ok… well I guess I will be the one here to step up and not do numbers after Someone (is that the someone I remember?)
well this one was, ehh, the story was good, but didn’t wrap me in it. I can’t explain specifically why this didn’t cut it for me, maybe the art style took me out.
The art was, blah. To many damn lines! lines for shades lines for blushing lines, ok ok we get it they are continuously blushing, you don’t have to draw it! And a bad thing to mention… stupid whited out censors! UGGG!! It’s not the worse art, but damn, use light and dark black’s…
Anything else: againg *whited out censors*… not a plus
Score:
2/5 (1.5 for story + .5 for art…)
-Cloud
PervySage on
December 11th, 2008 7:12 pm
Appeared to me like this one is a loli but that’s just me. It says normal so, meh.
Story was good. Nice transition with the whole shyness thing. It’s their first time and the girl is the one taking the advance.
Art was alright. It didn’t appear as bland as some doujins. Dark tones was a plus. Censor strips just sucked.
SCORE 3/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
Fucking Censors on
December 11th, 2008 7:33 pm
Fucking censors.
Bran on
December 12th, 2008 1:38 am
Yeah ! I hate censor :(
Master Chief on
December 15th, 2008 3:58 am
Not too bad, but the shy kids trying to do it thing was a little awkward. And of course the censors really sucked…as usual. Overall o.k.
6/10
MASTER CHIEF LIKE LOLI
Renesme123 on
December 27th, 2008 4:19 am
Cloud hmmmm maybe you should create a Cloud approve section seriously no laugh your views seem right on
wild on
June 12th, 2009 12:38 am
PPL should ban lolis……. kill me I spoke in words only a worm would speak……. MORE LOLI!!!!!
Good one thx :)
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ok… well I guess I will be the one here to step up and not do numbers after Someone (is that the someone I remember?)
well this one was, ehh, the story was good, but didn’t wrap me in it. I can’t explain specifically why this didn’t cut it for me, maybe the art style took me out.
The art was, blah. To many damn lines! lines for shades lines for blushing lines, ok ok we get it they are continuously blushing, you don’t have to draw it! And a bad thing to mention… stupid whited out censors! UGGG!! It’s not the worse art, but damn, use light and dark black’s…
Anything else: againg *whited out censors*… not a plus
Score:
2/5 (1.5 for story + .5 for art…)
-Cloud
Appeared to me like this one is a loli but that’s just me. It says normal so, meh.
Story was good. Nice transition with the whole shyness thing. It’s their first time and the girl is the one taking the advance.
Art was alright. It didn’t appear as bland as some doujins. Dark tones was a plus. Censor strips just sucked.
SCORE 3/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
Fucking censors.
Yeah ! I hate censor :(
Not too bad, but the shy kids trying to do it thing was a little awkward. And of course the censors really sucked…as usual. Overall o.k.
6/10
MASTER CHIEF LIKE LOLI
Cloud hmmmm maybe you should create a Cloud approve section seriously no laugh your views seem right on
PPL should ban lolis……. kill me I spoke in words only a worm would speak……. MORE LOLI!!!!!