guys plz dont be like the people from doujin-moe and do the number thing. its really annoying and in a way immature. just leave actual comments plz.
i liked this doujin alot, i cant wait for the other volumes >.<
sumthing though iw as wondering is why are the last 2 pages doubled?
5/5
n ex on
August 11th, 2008 7:18 pm
I don’t really like this one.
The Art isn’t very good. And the Story is so far not really exciting.
I don’t think the next part will be better, but mayby I’m wrong.
Fronzel on
August 11th, 2008 8:54 pm
Is that some lolita face and big tits!?
The story’s an absolute bore, though…
Henry Touchdown on
August 11th, 2008 10:51 pm
And she still hasnt sucked any cock
... on
August 11th, 2008 11:34 pm
we need more numbers.
it’s kinda cool to see the numbers.
it makes this site unique.
i want you to do the numbers all the time. it’s really great.
Nya? on
August 11th, 2008 11:45 pm
8th
Zikten on
August 12th, 2008 12:57 am
Didn’t she do some sucking in the first chapter?
O.o on
August 12th, 2008 1:44 am
O hai guise
frosted butts on
August 12th, 2008 3:08 am
I’m actually waiting for The Mommy Who Left And Came Back to get back on track..
Cloud on
August 12th, 2008 6:05 am
A continuation? maybe.
alright, well I have already stated that I don’t believe this art style is the best, cuz I feel it is so pencil to paper and makes me fall out of the Doujin to make me notice it. Ya I understand there are other that don’t feel this, but for those who like to know what I feel when reading that it.
The story funny at times and hot, I like it but then again, WTF is wrong with japan I just can’t believe that molesting is SO common that if someone is caught they won’t be immediately arrested. It just takes me out of the Doujin again cuz I would hope to god that guy is thrown in jail to be taught a lesson at least. I don’t like tho how it is in the guys mind, kinda like when an anime doesn’t know what to do so they decided to do an episode in the frame of another person to mix it up.. I just thought it was too soon, what happened to that girl’s life huh, I don’t want to learn about the guy
wow, too much writing.. I will try to keep that down
Anything else?: I agree with “n ex” I can’t tell if the next part will be better… (but this is still good)
Score:
4/5
@ “…”
NO! just NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! u say
“it makes this site unique.”
about numbers, are you crazy? every flipping comment section on like all websites have these guys commenting “First!” holy god we need to do with out them, numbers might be the worst thing ever happened to comments. Then you go on to say
“i want you to do the numbers all the time. it’s really great.”
omg, no……. my eyes are bleeding!
Geno on
August 12th, 2008 10:44 am
aye you know what your saying when you say 1st 2nd and 3rd? Your saying your the first person to be retarded and gay while sticking your dick in a vacuum for that day. not only does it make you look stupid but it detracts from the legitimate comments to the doujin because some of us have to post and ask you to stop being a FUCKING MORON!! so just grow up, stop and go fap one out real quick
PervySage on
August 12th, 2008 1:23 pm
Most comics depict the current or historical situation of the place of origin. If so, WTF IS WRONG WITH JAPAN! Is molesting a common sight nowadays? It kind of gives the wrong idea to the trains in Japan. Molesters should not be taken lightly, TO JAIL WITH THEM!
Story starts off the same-train scene. But sad to say, there was really no plot. They immediately got to it which was kind of disappointing for me. I prefer those doujins with story in them. Doujins like these appear hollow.
Barely noticed the censor strips too. Nicely done with this one.
And what’s up with telling her weakness anyways? She’s giving a hint that she wants IT. And the guy just keeps on talking so much. He just won’t shut up. In the end, the girl appeared like an idiotic, clueless slut.
SCORE 3/5
PervySage on
August 12th, 2008 1:26 pm
PS. NO TO NUMBERS! It’s just a waste of space. Takes up what is meant for a good comment.
PSS. MORE LOLIS!
KeZ_MzK on
August 13th, 2008 4:56 am
If there was a job where you had to review doujins, Cloud would be the absolute master xD, lol.
Numbers FTW on
August 14th, 2008 5:57 pm
‘Tis a tradition you’re trying to ruin here.
19th
what good is space if you can’t waste some of it?
haha on
August 15th, 2008 4:53 am
20th
erick tjendriawan on
August 18th, 2008 9:13 am
I want like that, WANT!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS REALLY GOOD
me on
September 26th, 2008 9:05 pm
meth meth meth
me on
September 26th, 2008 9:06 pm
Molestation is erotic, meth. These damn pop-ups are pissing me off, meth.
me on
September 26th, 2008 9:07 pm
Meth, its not loli if there are breasts, meth.
me on
September 26th, 2008 9:11 pm
Meth, I have made the 26 comment, meth. WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA… meth.
Renesme123 on
December 28th, 2008 7:29 am
Cloud stop bleeding your staining the carpet! I half agree with you on the number thing as for the story critque I shall keep to mahself for I have not read this yet!
P.S
I woud like to see 20-30 comments of #s i think that be cool and lllloooonnngggg! Wwwooo to #s!!!!
Cloud on
December 28th, 2008 10:58 pm
@ Renesme123
…. 20-30 number comments, and I might loose all blood in my body.. I would die, don’t worry about the carpet when my health is at stake!
haha, tho thanks for the tip
-Cloud
Renesme123 on
February 2nd, 2009 2:20 am
I love you cloud! XD
∞ on
June 16th, 2009 10:38 am
I knew it was going to have a funny ending lol
∞/5
Black Cancer on
July 9th, 2009 9:01 am
Go for the chick at the end, dude!
Anonymoose on
October 21st, 2009 2:31 pm
While I fapped to this, I had the TV turned on, it was on Comedy Central, and Comedy Central was playing the Colbert Report.
Usually, it’s just background noise. However, this episode featured a segment on the Dow, calling the segment “Money Shot” and making it appear as if the economy were a slut.
I found myself cumming at the same time as the segment “peaked”, and I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair. Once I regained my composure and put my pants back on, I decided to share my story here.
Doomspider on
January 17th, 2010 11:33 am
Colbert Report is the metaphorical bomb, as is this doujin series.
XxFatexX on
July 8th, 2010 5:02 am
you guys should stop worrying so much about # either side it doesn’t bother me either way i would just perfer an actual comment.Good doujin sir.
Prince of halcyon on
July 22nd, 2010 8:07 pm
I dont get “pervy sages comment,he has a problem with molesting in this even though its just a fictional story,then he asks for”loli”which is KIDS having SEX!im sorry but some of the people on here are a little slow.and i’ve seen alot of manga/anime and i know for a fact that the art in this is beautiful.
good doujin
2. ^^ Jear its gooood^^
good
4th xD
guys plz dont be like the people from doujin-moe and do the number thing. its really annoying and in a way immature. just leave actual comments plz.
i liked this doujin alot, i cant wait for the other volumes >.<
sumthing though iw as wondering is why are the last 2 pages doubled?
5/5
I don’t really like this one.
The Art isn’t very good. And the Story is so far not really exciting.
I don’t think the next part will be better, but mayby I’m wrong.
Is that some lolita face and big tits!?
The story’s an absolute bore, though…
And she still hasnt sucked any cock
we need more numbers.
it’s kinda cool to see the numbers.
it makes this site unique.
i want you to do the numbers all the time. it’s really great.
8th
Didn’t she do some sucking in the first chapter?
O hai guise
I’m actually waiting for The Mommy Who Left And Came Back to get back on track..
A continuation? maybe.
alright, well I have already stated that I don’t believe this art style is the best, cuz I feel it is so pencil to paper and makes me fall out of the Doujin to make me notice it. Ya I understand there are other that don’t feel this, but for those who like to know what I feel when reading that it.
The story funny at times and hot, I like it but then again, WTF is wrong with japan I just can’t believe that molesting is SO common that if someone is caught they won’t be immediately arrested. It just takes me out of the Doujin again cuz I would hope to god that guy is thrown in jail to be taught a lesson at least. I don’t like tho how it is in the guys mind, kinda like when an anime doesn’t know what to do so they decided to do an episode in the frame of another person to mix it up.. I just thought it was too soon, what happened to that girl’s life huh, I don’t want to learn about the guy
wow, too much writing.. I will try to keep that down
Anything else?: I agree with “n ex” I can’t tell if the next part will be better… (but this is still good)
Score:
4/5
@ “…”
NO! just NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! u say
“it makes this site unique.”
about numbers, are you crazy? every flipping comment section on like all websites have these guys commenting “First!” holy god we need to do with out them, numbers might be the worst thing ever happened to comments. Then you go on to say
“i want you to do the numbers all the time. it’s really great.”
omg, no……. my eyes are bleeding!
aye you know what your saying when you say 1st 2nd and 3rd? Your saying your the first person to be retarded and gay while sticking your dick in a vacuum for that day. not only does it make you look stupid but it detracts from the legitimate comments to the doujin because some of us have to post and ask you to stop being a FUCKING MORON!! so just grow up, stop and go fap one out real quick
Most comics depict the current or historical situation of the place of origin. If so, WTF IS WRONG WITH JAPAN! Is molesting a common sight nowadays? It kind of gives the wrong idea to the trains in Japan. Molesters should not be taken lightly, TO JAIL WITH THEM!
Story starts off the same-train scene. But sad to say, there was really no plot. They immediately got to it which was kind of disappointing for me. I prefer those doujins with story in them. Doujins like these appear hollow.
Barely noticed the censor strips too. Nicely done with this one.
And what’s up with telling her weakness anyways? She’s giving a hint that she wants IT. And the guy just keeps on talking so much. He just won’t shut up. In the end, the girl appeared like an idiotic, clueless slut.
SCORE 3/5
PS. NO TO NUMBERS! It’s just a waste of space. Takes up what is meant for a good comment.
PSS. MORE LOLIS!
If there was a job where you had to review doujins, Cloud would be the absolute master xD, lol.
‘Tis a tradition you’re trying to ruin here.
19th
what good is space if you can’t waste some of it?
20th
I want like that, WANT!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS REALLY GOOD
meth meth meth
Molestation is erotic, meth. These damn pop-ups are pissing me off, meth.
Meth, its not loli if there are breasts, meth.
Meth, I have made the 26 comment, meth. WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA… meth.
Cloud stop bleeding your staining the carpet! I half agree with you on the number thing as for the story critque I shall keep to mahself for I have not read this yet!
P.S
I woud like to see 20-30 comments of #s i think that be cool and lllloooonnngggg! Wwwooo to #s!!!!
@ Renesme123
…. 20-30 number comments, and I might loose all blood in my body.. I would die, don’t worry about the carpet when my health is at stake!
haha, tho thanks for the tip
-Cloud
I love you cloud! XD
I knew it was going to have a funny ending lol
∞/5
Go for the chick at the end, dude!
While I fapped to this, I had the TV turned on, it was on Comedy Central, and Comedy Central was playing the Colbert Report.
Usually, it’s just background noise. However, this episode featured a segment on the Dow, calling the segment “Money Shot” and making it appear as if the economy were a slut.
Here’s the clip, although I was listening on the tv: http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/252724/october-15-2009/the-money-shot
The segment I speak of is from 00:30-1:15
I found myself cumming at the same time as the segment “peaked”, and I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair. Once I regained my composure and put my pants back on, I decided to share my story here.
Colbert Report is the metaphorical bomb, as is this doujin series.
you guys should stop worrying so much about # either side it doesn’t bother me either way i would just perfer an actual comment.Good doujin sir.
I dont get “pervy sages comment,he has a problem with molesting in this even though its just a fictional story,then he asks for”loli”which is KIDS having SEX!im sorry but some of the people on here are a little slow.and i’ve seen alot of manga/anime and i know for a fact that the art in this is beautiful.