side no im not saying first if thats what some of u think -_- sigh but really the doujin seemed ok the same as the last one in picture and censoreship and junk but thats all i c.
asotak on
January 23rd, 2009 12:43 am
omg not fast enough 3rd
Cloud on
January 23rd, 2009 12:51 am
ehh, not a fan so much.
I dind’t like the death in this, it kinda kills the mood.
It is a continuation from the previous Doujin, and the events are extended. Everything kinda happened really fast, is doesn’t exclude the sex..
Not the biggest fan of the art, it is decent and can be enjoyable. There were no censors, a plus.
Anything else?: The direction and the whole Doujin can be summarized as ’straight froward’, there is nothing really special here, and the killing of some characters in the beginning wasn’t to my liking.
Score:
2.5/5
-Cloud
Yotsuba on
January 23rd, 2009 2:17 am
My god, what a joke. This doujin was defiantly not worth my time. And not only that, it doesn’t even have a proper ending!
Anyway, the art was just plain bad (reminds me of Ranma 1/2 almost), with character design being just lazy. Also, I didn’t like the fact that the girls were naked the entire time, even if it was part of the story.
The people dieing was like a joke, as well. And the fact that the last two people to get away end up having sex in a cave is just plain stupid.
The story moves very fast, but honestly, is not really worth your time.
No censors, which is OK, I guess.
Usually, when a story is bad, the art will make up for it, or when the art is bad, the plot will make up for it. This has neither.
1.5/5
P.S. Don’t talk about how hot someone is while in a dangerous situation, or you’ll fall into a pit of spikes.
disappointed on
January 23rd, 2009 2:22 am
wow that was horrible.,,,
story driven as it was it was pointlessly brutal and made no sense dont bother.
nice tits though LOL!
bambam on
January 23rd, 2009 2:33 am
yeah it is pretty dumb and it looked like the story wasnt really thought about while the sex is simply generic
download busy hater on
January 23rd, 2009 2:39 am
man..
wat the shit is this??
the watery disgust me..
eww…
RandomComment on
January 23rd, 2009 2:41 am
This reminded me of Battle Royale. Except Battle Royale was good.
loli is sick on
January 23rd, 2009 3:45 am
man what the fuck
pissed on
January 23rd, 2009 4:30 am
That was so disturbing what the hell the author was thinking when he wrote this.
And four people disappears and the police wont do a thing stinks.
Master Chief on
January 23rd, 2009 5:16 am
Bad.
Art wasn’t completely horrible but it still wasn’t good. Story sucked like a vietnamese hooker(zing), and the ending was even worse.
Overall bad
2/10
P.S. I like how they made all of those pirates look exactly the same(not).
MASTER CHIEF DEMAND MORE LOLI
Angry Bob on
January 23rd, 2009 5:51 am
I agree, horrible… T_T
and woo, no first 2nd 3rd this time <3 that makes me a happy bob
download busy hater on
January 23rd, 2009 6:38 am
fuck..
fuck..
fuck!!
is it flood in there?
disgusting..
T5J8F8 on
January 23rd, 2009 7:51 am
Three words: HO-LY SHIT!
I… I didn’t expect to be semi-Gotoh’d on this. Jeebus. The third bit of it I kinda saw coming, and was already jarred into the mindset where things like that are plausible.
… so… there a third one? Perhaps with some ghastly vegeance?
Oh, and fuck the police! Hook ‘em up to a lie detector, why doncha?! Even if they were drugginly convinced, would it REALLY be too much to check anyway? Jerks.
Wow on
January 23rd, 2009 11:32 am
That was ridiculous.
1/5 on that shit.
mystic on
January 23rd, 2009 2:33 pm
@pervysage
LIES you cannot demand more lolis if you’re a fag! we demand the real pervysage!
Cloud on
January 23rd, 2009 5:52 pm
I agree with mystic, who the hell is this PervySage up top…
-Cloud
DarkMatter on
January 23rd, 2009 9:59 pm
I was ok with this one, but i prefer tayutayu, i would love to see how the story ends for that one. So far there are six of them, i wonder how many there are in total
PervySage on
January 23rd, 2009 11:18 pm
DAMN! I expected this to redeem the whole series of the doujin but I was disappointed. This was even worse than the previous chapter. Death+hentai just doesn’t mix well together.
Unless your into goru, then this will probably fit you just right but I doubt it.
I admit that this had story but most of it was just crap. Worst plot EVER.
Art wasn’t good either. Huge breasts and all. NO CENSORS was definitely a plus.
SCORE 1/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
Anonymous on
January 23rd, 2009 11:26 pm
admin I admire the effort you invest in this site and in making it better. what makes you keep going *curious*
Lolimania on
January 23rd, 2009 11:35 pm
This was horrible, stupid ending and death? wth? who puts death in the dang doujin? lol at the identical bald guys only thing good were the girls.
0.5/100 should bring more lolis!
Demented id on
January 24th, 2009 5:27 am
That was pointless and depressing. The sex was mildly entertaining at best and not sexy at all. The story was very short and the ending was very forced and it was about as unforfilling as a piece of stale bread. All around bad Doujin 1/5
hmm... on
January 24th, 2009 9:12 am
RandomComment’s comment is right.
Battle Royal is way better than this.
hey, if you guys post a Battle Royale doujin that’d be great.
Cisco on
January 24th, 2009 10:39 pm
to the person with the Battle Royale comment, i was thinking exactly the same thing.
Todesengel on
January 26th, 2009 1:06 pm
Mind you, I’ve read both part 1 and 2 so now I’m commenting.
Story: 3/10
Interesting idea, poorly executed though. The deaths should’ve been more, let’s just say heroric. The deaths were definately out of place and not to mention very random, it really killed the hentai. Death and Hentai CAN mix if it is done properly.
Art: 2/10
Okay why do all the girls look the freakin’ same? They literally have the same crotch, body figure and face. Just because it is a doujin, it does not excuse a lack of variation. If it weren’t for the hair, I would’ve never been able to tell the differance between the girls. Ya know, you could’ve given them different chest sizes, face and such.
Another question, why are all the guys ugly? I know it is typical for the guys to always be ugly, it seems to be some kind of rule, but still. They also all looked the same. It bothered me to no end.
Sex itself:2/10
It was really put into random bits. I’m not a huge fan of rape, but even this could’ve been executed better. The actual sex between the brunette and her boyfriend was just random…
Over all: 2/10.
Limited on
February 6th, 2009 5:17 pm
Thank you for taking the time to upload
even though alot of people dont appreciate it.
AnimePrincess on
September 4th, 2009 5:07 am
Its ok infact i like it…its better than the first one thanks admin^^
AnimePrincess on
September 4th, 2009 5:07 am
Its ok infact i like it…its better than the first one thanks admin^^
seemed ok like first i guess
side no im not saying first if thats what some of u think -_- sigh but really the doujin seemed ok the same as the last one in picture and censoreship and junk but thats all i c.
omg not fast enough 3rd
ehh, not a fan so much.
I dind’t like the death in this, it kinda kills the mood.
It is a continuation from the previous Doujin, and the events are extended. Everything kinda happened really fast, is doesn’t exclude the sex..
Not the biggest fan of the art, it is decent and can be enjoyable. There were no censors, a plus.
Anything else?: The direction and the whole Doujin can be summarized as ’straight froward’, there is nothing really special here, and the killing of some characters in the beginning wasn’t to my liking.
Score:
2.5/5
-Cloud
My god, what a joke. This doujin was defiantly not worth my time. And not only that, it doesn’t even have a proper ending!
Anyway, the art was just plain bad (reminds me of Ranma 1/2 almost), with character design being just lazy. Also, I didn’t like the fact that the girls were naked the entire time, even if it was part of the story.
The people dieing was like a joke, as well. And the fact that the last two people to get away end up having sex in a cave is just plain stupid.
The story moves very fast, but honestly, is not really worth your time.
No censors, which is OK, I guess.
Usually, when a story is bad, the art will make up for it, or when the art is bad, the plot will make up for it. This has neither.
1.5/5
P.S. Don’t talk about how hot someone is while in a dangerous situation, or you’ll fall into a pit of spikes.
wow that was horrible.,,,
story driven as it was it was pointlessly brutal and made no sense dont bother.
nice tits though LOL!
yeah it is pretty dumb and it looked like the story wasnt really thought about while the sex is simply generic
man..
wat the shit is this??
the watery disgust me..
eww…
This reminded me of Battle Royale. Except Battle Royale was good.
man what the fuck
That was so disturbing what the hell the author was thinking when he wrote this.
And four people disappears and the police wont do a thing stinks.
Bad.
Art wasn’t completely horrible but it still wasn’t good. Story sucked like a vietnamese hooker(zing), and the ending was even worse.
Overall bad
2/10
P.S. I like how they made all of those pirates look exactly the same(not).
MASTER CHIEF DEMAND MORE LOLI
I agree, horrible… T_T
and woo, no first 2nd 3rd this time <3 that makes me a happy bob
fuck..
fuck..
fuck!!
is it flood in there?
disgusting..
Three words: HO-LY SHIT!
I… I didn’t expect to be semi-Gotoh’d on this. Jeebus. The third bit of it I kinda saw coming, and was already jarred into the mindset where things like that are plausible.
… so… there a third one? Perhaps with some ghastly vegeance?
Oh, and fuck the police! Hook ‘em up to a lie detector, why doncha?! Even if they were drugginly convinced, would it REALLY be too much to check anyway? Jerks.
That was ridiculous.
1/5 on that shit.
@pervysage
LIES you cannot demand more lolis if you’re a fag! we demand the real pervysage!
I agree with mystic, who the hell is this PervySage up top…
-Cloud
I was ok with this one, but i prefer tayutayu, i would love to see how the story ends for that one. So far there are six of them, i wonder how many there are in total
DAMN! I expected this to redeem the whole series of the doujin but I was disappointed. This was even worse than the previous chapter. Death+hentai just doesn’t mix well together.
Unless your into goru, then this will probably fit you just right but I doubt it.
I admit that this had story but most of it was just crap. Worst plot EVER.
Art wasn’t good either. Huge breasts and all. NO CENSORS was definitely a plus.
SCORE 1/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
admin I admire the effort you invest in this site and in making it better. what makes you keep going *curious*
This was horrible, stupid ending and death? wth? who puts death in the dang doujin? lol at the identical bald guys only thing good were the girls.
0.5/100 should bring more lolis!
That was pointless and depressing. The sex was mildly entertaining at best and not sexy at all. The story was very short and the ending was very forced and it was about as unforfilling as a piece of stale bread. All around bad Doujin 1/5
RandomComment’s comment is right.
Battle Royal is way better than this.
hey, if you guys post a Battle Royale doujin that’d be great.
to the person with the Battle Royale comment, i was thinking exactly the same thing.
Mind you, I’ve read both part 1 and 2 so now I’m commenting.
Story: 3/10
Interesting idea, poorly executed though. The deaths should’ve been more, let’s just say heroric. The deaths were definately out of place and not to mention very random, it really killed the hentai. Death and Hentai CAN mix if it is done properly.
Art: 2/10
Okay why do all the girls look the freakin’ same? They literally have the same crotch, body figure and face. Just because it is a doujin, it does not excuse a lack of variation. If it weren’t for the hair, I would’ve never been able to tell the differance between the girls. Ya know, you could’ve given them different chest sizes, face and such.
Another question, why are all the guys ugly? I know it is typical for the guys to always be ugly, it seems to be some kind of rule, but still. They also all looked the same. It bothered me to no end.
Sex itself:2/10
It was really put into random bits. I’m not a huge fan of rape, but even this could’ve been executed better. The actual sex between the brunette and her boyfriend was just random…
Over all: 2/10.
Thank you for taking the time to upload
even though alot of people dont appreciate it.
Its ok infact i like it…its better than the first one thanks admin^^
Its ok infact i like it…its better than the first one thanks admin^^