i agree, the boobs are way too big. it was a cute story though.
saisgirlfriend on
March 25th, 2009 3:23 pm
whats wit the huge titties? that looks like it could kill her back
anonymous on
March 25th, 2009 4:01 pm
Damn censorship. Other then that, pretty good.
Hitler on
March 25th, 2009 4:02 pm
boobs 2 big, want
loli
RandomComment on
March 25th, 2009 4:12 pm
In the preview image of this doujin, her balloon boobies are making her fly.
Love Glove on
March 25th, 2009 4:16 pm
Too big? Really?
No it wouldn’t hurt her back because it’s not real.
I don’t know about anyone else but I don’t read these for accuracy to real life, I read them because I don’t want to look at REGULAR porn at the time being. Either that or I’m just bored and need a good larf.
One way or the other bordem has come into play.
Now onto ze review.
First up the bad.
Translations… I wish that was enough, but more needs to be said. The translations are awful, just awful. They make me want to pee myself. The person who did it either doesn’t know english too well, or really wasn’t trying AT ALL.
Next, the censoring. Now for the most part it’s not too bad, but being that it’s whiteout censoring it still sucks.
Now onto the positive. The sex scene’s were pretty good, and the artist has some decent skills. The story was well constructed but didn’t get to me at all, however this could be attributed to the translation errors. The characters were okay, just okay.
Overall- Nothing spectacular, with horrendous translations, and has a couple saving graces in the art work but otherwise you’re not missing anything.
**
2/4
sss on
March 25th, 2009 5:23 pm
u guys are insane, amatarou is one of the best in my book. boobies all the way.
Dig dug on
March 25th, 2009 6:09 pm
witheout censors ruined this doujin
8=D on
March 25th, 2009 10:14 pm
HEY ADMIN!!!!!!!!! Yunioshi is a good shota artist u should check out some of his stuff
Kitsune on
March 25th, 2009 10:23 pm
Hooray for boobs XD
PervySage on
March 25th, 2009 10:40 pm
Best story so far! DEFINITELY WORTH A READ!
I won’t spoil anything but it was fun. Although you’ll get to know what happened, you’ll never expect the next. GOOD GOOD GOOD!
Art was great. Although some are put off by big boobs, this one did well. Well drawn art. However, the whiteouts were just the worst. Spoiling the doujin. T_T
SCORE 4/5 (if not for the whiteouts, a 5/5)
MORE LOLIS!!!
Flamebait on
March 25th, 2009 11:58 pm
GODDAMMIT LEARN TO SPEAK ENGLISH OR GIVE THE TRANSLATING JOB TO SOMEONE ELSE!!! FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Nice tits, though.
Yotsuba on
March 26th, 2009 12:21 am
White-out censoring is the enemy of a good doujin. It can make even the cutest and heart-felt story sink in a moment.
But, I guess if you look past the censoring, you will find a strangely wonderful doujin, with some funny moments, that is pure with heart.
The story is actually a lot like other normal doujin’s. The boy returns to the place of his childhood only to discover that his childhood friend is now sexy. I mean, it’s a common doujin plot. But where this doujin gets it right is with the characters themselves. Even if the dialog seems to be translated a little poorly. Each character has a realistic vibe, and the main female is very cute, in her appearance and personality.
The art uses a mix of dramatic angles to make the story seem to flow. It’s pattern of movement relies a lot on a sort of anime rhythm of closeups to fades and such. The character details and models were well done and well adaptive, even if the females boobs were a bit unrealistic. The designs of the faces were very well done, as they were some moments for me when I tingled with a cute vibe (no, not like that, sicko! XD)
Overall, a good design and story base brings this together very well, and is recommended for viewing. Even if it does have… white-outs (ugh!)
3.5/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. Rico discovered sex very early, almost like instinct, lol!
blarg on
March 26th, 2009 1:04 am
I agree that the breasts are too big. Not everybody will think that, and it’s everybody’s prerogative to love them at that size. I just prefer small-to-medium, which is quite smaller than most of these artists draw.
OMG on
March 26th, 2009 4:01 am
what dose the scouter tell about her bust size?
ITS OVER 9000!!oO
Way to big, i liked teh story but wayyyy to big boob…
Dice on
March 26th, 2009 3:01 pm
I love Amatarou series!!!
Big Boobs are the best!!!!
Nappa on
March 26th, 2009 3:09 pm
9000!?
There’s no way that can be right!
Damn on
March 26th, 2009 7:56 pm
T-T-T-T-T-T-T-Those are b-b-b-big……
AnimeKing on
March 27th, 2009 12:41 am
I hate to repeat what everyone is saying but….it’s true.
Her boobs are too big….
Anonymous on
March 27th, 2009 2:51 am
Woah. When I came to this page first thing I saw was a pic of an old man scaring at me. Talk about freak outs.
The story is okay, I guess. Childhood friends reuniting.
… And damn, would I kill to have a grandpa like that. Reminds me of Hulk Hogan for some inexplicable reason.
bla bla bla on
March 27th, 2009 4:30 am
pantat pukimak luuuu jubo bertaik cilaka lu suma makan taik
Anonymous on
April 4th, 2009 9:46 pm
That grandpa, is such a winner. He gets his jollies watching his granddaughter boink while hiding MGS3 style.
Sacheleo on
April 18th, 2009 12:37 pm
DAAAAMMMNN her tits are fucking bigger then her own brains
Dr_Frolo on
February 19th, 2010 10:34 pm
I have travelled the lands and never seen tits as fine as these whyre yall complainin now
Kotaro on
July 6th, 2010 2:18 am
Translator is an idiot from the looks of it he doesn’t know that ototo= little brother and imoto= little sister
O_O
first :D
2nd? or third? horay the boobs are to big
i agree, the boobs are way too big. it was a cute story though.
whats wit the huge titties? that looks like it could kill her back
Damn censorship. Other then that, pretty good.
boobs 2 big, want
loli
In the preview image of this doujin, her balloon boobies are making her fly.
Too big? Really?
No it wouldn’t hurt her back because it’s not real.
I don’t know about anyone else but I don’t read these for accuracy to real life, I read them because I don’t want to look at REGULAR porn at the time being. Either that or I’m just bored and need a good larf.
One way or the other bordem has come into play.
Now onto ze review.
First up the bad.
Translations… I wish that was enough, but more needs to be said. The translations are awful, just awful. They make me want to pee myself. The person who did it either doesn’t know english too well, or really wasn’t trying AT ALL.
Next, the censoring. Now for the most part it’s not too bad, but being that it’s whiteout censoring it still sucks.
Now onto the positive. The sex scene’s were pretty good, and the artist has some decent skills. The story was well constructed but didn’t get to me at all, however this could be attributed to the translation errors. The characters were okay, just okay.
Overall- Nothing spectacular, with horrendous translations, and has a couple saving graces in the art work but otherwise you’re not missing anything.
**
2/4
u guys are insane, amatarou is one of the best in my book. boobies all the way.
witheout censors ruined this doujin
HEY ADMIN!!!!!!!!! Yunioshi is a good shota artist u should check out some of his stuff
Hooray for boobs XD
Best story so far! DEFINITELY WORTH A READ!
I won’t spoil anything but it was fun. Although you’ll get to know what happened, you’ll never expect the next. GOOD GOOD GOOD!
Art was great. Although some are put off by big boobs, this one did well. Well drawn art. However, the whiteouts were just the worst. Spoiling the doujin. T_T
SCORE 4/5 (if not for the whiteouts, a 5/5)
MORE LOLIS!!!
GODDAMMIT LEARN TO SPEAK ENGLISH OR GIVE THE TRANSLATING JOB TO SOMEONE ELSE!!! FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Nice tits, though.
White-out censoring is the enemy of a good doujin. It can make even the cutest and heart-felt story sink in a moment.
But, I guess if you look past the censoring, you will find a strangely wonderful doujin, with some funny moments, that is pure with heart.
The story is actually a lot like other normal doujin’s. The boy returns to the place of his childhood only to discover that his childhood friend is now sexy. I mean, it’s a common doujin plot. But where this doujin gets it right is with the characters themselves. Even if the dialog seems to be translated a little poorly. Each character has a realistic vibe, and the main female is very cute, in her appearance and personality.
The art uses a mix of dramatic angles to make the story seem to flow. It’s pattern of movement relies a lot on a sort of anime rhythm of closeups to fades and such. The character details and models were well done and well adaptive, even if the females boobs were a bit unrealistic. The designs of the faces were very well done, as they were some moments for me when I tingled with a cute vibe (no, not like that, sicko! XD)
Overall, a good design and story base brings this together very well, and is recommended for viewing. Even if it does have… white-outs (ugh!)
3.5/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. Rico discovered sex very early, almost like instinct, lol!
I agree that the breasts are too big. Not everybody will think that, and it’s everybody’s prerogative to love them at that size. I just prefer small-to-medium, which is quite smaller than most of these artists draw.
what dose the scouter tell about her bust size?
ITS OVER 9000!!oO
Way to big, i liked teh story but wayyyy to big boob…
I love Amatarou series!!!
Big Boobs are the best!!!!
9000!?
There’s no way that can be right!
T-T-T-T-T-T-T-Those are b-b-b-big……
I hate to repeat what everyone is saying but….it’s true.
Her boobs are too big….
Woah. When I came to this page first thing I saw was a pic of an old man scaring at me. Talk about freak outs.
The story is okay, I guess. Childhood friends reuniting.
… And damn, would I kill to have a grandpa like that. Reminds me of Hulk Hogan for some inexplicable reason.
pantat pukimak luuuu jubo bertaik cilaka lu suma makan taik
That grandpa, is such a winner. He gets his jollies watching his granddaughter boink while hiding MGS3 style.
DAAAAMMMNN her tits are fucking bigger then her own brains
I have travelled the lands and never seen tits as fine as these whyre yall complainin now
Translator is an idiot from the looks of it he doesn’t know that ototo= little brother and imoto= little sister