Yes, Dark Matter, we know how much you liked the punishment one XD.
I think this might be a repost, but if it is, I haven’t reviewed it yet, so I might as well.
-Yotsuba
Yotsuba on
February 15th, 2009 7:14 pm
While the overall art style whit this doujin is very well done, the character designs are a bit wonky and swayed in strange ways through out the story. It doesn’t take aways from the experience, but there’s a few moments when its a little obvious and pulls you out of the story.
The plot is kinda average for a normal doujin, but what kept my attention was the subtle hints of funny moments that are sprinkled over the plot just to make is different from any other doujin, and there are a good few. Besides the plot being a little story, the story itself is a great length and more than makes up for it.
The censors are minimal black lines, and arn’t to noticeable.
Overall, there’s a good story to be had here, and even if the art is a little awkward at times, it holds it’s own as a normal doujin. Worth a read, at least.
3/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. The character designs seem to change a lot in this doujin. When there are close ups, they seem sturdy, but at any other moment, they seem a little less bold.
samuel l jackson on
February 15th, 2009 9:19 pm
who in the FUCK translated this!? ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER, DO YOU SPEAK IT!?! D:<
TheBigBoom on
February 16th, 2009 12:58 am
Ah, hoped everyone had a Happy Valentine.
The Story seemed random, examples would be the signs and ending, but of course you could find some humor in randomness.
The Art was nice, but it’s nothing to bring into mention for this doujin.
The Censors are short black strips with no transparency, but they don’t block what the average censors would block. so it’s a so-so, on this.
I give this: 3/5
-TheBigBoom
RandomComment on
February 16th, 2009 1:22 am
I’ve seen all the doujin that been posted on doujinland and I don’t remember this one. So I don’t know how it’s a “repost”.
I hate the numbers!!! on
February 16th, 2009 9:14 am
WOOOT 1ST
Jear Damit 2.
woah,, the nearest place to the first i’ve made,, ^_^
4th?
nice doujin..^_^
I liked the punishment one better
hu wants ma number xD
When he says “make me unsee it” i lol’d
Not a repost, just an old doujin.
Yes, Dark Matter, we know how much you liked the punishment one XD.
I think this might be a repost, but if it is, I haven’t reviewed it yet, so I might as well.
-Yotsuba
While the overall art style whit this doujin is very well done, the character designs are a bit wonky and swayed in strange ways through out the story. It doesn’t take aways from the experience, but there’s a few moments when its a little obvious and pulls you out of the story.
The plot is kinda average for a normal doujin, but what kept my attention was the subtle hints of funny moments that are sprinkled over the plot just to make is different from any other doujin, and there are a good few. Besides the plot being a little story, the story itself is a great length and more than makes up for it.
The censors are minimal black lines, and arn’t to noticeable.
Overall, there’s a good story to be had here, and even if the art is a little awkward at times, it holds it’s own as a normal doujin. Worth a read, at least.
3/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. The character designs seem to change a lot in this doujin. When there are close ups, they seem sturdy, but at any other moment, they seem a little less bold.
who in the FUCK translated this!? ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER, DO YOU SPEAK IT!?! D:<
Ah, hoped everyone had a Happy Valentine.
The Story seemed random, examples would be the signs and ending, but of course you could find some humor in randomness.
The Art was nice, but it’s nothing to bring into mention for this doujin.
The Censors are short black strips with no transparency, but they don’t block what the average censors would block. so it’s a so-so, on this.
I give this: 3/5
-TheBigBoom
I’ve seen all the doujin that been posted on doujinland and I don’t remember this one. So I don’t know how it’s a “repost”.
:P