you suck anon my interwebs went down for a second. Thats not fair.
The Young /co/mp/a/triot on
August 4th, 2008 12:22 am
God bless you, anon.
damn on
August 4th, 2008 12:25 am
4th
killerK on
August 4th, 2008 12:50 am
ok this doujin is awesome. I really dont know what i would do without doujinland.
uranus on
August 4th, 2008 1:48 am
cool
Cloud on
August 4th, 2008 2:21 am
Well, I love to see more from this artist because he is one of my favorites.
Story was great, I loved it. Here the story really goes from start to finish, the plot here wasn’t to hard to make reality, there wasn’t anything that stood out to be like that impossible.. so good
Art, Fabulous! I love this artist like I said, and I know many others agree here. The censors were amazingly unnoticeable making it just a great overall experience.
Anything to add?: ya, oh gawd, if that ever happened to me I would so cry, that just sucks so much… it almost hurts just thinking abut it and reading it (u will all understand if you read)
Score:
4/5
Numbers on
August 4th, 2008 2:24 am
Stop with that crappy number shit. Seriously. Nobody gives a fuck if your 1st or 2nd. Jesus.
Fool on
August 4th, 2008 3:58 am
I’ve read this before, but anyways its always a good read and the art is just spot on.
The story well I guess nothing too spectacular it is not a series type of story so it has an ending.
As for censor I barely notice any censor really its almost non-existant.
For a quick fap it does its job, but for the ones that likes to read on for more then not much happening as I said.
Solipsis on
August 4th, 2008 6:27 am
Agree with Fool, I prefer a doujin with down to earth storyline
Nya? on
August 4th, 2008 6:54 am
10th, Nice!
PervySage on
August 4th, 2008 11:31 am
WTF! Image links for me doesn’t work! That just sucks! Anyways, let’s get to the point.
STORY: Can’t really tell what happened now can I.
ART: Fantastic. Nice line work and the girl is cute too. Censor strips are barely noticeable.
SCORE: 2/5
PS. 4/5 if the link was fixed. T_T
MORE LOLIS!
Hana-chan on
August 4th, 2008 3:13 pm
This is the kind of stuff I love. It’s hard for me to find anything of a girl taking over a guy like that. It’s the kind of thing I’d love to do to my husband.
Raphael DDL on
August 4th, 2008 7:33 pm
yay i love that artist’s draw
anon on
August 4th, 2008 8:23 pm
16th lol
killerK on
August 5th, 2008 4:44 am
wow anon.
Madame-Pineapple on
August 5th, 2008 1:34 pm
This one highly disappointed me.. Which realllly sucks because I absolutely love bondage and S+M, my favorite way to fuck since ever.
But, maybe I’m a little picky or something, because I found a lot I didn’t like in this one, for example, he was so damn skinny! I hate that almost as much as I hate muscle men. I mean.. they could’ve just gave him a little tummy, is that too much to ask for?! Her bellybutton was set too high, which annoyed me, even though I don’t think it should. And oh my lucifer, she was a horrible fuckin Dom, HORRIBLE. Personally, I think she makes woman look bad, I am usually a Dom, but I switch sometimes, and if I ever acted like this during a session.. Wow..
Well anyways onto what is nice about this one, which I think is mostly it’s art and cuteness, some scenes were so cute.. ahh..
Overall…. I couldn’t get off on it. T_T I wanted too, but too skinny and too ..bad dom..ish.
yaoi fan on
August 6th, 2008 4:16 am
Looks good. :]
Black Cancer on
August 7th, 2008 1:15 am
*thumbs up*
A Guy Who Blows Up Crap (RulerZ) on
August 7th, 2008 5:46 am
Ooo-la-la! Both the characters caught my interest. I kinda like the female domination in this particular doujin. I guess it makes sense, she is a “phantom”. Some “cute”, smexy scenes. I love the gal, great clothing design and artwork.
The coloring is quite well performed. The dark areas aren’t too dark and etc. Facial expressions kinda threw me off… in a GOOD way. Right expression at the right time. Love how there’s barely any censors in this one.
Finally the translation and overall dialogue is well done. Bravo author, I bestow you a three thumbs out of four. XP (counting my feet) I feel bad for the guy. GO PHANTOM THIEF!
T5J8F8 on
August 18th, 2008 12:12 am
Second-to-Last Page: i c wut u did thar!
Last Page: You Bitch! You Sexy Bitch!
Due to my familiarity with the style(s), I was wise to cease-fap until I was sure of the intro character’s sex. Damn you, Pegasus! Still, he’s definitely whipped here, though I imagine a more deep and controlled voice (PEGASUS! *shakes fist*) when he’s not being quite pussy-*wa-pish*’d.
zomB13 on
September 7th, 2008 2:13 am
Great stuff! Love the costum angle!
akong on
September 15th, 2008 11:10 pm
stupid server..they block to view image.
jeweled on
September 19th, 2008 5:55 am
umm why is this under lolicon cause she doesn’t look that young
no
Yeah awesome. 1st
you suck anon my interwebs went down for a second. Thats not fair.
God bless you, anon.
4th
ok this doujin is awesome. I really dont know what i would do without doujinland.
cool
Well, I love to see more from this artist because he is one of my favorites.
Story was great, I loved it. Here the story really goes from start to finish, the plot here wasn’t to hard to make reality, there wasn’t anything that stood out to be like that impossible.. so good
Art, Fabulous! I love this artist like I said, and I know many others agree here. The censors were amazingly unnoticeable making it just a great overall experience.
Anything to add?: ya, oh gawd, if that ever happened to me I would so cry, that just sucks so much… it almost hurts just thinking abut it and reading it (u will all understand if you read)
Score:
4/5
Stop with that crappy number shit. Seriously. Nobody gives a fuck if your 1st or 2nd. Jesus.
I’ve read this before, but anyways its always a good read and the art is just spot on.
The story well I guess nothing too spectacular it is not a series type of story so it has an ending.
As for censor I barely notice any censor really its almost non-existant.
For a quick fap it does its job, but for the ones that likes to read on for more then not much happening as I said.
Agree with Fool, I prefer a doujin with down to earth storyline
10th, Nice!
WTF! Image links for me doesn’t work! That just sucks! Anyways, let’s get to the point.
STORY: Can’t really tell what happened now can I.
ART: Fantastic. Nice line work and the girl is cute too. Censor strips are barely noticeable.
SCORE: 2/5
PS. 4/5 if the link was fixed. T_T
MORE LOLIS!
This is the kind of stuff I love. It’s hard for me to find anything of a girl taking over a guy like that. It’s the kind of thing I’d love to do to my husband.
yay i love that artist’s draw
16th lol
wow anon.
This one highly disappointed me.. Which realllly sucks because I absolutely love bondage and S+M, my favorite way to fuck since ever.
But, maybe I’m a little picky or something, because I found a lot I didn’t like in this one, for example, he was so damn skinny! I hate that almost as much as I hate muscle men. I mean.. they could’ve just gave him a little tummy, is that too much to ask for?! Her bellybutton was set too high, which annoyed me, even though I don’t think it should. And oh my lucifer, she was a horrible fuckin Dom, HORRIBLE. Personally, I think she makes woman look bad, I am usually a Dom, but I switch sometimes, and if I ever acted like this during a session.. Wow..
Well anyways onto what is nice about this one, which I think is mostly it’s art and cuteness, some scenes were so cute.. ahh..
Overall…. I couldn’t get off on it. T_T I wanted too, but too skinny and too ..bad dom..ish.
Looks good. :]
*thumbs up*
Ooo-la-la! Both the characters caught my interest. I kinda like the female domination in this particular doujin. I guess it makes sense, she is a “phantom”. Some “cute”, smexy scenes. I love the gal, great clothing design and artwork.
The coloring is quite well performed. The dark areas aren’t too dark and etc. Facial expressions kinda threw me off… in a GOOD way. Right expression at the right time. Love how there’s barely any censors in this one.
Finally the translation and overall dialogue is well done. Bravo author, I bestow you a three thumbs out of four. XP (counting my feet) I feel bad for the guy. GO PHANTOM THIEF!
Second-to-Last Page: i c wut u did thar!
Last Page: You Bitch! You Sexy Bitch!
Due to my familiarity with the style(s), I was wise to cease-fap until I was sure of the intro character’s sex. Damn you, Pegasus! Still, he’s definitely whipped here, though I imagine a more deep and controlled voice (PEGASUS! *shakes fist*) when he’s not being quite pussy-*wa-pish*’d.
Great stuff! Love the costum angle!
stupid server..they block to view image.
umm why is this under lolicon cause she doesn’t look that young
Pressed it by mistake, back to normal.
fuck with all your number!!!
great one too
story’s graet too, and looks good
haha all i have to say is
FTW!!!!!
Ohhh yeah baby, grrrreat stuff
It would be so great if this had any sequel
this is greta land, great doujin congrats!!!
THAT GUY HAS NO BALLSS!!!!