As anyone who follows my comments may have realised, I don’t just read these for “fap” time, I like to enjoy them as stories too. And this one fully satisfied.
My first impression of the artwork was that it was a little rough, but I soon changed my mind, the style suits it perfectly.
The plot was well developed, and the storyline was maintained throughout. I enjoyed reading the guy’s thoughts on the girls situation, his hopes and worries.
The ending was well designed. Hard to believe he didn’t notice… but then, he’d be pretty tired after a night like that.
All in all, this was one of the best stand-alone doujins that I’ve read to date. I’m adding this to my favourites folder.
Score: 5/5
Anonymous on
July 11th, 2008 1:39 am
The artwork wasn’t rough; the compression is just really bad. Looks like someone saved it with MSPaint or something.
Tomiyoko on
July 11th, 2008 2:27 am
I really liked the story, even if it was like 50 First Dates, and the art was amazing. I think it was the first time I read a hentai that had a guy with a hair cut like that : D very “real” Tomi likes. Plus it was soo cute, I couldn’t bring myself to finger myself *sigh* so I had to download it lolz. I just hate that it was censored D : Tomi hates blurry penises
Frostbyte on
July 11th, 2008 3:00 am
Hmmmm why did you take down the video? Did something happen since i never even got into the comments of it X_X Anyway good doujin.
Frostbyte on
July 11th, 2008 3:08 am
Addition to my last comment: The end of this doujin was great i was not the biggest fan of the art work but the story was amazing X_X Like really really amazing i thought it was going to end with her never newing then when it ended i felt kinda happy.
unknownshadows on
July 11th, 2008 3:15 am
XD That was awesome!But yeah Admin what did happen to the videos?
darkslavey on
July 11th, 2008 4:50 am
nice, also, wat an anazing comment by geliatric
Solipsis on
July 11th, 2008 6:18 am
Ahaha, is that really a fangirl commenting in this nice site?
This is Naruko Hanaharu’s work, the mangaka of Kamichu which has already turned into anime, Kamichu is clean from ecchi-ness that I was totally shocked the first time I know that he’s also drawing H-doujinshi, not a bad news though, hehe
wake on
July 11th, 2008 9:57 am
Short time memory lost eh…
I know somebody even worse
he can’t remember what did he does 10 minutes ago…
Anyway…the story’ so sweet..
8=D on
July 11th, 2008 11:35 am
yeah what happened to the video
awsomeness on
July 11th, 2008 5:53 pm
uh…the artist kinda copied the plot from 51st Date…
antialias on
July 11th, 2008 6:05 pm
Great story and artwork!!! Keep them coming plz!!
TheManHacker on
July 11th, 2008 11:31 pm
Nice Story….
Cloud on
July 12th, 2008 1:38 am
Well after reading some of the comments I kinda jumped the gun thinking this would be a great Doujin. Well they were right! this is an amazing Doujin! but it wasn’t the best I have seen, the one thing that made me dislike it was the censoring. There are really three basic types of censoring (with each type there are degrees on how much).
1. the blurry one that you find in much videos (this i feel is the worst kind!).
2. you have your censor bars, (the best because some people like to make the censor bars really small)
3. And you got your one where they take out part of the image. (like a whited out part of the picture, this isn’t as bad as blurring but oh god does it make me mad)
this one has the 3, and I don’t like the degree they use cause it stunts my imagination on trying to make it go away and think of what would have been there because i got nothing to work with.
But, besides that is was pretty much amazing. absolutly great story! The drawing was pretty good, but not at the top I would say. This deserves a 4 or better on the rating scale tho.
Score:
4.5/5
PervySage on
July 12th, 2008 11:29 am
The story was nice, in fact it was amazing. I felt sorry for the guy to have a whole day repeat itself over and over again everyday but the payoff was well worth it. In the end, I thought it was another loop but it had a nice twist which made the story complete from start to finish. ^_^
Anonymous on
July 13th, 2008 4:50 am
You know, considering they’re sexually active on a regular basis, and odds are the girl doesn’t know when her “safe” days are, you gotta wonder how she’s going to react when she starts waking pregnant?
Ifr22k on
July 13th, 2008 6:21 am
I agree with Geliatric, this is a great story and it’s very thought provoking. The funny thing about me and Doujins is that I rarely if ever get off on them. I mostly read them for the story, and sometimes I skip all the boring sex parts (especially if it’s poorly drawn) and just go straight to the dialogue where all the fun dialogue and emotional development and characterization are.
I… am… not… kidding! Seriously, I mean it! I loved this one, most definitely a 5/5 and a very interesting story. I want to believe that the love the couple feels for each other’ll make the girl remember and that they’ll get married someday, personally.
Ifr22k on
July 13th, 2008 6:23 am
Just to add some more clarification: I just like doujins because I think sex is the natural end results of a loving, comitted relationship, and I just like reading stories that don’t cut it out or censor it like it doesn’t exist because it’s a vital and very real part of a relationship, even say… a marriage.
So I like reading stuff like this to get my intellectual curiosity satisfied. It’s a very interesting exploration of how love and sex and emotional and romantic commitment’s related, and is an interesting psychological case study, just like “incest” stories are.
bobby on
July 16th, 2008 4:09 am
is it just me? or the plot device about the girl’s memory resetting the same one in 50 first dates?
O..o on
July 19th, 2008 4:35 am
THat was probably one of the best doujins i have read so far, because it finaly had a good plot to it!!!
and you do know, Why would it copy 50 first dates, Im pretty sure that film isnt in japan, and people losing memory like that is on a daily basis and actually happens so/.//
Redeye on
July 21st, 2008 11:36 pm
Aw. This was so cute.
kabute on
September 22nd, 2008 3:28 am
nice.. 5/5 i love the story
Zxar on
October 3rd, 2008 4:04 am
Wow… the story was very deep. I liked it. Drew me in big time.
Uh on
February 20th, 2009 1:03 am
WHY!!!!!! theres so many doujins with the images gone!!!!! ADMIN why oh why!!!!
Too Right on
June 7th, 2009 1:07 am
awwwwww that was cute
∞ on
June 12th, 2009 12:43 am
Very good
∞/5
Crim on
June 23rd, 2009 1:14 pm
GOOD ART
GOOD STORY
SIMPLY ASTONISHING 10/10 ^-^
manteli :3 on
June 28th, 2009 7:15 pm
I just loooooove it <33 story is so cute and awesome.
I have read this story so many times and will read it many times more ^^ relationshiop between these two is just so romantic and I am so jealous of them. :3
Vhtlytnd on
November 15th, 2009 2:02 pm
comment3
moonwatcher on
April 3rd, 2010 3:03 am
wow the ending friggin rocked definantly worth reading
Nice choice!
n.n i love it! <3 and 2nd
3rd
Wow… just… wow.
As anyone who follows my comments may have realised, I don’t just read these for “fap” time, I like to enjoy them as stories too. And this one fully satisfied.
My first impression of the artwork was that it was a little rough, but I soon changed my mind, the style suits it perfectly.
The plot was well developed, and the storyline was maintained throughout. I enjoyed reading the guy’s thoughts on the girls situation, his hopes and worries.
The ending was well designed. Hard to believe he didn’t notice… but then, he’d be pretty tired after a night like that.
All in all, this was one of the best stand-alone doujins that I’ve read to date. I’m adding this to my favourites folder.
Score: 5/5
The artwork wasn’t rough; the compression is just really bad. Looks like someone saved it with MSPaint or something.
I really liked the story, even if it was like 50 First Dates, and the art was amazing. I think it was the first time I read a hentai that had a guy with a hair cut like that : D very “real” Tomi likes. Plus it was soo cute, I couldn’t bring myself to finger myself *sigh* so I had to download it lolz. I just hate that it was censored D : Tomi hates blurry penises
Hmmmm why did you take down the video? Did something happen since i never even got into the comments of it X_X Anyway good doujin.
Addition to my last comment: The end of this doujin was great i was not the biggest fan of the art work but the story was amazing X_X Like really really amazing i thought it was going to end with her never newing then when it ended i felt kinda happy.
XD That was awesome!But yeah Admin what did happen to the videos?
nice, also, wat an anazing comment by geliatric
Ahaha, is that really a fangirl commenting in this nice site?
This is Naruko Hanaharu’s work, the mangaka of Kamichu which has already turned into anime, Kamichu is clean from ecchi-ness that I was totally shocked the first time I know that he’s also drawing H-doujinshi, not a bad news though, hehe
Short time memory lost eh…
I know somebody even worse
he can’t remember what did he does 10 minutes ago…
Anyway…the story’ so sweet..
yeah what happened to the video
uh…the artist kinda copied the plot from 51st Date…
Great story and artwork!!! Keep them coming plz!!
Nice Story….
Well after reading some of the comments I kinda jumped the gun thinking this would be a great Doujin. Well they were right! this is an amazing Doujin! but it wasn’t the best I have seen, the one thing that made me dislike it was the censoring. There are really three basic types of censoring (with each type there are degrees on how much).
1. the blurry one that you find in much videos (this i feel is the worst kind!).
2. you have your censor bars, (the best because some people like to make the censor bars really small)
3. And you got your one where they take out part of the image. (like a whited out part of the picture, this isn’t as bad as blurring but oh god does it make me mad)
this one has the 3, and I don’t like the degree they use cause it stunts my imagination on trying to make it go away and think of what would have been there because i got nothing to work with.
But, besides that is was pretty much amazing. absolutly great story! The drawing was pretty good, but not at the top I would say. This deserves a 4 or better on the rating scale tho.
Score:
4.5/5
The story was nice, in fact it was amazing. I felt sorry for the guy to have a whole day repeat itself over and over again everyday but the payoff was well worth it. In the end, I thought it was another loop but it had a nice twist which made the story complete from start to finish. ^_^
You know, considering they’re sexually active on a regular basis, and odds are the girl doesn’t know when her “safe” days are, you gotta wonder how she’s going to react when she starts waking pregnant?
I agree with Geliatric, this is a great story and it’s very thought provoking. The funny thing about me and Doujins is that I rarely if ever get off on them. I mostly read them for the story, and sometimes I skip all the boring sex parts (especially if it’s poorly drawn) and just go straight to the dialogue where all the fun dialogue and emotional development and characterization are.
I… am… not… kidding! Seriously, I mean it! I loved this one, most definitely a 5/5 and a very interesting story. I want to believe that the love the couple feels for each other’ll make the girl remember and that they’ll get married someday, personally.
Just to add some more clarification: I just like doujins because I think sex is the natural end results of a loving, comitted relationship, and I just like reading stories that don’t cut it out or censor it like it doesn’t exist because it’s a vital and very real part of a relationship, even say… a marriage.
So I like reading stuff like this to get my intellectual curiosity satisfied. It’s a very interesting exploration of how love and sex and emotional and romantic commitment’s related, and is an interesting psychological case study, just like “incest” stories are.
is it just me? or the plot device about the girl’s memory resetting the same one in 50 first dates?
THat was probably one of the best doujins i have read so far, because it finaly had a good plot to it!!!
and you do know, Why would it copy 50 first dates, Im pretty sure that film isnt in japan, and people losing memory like that is on a daily basis and actually happens so/.//
Aw. This was so cute.
nice.. 5/5 i love the story
Wow… the story was very deep. I liked it. Drew me in big time.
WHY!!!!!! theres so many doujins with the images gone!!!!! ADMIN why oh why!!!!
awwwwww that was cute
Very good
∞/5
GOOD ART
GOOD STORY
SIMPLY ASTONISHING 10/10 ^-^
I just loooooove it <33 story is so cute and awesome.
I have read this story so many times and will read it many times more ^^ relationshiop between these two is just so romantic and I am so jealous of them. :3
comment3
wow the ending friggin rocked definantly worth reading
great story…