Shunshoku Temptation

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  1. Yuda Omaru on April 23rd, 2011 2:08 am

    nice art good doujin

  2. someone on April 18th, 2011 1:37 am

    I’d give my standard comment, but the validator pretty much hit it right on the head….

  3. jimmy on April 17th, 2011 2:22 am

    i like the credit, but i do have to agree with the validator he/she says it all man

  4. Pilfonio Matutes on April 16th, 2011 7:41 pm

    ¡¡¡VAYA PAR DE PUTITAS TAN CALIENTES!!!

  5. TheValidator on April 16th, 2011 6:57 pm

    @Majeh I totally agree with you, although I don’t think the story was rushed, the author just decided to not put it in there. Okay, a little, but you know what I mean.
    And it got extra points for the strange censoring. It may barely contribute to the doujin, but it’s quite unique to see.

  6. TheValidator on April 16th, 2011 6:54 pm

    Short doujin, barely any story…

    Well, the art is pretty good. It’s nothing that special though. It’s pretty well drawn, but the overall shading is minimal, and the outlining isn’t that well executed.
    But the characters are nicely drawn, and it’s still pretty detailed.

    The censors are there, but there is something funny about this. The first 9 pages don’t contain any censoring whatsoever, and after that only the pussy’s are (barely) censored. Normally with a censored doujin, the dick should also be censored. Guess it isn’t necessary anymore…?

    The story… What story? I’m serious, there isn’t any. If you count a total of about half a page which provides just a little bit of knowledge of what the fuck is going on. And even that is far-fetched… I mean, anemia? Really? And he doesn’t use any medicine for that to counter-act the effects? I mean, not collapsing would be nice, but I guess he loves the smell of fresh dirt and gravel.

    Rating: 6/10
    Validated: Nope, not a chance. The story is barely there, the sex scene is standard (even for a threesome), and although I said the art is good, it’s still basic either, and nothing we haven’t seen before in other doujins.

  7. Anonymous on April 16th, 2011 6:10 pm

    style is good

  8. Palader on April 16th, 2011 2:36 pm

    the credits is funny and the doujin is so GOOD.
    Nice threesome.

  9. sex adictted on April 16th, 2011 12:53 pm

    im hOt

  10. Infinity Rush on April 16th, 2011 2:55 am

    With boobs

  11. Infinity Rush on April 16th, 2011 2:54 am

    Why do the nurse me remind of Yuki from No Bra

  12. DARKSIDE77 on April 16th, 2011 1:35 am

    If you idiots have nothing better to do than to jerk each other off don’t write anything…give constructive criticism it helps the artist! I agree with Majeh seems a bit rushed, art is clean though.

  13. ._. on April 15th, 2011 10:06 pm

    nurse is hot and the credit panel made me chuckle ^.^

  14. Chronos on April 15th, 2011 9:58 pm

    Wow….so weak this I dont want to even try to comment about this

  15. bholead on April 15th, 2011 9:41 pm

    8…payah

  16. DonPedro on April 15th, 2011 8:56 pm

    Yup the story and sex is kinda rushed but overall still good.

  17. Ezy on April 15th, 2011 7:27 pm

    :L

  18. Majeh on April 15th, 2011 6:39 pm

    Huh….Well, I’ve seen worse. The story feels rushed. They really tried to throw in a bunch of story and details into very few frames. Sadly it took a pretty negative effect on the overall feel of this one. The art was good…but something just seemed a bit off.
    Overall pretty average.
    4.5/10

  19. ultra penis on April 15th, 2011 5:47 pm

    shit my mom just walked in and saw the comments

  20. gandhi on April 15th, 2011 5:43 pm

    3rd, bchessss

  21. ultra penis on April 15th, 2011 5:23 pm

    i just blew a load over ur face

  22. ultra penis on April 15th, 2011 5:21 pm

    my dick is soooooo hard