The title intrigues me hmmm I will read and rate!
p.s 2nd and onward numbers I place a curse on you is you number! After you fap to this your penises will shival and die! Muhahahahahahaha!!!!!!
<3
Warpednote on
December 31st, 2008 2:53 am
Mwahaha 5th
Greed is Good on
December 31st, 2008 3:15 am
hmm..
Znow on
December 31st, 2008 3:22 am
geez… could you please stop saying your number by any chance? -__-”
okay i understand, why someone´s feeling kinda “special”, being the first one to comment… but being the 5th or the 20th isn´t worth of mentioning i think (plus most ppl just leaving their number instead of adding some kind of review at least, which is… not so good).
But back to topic: there´s not much of a story at all, but i like the art and the censors aren´t bad either, so it´s still a nice one in the end - let´s say 4/5* ^__^
mfg
Znow
Satoko_loli on
December 31st, 2008 4:30 am
fucking popups!!! >:0……anyway…-*starts over* grr
bbbaaaahhhh!!!! 2 pissed off to write it again!
I’ll do it later…
Rates 4/5
<3
lololo. on
December 31st, 2008 5:42 am
Stupid numbers.
9th
nero on
December 31st, 2008 6:44 am
10th lolz
that reviewer guy on
December 31st, 2008 6:47 am
well looks like cloud’s not here… hrm well i guess i’ll review for the time being
The good: the artwork is not bad but not great either. The characters looked presentable and the girl’s personality was cute. There arnt many censor bars in this doujin which to me is a plus.
The bad: pretty much no story… which was kind of a letdown, but thats what i get for compairing a one-shot to a series like tayu-tayu or hatsu-inu. still, it felt like the beginning was moving too slow, then it was rushed in the middle to get to the sex, then slowed down again so that the sex could be exaggerated.
Ending comments: good artwork, only a few censor bars, and nice sex scenes but too rushed and no story.
3.5/5
Cloud on
December 31st, 2008 8:46 am
@ that reviewer guy
wow, I just read it and I was saying to myself how much I liked the story, and you say there was ‘pretty much no story’. And trying to compare anything to tayutaya is just cruel. That is like comparing a god to a moral, tayutayu is just TOO AMAZING.
Well I thought this was a great Doujin.
The story here was something I very much saw. In a matter of fact, in the middle sex the character even stopped to analyze the relationship he had with her, I mean come on! This SO had story, and a good one.
The art was great! I very much like this modern style of drawing, where it is mostly digital, it really works nicely to correct mistakes, and make every page perfect. Censors weren’t a pain, and the sex was good.
*side note* this is the first Doujin in a while to have the style in sex where it shows the inside of the girl, good change in pace I think.
Anything else?: hey now, if you go into any Doujin trying to compare it to tayutayu, your going to be sad.. a lot.
Score:
4/5
-Cloud
WanWan on
December 31st, 2008 9:25 am
@that reviewer guy (too)
I also came to like the story very much. You won’t find many similar stories with that kind of characters.
About the artwort… yeah i think the artist can still improve a little and i personally don’t like “blush lines”. There are many of them which make the girl look uncuter then she would look normally. Also not drawing the eyes of the girl could improve the kawaiiii~ factor, but maybe the artist did this on purpose… who knows ;)
anyway a good dojin… will maybe become one of my favourites.
Shame on
December 31st, 2008 12:01 pm
A Good (nobody gets raped or something like that) story and great art. I like.
loki_of_oz on
December 31st, 2008 1:49 pm
love this 1, thought it was already on this site tough, has a great story, nice art minimal censers,
10/10
damn on
December 31st, 2008 2:45 pm
Merry Christmas Everybody!
PervySage on
December 31st, 2008 3:06 pm
Pretty good doujin. Definitely worth a read.
Story was nice. It had transition and a plot. The girl had the latter one too. XD
Art was good. Only above average, though. Censors was a plus. Black strips weren’t that annoying.
SCORE 4/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
rurouni on
December 31st, 2008 8:05 pm
happy newyear
T5J8F8 on
December 31st, 2008 8:40 pm
That smile looks like an open cat mouth…
Still gonna go through it — to whatever degree — though. Style looks smooth, and while no others here are tagged for this artist, it’s a familiar-looking style, whether that’s to seeing it before or it being derivative. Still, when it’s free, translated pr0n, having a “norm” like this ain’t none too shabby.
approx. 4 hours 20 minutes to New Year here, LOL.
Otonashi on
December 31st, 2008 10:07 pm
Your average childhood friends fall in love. But I always love those romantic kind of stories, and the girl was SOOOOOOO KEWT!
T5J8F8 on
December 31st, 2008 11:14 pm
I know! This whole thing was sickeningly, sweetly cute. My heart was going a bit faster just from the heady dreaminess of it all.
I also like the bit of dogginess (geez, I don’t know if to squee or puke/ralph), am wondering if it’s “ma-ge” or “mage”, Rickroll’s been affecting me (”We’re no strangers”), for large breasts, they’re very nice (and the inverted nipple attention kinda hit me in more than one way, from casual curiosity to past memories of varying fondnesses), and the lack of girl-hurting was rather a relief, though a ‘typical’ squeezed in was the “make you mine” bit (where did I read that recently? a recent upload, or something from a gander through my HDD ‘collection’?).
Anyway, DO approve, and wouldn’t mind seeing more of this guy (gal? gotta be; too sappy otherwise ) pop up here.
Mr.Nameless on
January 1st, 2009 12:15 am
fucking last one.lol
17 m on
January 1st, 2009 12:57 am
It has been a while since there has been a incest one.
Anonymous on
January 1st, 2009 12:25 pm
what ?? its been a whole day since an incest.
BUSH on
January 1st, 2009 10:02 pm
wow i just managed to suck my own dick just now :O
sai on
January 2nd, 2009 12:16 am
congrats! Now wat about mine?
anon on
January 3rd, 2009 2:10 am
first
Sacheleo on
January 3rd, 2009 4:57 am
Just listen to the people who say typing FIRST SECOND THIRD ect is bad, just let them be. Its like you being in line to get the hottest movie or game or to you to be hooked up with the hottest chick in the world, other people are gunna say bad shit to you and about you but you still keep with that chick or stay in the land, its the same exact thing as the FIRST SECOND THIRD ect just online and not as life-related and some what fun to the people who do that.
Sacheleo on
January 3rd, 2009 4:58 am
Just listen, to the people who say typing FIRST SECOND THIRD ect is bad, just let them be. Its like you being in line to get the hottest movie or game or to you to be hooked up with the hottest chick in the world, other people are gunna say bad shit to you and about you but you still keep with that chick or stay in the land, its the same exact thing as the FIRST SECOND THIRD ect just online and not as life-related and some what fun to the people who do that.
Anonymous on
April 9th, 2009 5:21 pm
This is so fucking hot.
Period.
wanting on
April 28th, 2009 9:40 am
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What 9000? on
May 10th, 2009 3:08 am
I’m over 9000!
∞ on
June 11th, 2009 7:42 am
I like her personality she reminds me of someone I lost
lol 1st
second!
cannot resist 2nd!!!
The title intrigues me hmmm I will read and rate!
p.s 2nd and onward numbers I place a curse on you is you number! After you fap to this your penises will shival and die! Muhahahahahahaha!!!!!!
<3
Mwahaha 5th
hmm..
geez… could you please stop saying your number by any chance? -__-”
okay i understand, why someone´s feeling kinda “special”, being the first one to comment… but being the 5th or the 20th isn´t worth of mentioning i think (plus most ppl just leaving their number instead of adding some kind of review at least, which is… not so good).
But back to topic: there´s not much of a story at all, but i like the art and the censors aren´t bad either, so it´s still a nice one in the end - let´s say 4/5* ^__^
mfg
Znow
fucking popups!!! >:0……anyway…-*starts over* grr
bbbaaaahhhh!!!! 2 pissed off to write it again!
I’ll do it later…
Rates 4/5
<3
Stupid numbers.
9th
10th lolz
well looks like cloud’s not here… hrm well i guess i’ll review for the time being
The good: the artwork is not bad but not great either. The characters looked presentable and the girl’s personality was cute. There arnt many censor bars in this doujin which to me is a plus.
The bad: pretty much no story… which was kind of a letdown, but thats what i get for compairing a one-shot to a series like tayu-tayu or hatsu-inu. still, it felt like the beginning was moving too slow, then it was rushed in the middle to get to the sex, then slowed down again so that the sex could be exaggerated.
Ending comments: good artwork, only a few censor bars, and nice sex scenes but too rushed and no story.
3.5/5
@ that reviewer guy
wow, I just read it and I was saying to myself how much I liked the story, and you say there was ‘pretty much no story’. And trying to compare anything to tayutaya is just cruel. That is like comparing a god to a moral, tayutayu is just TOO AMAZING.
Well I thought this was a great Doujin.
The story here was something I very much saw. In a matter of fact, in the middle sex the character even stopped to analyze the relationship he had with her, I mean come on! This SO had story, and a good one.
The art was great! I very much like this modern style of drawing, where it is mostly digital, it really works nicely to correct mistakes, and make every page perfect. Censors weren’t a pain, and the sex was good.
*side note* this is the first Doujin in a while to have the style in sex where it shows the inside of the girl, good change in pace I think.
Anything else?: hey now, if you go into any Doujin trying to compare it to tayutayu, your going to be sad.. a lot.
Score:
4/5
-Cloud
@that reviewer guy (too)
I also came to like the story very much. You won’t find many similar stories with that kind of characters.
About the artwort… yeah i think the artist can still improve a little and i personally don’t like “blush lines”. There are many of them which make the girl look uncuter then she would look normally. Also not drawing the eyes of the girl could improve the kawaiiii~ factor, but maybe the artist did this on purpose… who knows ;)
anyway a good dojin… will maybe become one of my favourites.
A Good (nobody gets raped or something like that) story and great art. I like.
love this 1, thought it was already on this site tough, has a great story, nice art minimal censers,
10/10
Merry Christmas Everybody!
Pretty good doujin. Definitely worth a read.
Story was nice. It had transition and a plot. The girl had the latter one too. XD
Art was good. Only above average, though. Censors was a plus. Black strips weren’t that annoying.
SCORE 4/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
happy newyear
That smile looks like an open cat mouth…
Still gonna go through it — to whatever degree — though. Style looks smooth, and while no others here are tagged for this artist, it’s a familiar-looking style, whether that’s to seeing it before or it being derivative. Still, when it’s free, translated pr0n, having a “norm” like this ain’t none too shabby.
approx. 4 hours 20 minutes to New Year here, LOL.
Your average childhood friends fall in love. But I always love those romantic kind of stories, and the girl was SOOOOOOO KEWT!
I know! This whole thing was sickeningly, sweetly cute. My heart was going a bit faster just from the heady dreaminess of it all.
I also like the bit of dogginess (geez, I don’t know if to squee or puke/ralph), am wondering if it’s “ma-ge” or “mage”, Rickroll’s been affecting me (”We’re no strangers”), for large breasts, they’re very nice (and the inverted nipple attention kinda hit me in more than one way, from casual curiosity to past memories of varying fondnesses), and the lack of girl-hurting was rather a relief, though a ‘typical’ squeezed in was the “make you mine” bit (where did I read that recently? a recent upload, or something from a gander through my HDD ‘collection’?).
Anyway, DO approve, and wouldn’t mind seeing more of this guy (gal? gotta be; too sappy otherwise ) pop up here.
fucking last one.lol
It has been a while since there has been a incest one.
what ?? its been a whole day since an incest.
wow i just managed to suck my own dick just now :O
congrats! Now wat about mine?
first
Just listen to the people who say typing FIRST SECOND THIRD ect is bad, just let them be. Its like you being in line to get the hottest movie or game or to you to be hooked up with the hottest chick in the world, other people are gunna say bad shit to you and about you but you still keep with that chick or stay in the land, its the same exact thing as the FIRST SECOND THIRD ect just online and not as life-related and some what fun to the people who do that.
Just listen, to the people who say typing FIRST SECOND THIRD ect is bad, just let them be. Its like you being in line to get the hottest movie or game or to you to be hooked up with the hottest chick in the world, other people are gunna say bad shit to you and about you but you still keep with that chick or stay in the land, its the same exact thing as the FIRST SECOND THIRD ect just online and not as life-related and some what fun to the people who do that.
This is so fucking hot.
Period.
Has been removed from Depositfiles and EasyShare is timing out. Help Please!!!
I’m over 9000!
I like her personality she reminds me of someone I lost
∞/5
putang ina nyo