lol to piss u all off ive taken this spot so no one can say first
Anonymous on
April 29th, 2009 7:31 am
nooooooo
keiko on
April 29th, 2009 7:32 am
nice ;)
Secret! on
April 29th, 2009 7:33 am
Third!
Anonymous on
April 29th, 2009 7:40 am
first
Lolimania on
April 29th, 2009 7:57 am
actually in your attempt to stop someone from saying first, you, technically, has said first.
Zeke on
April 29th, 2009 8:37 am
7Th
x on
April 29th, 2009 9:01 am
why in the world do you care about this anyway?
a-grr on
April 29th, 2009 9:31 am
It shall be interesting to see what response I get this time around (if any). Anyway, fap time! ~,<
Damn on
April 29th, 2009 9:44 am
acctualy i CAN say first even though a lie….
I can on
April 29th, 2009 9:59 am
I can say First too. I’m talented like that.
first :D on
April 29th, 2009 10:12 am
first :D
a-grr on
April 29th, 2009 10:15 am
Seems these teacher-type doujins always start the sexual tension within the story the same way. Girl does something to embarrass boy, boy retaliates, boy falls on girl/trips girl over, boy and girl have a ‘moment’ as boy lays on girl. Actually, MANY doujins start it that way. Ahh but familiarity isn’t always a bad thing. I digress…
Another cliche story line here as well, on the whole. Even the sex was cliche, and didn’t really do much for me. Maybe the familiarity of it all is just a bit too present. It’s like wanking over your old porn, just without the nostalgia of a good read.
Art was average. Mutsuki, the chick, is presented as a grown girl (sorta) yet looks to be drawn in almost loli dimensions (I like loli, bet her fried eggs were a disappointment for this genre). It looks a bit too weird with her large head. Still, I found her really cute during most of it.
Did my eyes deceive me??! No censors? Ahhh the censors of late (or lack of) has been wikd! Points again on this aspect.
Overall, I would have to say I found it a little bit… stale? Nothing I would go back to a second time were I to have the choice. Still managed to complete its purpose, only without any great ‘wow’ factor to getting there. If only I had an original story to get my mind working to make the wank that bit emotional. And yes guys, thinking does make for a good orgasm.
3/5, mainly due to the story. Just off a 4 cuz the censors though =]
MiZtAh on
April 29th, 2009 10:17 am
Im first to say your not first!
And I aint lyin! =P
ren on
April 29th, 2009 12:22 pm
good point a-grr.
it seems most doujins are following these story lines because they’ve been proven to appeal to their target demographic. The artist aren’t putting any thought into their work, most are trying to mass produce comics so they can scratch out a living. it’s sad, but “okay” doujins sell almost as well as “Great” ones. Not that we’re paying for them :D
jman on
April 29th, 2009 2:45 pm
i wonder if real pedophiles read doujin, like i wonder if brian peppers reads loli or if micheal jackson reads shota?
ps waffles
psps *fap fap*
jman on
April 29th, 2009 2:50 pm
oh and if guys want to know there are censors but they are white, just in case ya dont catch it 8D
pspsps *fap fap*
GotHouse on
April 29th, 2009 3:04 pm
hey you baka People.. i gothouse what u got??
slumdog
jman on
April 29th, 2009 5:37 pm
i got family guy, i dont watch “house” too often. 8P
jman on
April 29th, 2009 5:38 pm
ps *fap fap*
Anonymous on
April 29th, 2009 6:01 pm
jman wtf? lol
TVlad on
April 29th, 2009 6:46 pm
hey admin how about some lucky star doujin? or pokemon or digimon?
mecegirl on
April 29th, 2009 7:01 pm
omg. Sap so much sappyness uhhhhh.
Well it was okay I don’t mind generic but this one was just to simplistic for my taste.
arrow on
April 29th, 2009 10:23 pm
jman this aint loli but your right brian peppers is creepy looking
a-grr on
April 30th, 2009 9:15 am
Well, I think pedos are more interested in real stuff ae. Isn’t that why they are pedos in the first place?? I think I like this stuff simply for the fact it AINT real, and not as a substitute for pictures of the real thing.
goddamn lunatic on
May 3rd, 2009 12:12 pm
fuck you all just read this fuckin doujin and go fuck yourself
lol to piss u all off ive taken this spot so no one can say first
nooooooo
nice ;)
Third!
first
actually in your attempt to stop someone from saying first, you, technically, has said first.
7Th
why in the world do you care about this anyway?
It shall be interesting to see what response I get this time around (if any). Anyway, fap time! ~,<
acctualy i CAN say first even though a lie….
I can say First too. I’m talented like that.
first :D
Seems these teacher-type doujins always start the sexual tension within the story the same way. Girl does something to embarrass boy, boy retaliates, boy falls on girl/trips girl over, boy and girl have a ‘moment’ as boy lays on girl. Actually, MANY doujins start it that way. Ahh but familiarity isn’t always a bad thing. I digress…
Another cliche story line here as well, on the whole. Even the sex was cliche, and didn’t really do much for me. Maybe the familiarity of it all is just a bit too present. It’s like wanking over your old porn, just without the nostalgia of a good read.
Art was average. Mutsuki, the chick, is presented as a grown girl (sorta) yet looks to be drawn in almost loli dimensions (I like loli, bet her fried eggs were a disappointment for this genre). It looks a bit too weird with her large head. Still, I found her really cute during most of it.
Did my eyes deceive me??! No censors? Ahhh the censors of late (or lack of) has been wikd! Points again on this aspect.
Overall, I would have to say I found it a little bit… stale? Nothing I would go back to a second time were I to have the choice. Still managed to complete its purpose, only without any great ‘wow’ factor to getting there. If only I had an original story to get my mind working to make the wank that bit emotional. And yes guys, thinking does make for a good orgasm.
3/5, mainly due to the story. Just off a 4 cuz the censors though =]
Im first to say your not first!
And I aint lyin! =P
good point a-grr.
it seems most doujins are following these story lines because they’ve been proven to appeal to their target demographic. The artist aren’t putting any thought into their work, most are trying to mass produce comics so they can scratch out a living. it’s sad, but “okay” doujins sell almost as well as “Great” ones. Not that we’re paying for them :D
i wonder if real pedophiles read doujin, like i wonder if brian peppers reads loli or if micheal jackson reads shota?
ps waffles
psps *fap fap*
oh and if guys want to know there are censors but they are white, just in case ya dont catch it 8D
pspsps *fap fap*
hey you baka People.. i gothouse what u got??
slumdog
i got family guy, i dont watch “house” too often. 8P
ps *fap fap*
jman wtf? lol
hey admin how about some lucky star doujin? or pokemon or digimon?
omg. Sap so much sappyness uhhhhh.
Well it was okay I don’t mind generic but this one was just to simplistic for my taste.
jman this aint loli but your right brian peppers is creepy looking
Well, I think pedos are more interested in real stuff ae. Isn’t that why they are pedos in the first place?? I think I like this stuff simply for the fact it AINT real, and not as a substitute for pictures of the real thing.
fuck you all just read this fuckin doujin and go fuck yourself
nice….
5/5
Huuh,,,crazy dude