what’s so special on being the first one to comment anyway…. well nice art… more loli heheh.. btw Fifth lol
OOOOO on
April 21st, 2009 6:12 pm
Nice one! Enough of loli!!!
OOOOO on
April 21st, 2009 6:21 pm
By the way, I loved the censors!
Chris Redfield on
April 21st, 2009 6:41 pm
that was a good one
Joe Dirtay on
April 21st, 2009 7:50 pm
nice. solid 10
LOL on
April 21st, 2009 7:56 pm
lol special train
Lovely Love on
April 21st, 2009 8:29 pm
i haven’t read it yet..
but the picture is
First !! LOL
i like Train Rape
MetalDemon on
April 21st, 2009 8:53 pm
Okay, here I am again in place of PervySage and Cloud. The story is a little plain, if you ask me. Guy gets on train, train’s filled with sluts, guy fucks them, runs into dream girl, fucks her, the end. The art was fairly good, not the best I’ve seen. I mean, the guy’s dick looks like a tree trunk, LOL. No censors, that’s a plus.
Story= .5 Art= 1.5 Censors= 2 4/6
- MetalDemon \m/(^o^)\m/
jman on
April 21st, 2009 9:14 pm
by the way this isnt lolicon,i dont know what made you guys think that
mei2 on
April 21st, 2009 9:39 pm
loved it
sacheleo on
April 21st, 2009 10:31 pm
haha im 13th to comment
JDogG on
April 22nd, 2009 12:15 am
this reminds me of rush hour shota
RarA on
April 22nd, 2009 3:04 am
didnt like the art
i didnt even finish it>.>
etwgfdsg on
April 22nd, 2009 3:23 am
woo
s-man on
April 22nd, 2009 6:22 am
unique
Damn on
April 22nd, 2009 7:33 am
he’s dick is…… dude…. did you see the size of that thing, its unnatural
a-grr on
April 22nd, 2009 9:37 am
Well, first things first. I just gotta say… what the fuck! looks like he carved that thing himself =P
Art was ave, story was verging below ave, and his cock was off the ’seriously fucked-up’ scale. It sorta disturbed me from the main point of what I was reading it for.
Decided to call it a day earlier than what I prefer.
Censors were the only plus side of it however.
Was gonna give it a 3, but lack of excitement give it a 2/5
no peace today then (>.<)
kino on
April 22nd, 2009 5:39 pm
that train in this story is true……
kazuo on
April 22nd, 2009 7:05 pm
photoshopped!
Dig dug on
April 22nd, 2009 8:07 pm
his dick literally was a wood o_0, and wtf with those veins??? lol
JackP()T on
April 23rd, 2009 11:24 am
WTF?! wahahaha are those roots on his dick?! wahahahahaha… it left me with a tummy ache coz i could’nt stop laughing.. hahahahah
Hai on
April 23rd, 2009 9:56 pm
Freaking wack story, art=ok, and dick=too big and looked like a fucking stump.
kastt on
April 24th, 2009 4:19 am
@kino no way in hell is that true… if so someone please show me some proof,reason why i won’t proof is come think about it a community of girls on a train organizing their targets to f__k “hot guys”(that was finger quoting…im not mad or anything just like to put shit out there IM NOT GAY just don’t like people sayin stupid stuf) so come on that highly unlikely…. if not someone please prove me wrong
cerberus on
April 29th, 2009 11:00 pm
im sarry to say but matel demon is right you need a better story line and find a better way not to make a guys dick look like tree with roots lol but keep trying in the drawing good luck
lol on
May 1st, 2009 4:02 pm
how do I get on that train? lol
Requester on
May 2nd, 2009 12:16 pm
That guy is innocent. I can understand his feeling. I’m always late at working but always ON TIME to WORK!
Anon on
June 25th, 2009 11:44 pm
What’s so special about it? I ride that train to work every day.
max on
July 14th, 2009 2:01 am
…..
ok on
August 31st, 2009 6:19 pm
senta no meu pau cabeça de abacate seu imbecil chupa meu pencil na pika da minha bunda chuta no seu cu,pinto de buceta,tu é treta pega nas tetas!
First lololololololollolololololololol
sweet second!
oh wait.
crap.
Yeay 3rd.
fourth?
what’s so special on being the first one to comment anyway…. well nice art… more loli heheh.. btw Fifth lol
Nice one! Enough of loli!!!
By the way, I loved the censors!
that was a good one
nice. solid 10
lol special train
i haven’t read it yet..
but the picture is
First !! LOL
i like Train Rape
Okay, here I am again in place of PervySage and Cloud. The story is a little plain, if you ask me. Guy gets on train, train’s filled with sluts, guy fucks them, runs into dream girl, fucks her, the end. The art was fairly good, not the best I’ve seen. I mean, the guy’s dick looks like a tree trunk, LOL. No censors, that’s a plus.
Story= .5 Art= 1.5 Censors= 2 4/6
- MetalDemon \m/(^o^)\m/
by the way this isnt lolicon,i dont know what made you guys think that
loved it
haha im 13th to comment
this reminds me of rush hour shota
didnt like the art
i didnt even finish it>.>
woo
unique
he’s dick is…… dude…. did you see the size of that thing, its unnatural
Well, first things first. I just gotta say… what the fuck! looks like he carved that thing himself =P
Art was ave, story was verging below ave, and his cock was off the ’seriously fucked-up’ scale. It sorta disturbed me from the main point of what I was reading it for.
Decided to call it a day earlier than what I prefer.
Censors were the only plus side of it however.
Was gonna give it a 3, but lack of excitement give it a 2/5
no peace today then (>.<)
that train in this story is true……
photoshopped!
his dick literally was a wood o_0, and wtf with those veins??? lol
WTF?! wahahaha are those roots on his dick?! wahahahahaha… it left me with a tummy ache coz i could’nt stop laughing.. hahahahah
Freaking wack story, art=ok, and dick=too big and looked like a fucking stump.
@kino no way in hell is that true… if so someone please show me some proof,reason why i won’t proof is come think about it a community of girls on a train organizing their targets to f__k “hot guys”(that was finger quoting…im not mad or anything just like to put shit out there IM NOT GAY just don’t like people sayin stupid stuf) so come on that highly unlikely…. if not someone please prove me wrong
im sarry to say but matel demon is right you need a better story line and find a better way not to make a guys dick look like tree with roots lol but keep trying in the drawing good luck
how do I get on that train? lol
That guy is innocent. I can understand his feeling. I’m always late at working but always ON TIME to WORK!
What’s so special about it? I ride that train to work every day.
…..
senta no meu pau cabeça de abacate seu imbecil chupa meu pencil na pika da minha bunda chuta no seu cu,pinto de buceta,tu é treta pega nas tetas!
nice!!!!