment design was just regular, nothing special.
Next, the Plot.
It’s your average cheating wife with best-friend story. Absolutely nothing to separate it from the hundreds of other doujin’s like it. I mean, i can barely come up with stuff to say about it because it was so bland. Not much humor, either, which is sad, because it could have saved the story.
Not only that, but the censors were (pardon my language) just plain ass. With the penis not having an outline, and the vagina being filled in with white (pun intended).
Overall, just bad. Bad art, bad story, wait no, not even a bad story. There is nothing appealing about this doujin. End of story.
Art: 2/5
Story: 1/5
Overall Score: 2/5
-Yotsuba ^^
P.S. Honey Bitch? And the translator in off quite a bit in this one, and is lazy at times, not translating sound effects.
I really hate cheating wives storys, its making me fucking damn angry
yup piss me off 2
Yotsuba, WE DONT CARE.
I bless to who comment below me with henati master ability….
1. Cheat other wife without any hardship
2. More loli will love him
3. Have a truly man power at any place
4. Be hentai for the whole life
…
Amen…
The best artist!!!
more loli plz
Want To Buy PervySage back!
Yotsuba man.. (or girl?).. I don’t know what to say.
I didn’t like this, mostly cuz the story like some other people said above me, pissed me off.
The story was ehh, but I don’t care for cheating stories, it isn’t a top ranking fantasy of mine.. It didn’t flow very well either.
The art was ok, I like this art at times, but with the story and the horrible *WHITE OUT* censoring it was too much.
Anything else?: *WHITE OUT* censoring.. and a cheating story. Hey if you like go right on ahead, but it wasn’t anything special
Score:
2/5
-Cloud
sorry.. the person above me is me. FOr some reason my name went away.
-Cloud
It happens….
I’ve decided, to end “….”
…..
or just minimize it
Hint 1: she becomes more attractive. If that’s a hint to someone cheating, then I don’t know what is!
Very subtle, Dark Matter. Use those “….” responsibly. :D
@ Cloud
It’s a mystery! Am I female, or male? I leave some subtle clues in a few of my reviews, so keep on guessing, lol! ^^
clues? I didn’t know having a gender was suppose to be secretive, and knowing one’s gender is suppose to be a reward for finding out these “clues”.
@Yotsuba
im willing to bet 10 bucks that you’re a guy. theres no way that any girl is gona be here and take the time to make reviews.
as for the doujin… read Yotsuba and Cloud’s reviews… pretty much hits the nail on the head.
well i dont write reveiws but im a girl and come here read these manga
lol Yotsuba..
The reason I said “or girl” in my review, was because you made it OBVIOUS that you are a girl by the comment you made on Strange Kind Of Women 3.5
“I can imagine getting into a fight with another girl over the same boy, but in bed?”…
… but hell, some people get kicks for mascarading as a girl. But w/e, the reason you didn’t come out and say you are a girl doesn’t help either argument.
-Cloud
@ Cloud
Wow! I forgot that I did say that! I was so much into the review that I forgot I wrote that…
But hey, maybe I’m just a hermaphrodit (wow, I actually had to translate that, I didn’t know what it was in english! It’s futanari in japanese, but I never thought I would use it in english. ^^)
ya your a hermaphrodit, or dick-girl, or Futa.. lol you wish..
O.o u wana tell us now what gender you are Yotsuba? :D
is there anyone who had samurai deeper kyo hentai manga,im looking for that but not yet found it
Nekomataya is actually the name of her circle. The artist’s name is Naomi Nekomata
Geeze…
i hate whore story…
may be Yotsuba is half man half girl.
fits the bill for me.
GGGrrrrrr, Fucking BITCH! i hate cheaters, especially ones who say stuff like ‘why cant we have an open relationship’ or ‘i love you, but i need some cock, you dont mind, do you?’
HATE them.