What an intro with a pervy brother. Although it’s kind of unrealistic since it’s morning and one would immediately notice if something was going on. And she noticed it only then?
For the overview, it had a good story and a good plot. Although it’s still a prologue, it did deliver. Can’t wait for the succeeding releases.
However, I find it a turn off when the guy is saying nasty stuff when it’s the girl’s first time. It was kind of inappropriate. Translation maybe?
What’s with the threesome? I though the brother was going to pound the guy’s face in. And the boyfriend conceded? A way of getting in the brother’s good side, I guess.
WTF! What an ending! I won’t spoil it for those who are going to read this. You’ll get a good laugh, I sure did. LOL
Art was alright. barely noticed the censor strips. This time, it’s white instead of black.
SCORE: 5/5
lupin on
August 10th, 2008 12:34 pm
Agreed endind is laughable :D
Wanksta on
August 10th, 2008 2:21 pm
OMFG! never had such a great laugh watching a doujin before xD the ending was the BEST! :D really awesome doujin and nice drawings 10/5
Fans on
August 10th, 2008 3:00 pm
how to download huh? its diffcult to download then megaupload!
Arbalesto on
August 10th, 2008 3:59 pm
AHuhAuahuhAUhAUhAuhAUhUhAuAHuA
MUUUUITO BOOOOM!!!
xD
Keep up the very nice work u guys are doing here!
when the father appeared I lolwd.
Katsu on
August 10th, 2008 4:06 pm
I heard it’s a book. So this means there are more than two chapters of this master pice ^^
I hope you’ll upload the rest as soon as it’ll appear ;)
Oh yea its a book, I’ll put it in the book section if all chapters gets done.
TheEvilBean on
August 10th, 2008 4:38 pm
they call thats cock huge??
I R BABOON on
August 10th, 2008 8:00 pm
cool stickers i want !
Fool on
August 10th, 2008 9:08 pm
This is actually one read thats worth reading upon and hell I just love the art style of this one too.
Anyways this doujin has a good story and yet its kinda funny how things turns out on some of the pages. The censor ain’t bad at all barely noticeable and plus doesn’t get in anyways even though it is a white block strip type of thing.
Final thoughts to it is that for a normal doujin its a good refresher and everyone should take the time to read this cuz its really good.
P.S. It’s funny that a doujin would actually have stickers, but they are how do you say it “CUTE” guess its to get more girls to read hentai doujins.
dude on
August 10th, 2008 10:20 pm
haha i didn`t even notice the censor until i look at the comments and read it again!
Cloud on
August 10th, 2008 10:33 pm
well, coming back I decided to read this on over the other, cuz the comments were good, but I can’t agree, not that it wasn’t great over the top, but it wasn’t a 5/5
Plus, PervySage you say the art was “alright” as well as comment on some of this Doujin’s major flaws then give it 5/5… I was kinda surprised you thought so after so much work on your comment.
ok, well The art I will agree, it was “alright”, the major flaw here was the how the art was made, maybe it is old but it seems to drawn, as if it is pencil to paper, unlike many other Doujins I see.
The story was good, but wit more volumes I sure it will get better. With that, It pissed me off SO much when that “boy-friend” just let the guy who practically raped the girl, I was like, “WTF no way, I would A:beat the crap out of him, B:call the police” I mean why would they let the guy go, no way how ridiculous.
Anything else?: I have to admit the ending put a smile on my face! =)
Score:
4/5
-Cloud
Frostbyte on
August 10th, 2008 11:31 pm
I think Doujin land needs to put up some Ero games. . *Is pissed off since he can’t find Figu@Carnival or Figu@mate*
T5J8F8 on
August 11th, 2008 2:16 am
HOLY SHIT IT’S A LION GET IN THE BOOK SECTION!
Henry Touchdown on
August 11th, 2008 2:23 am
Wow is page 3 a sticker page or something?
Solipsis on
August 11th, 2008 4:13 am
LOL! I was just about calmed down from Miray Ozaki fever (the artist who draw this) since I found her (yes, some people said that the doujinka, is a girl) doujin in hentairules. 10/5? 99/5 for me. Ero doujin with Shoujo style? awesome!
Fool on
August 11th, 2008 5:30 am
@ Cloud
Don’t take this as a bad comment or anything, but this style of drawing I find it more or less better than the fine line ones. To me this art has better how do you say it “MEANING.” (when I say that it just seems like theres more feeling to the drawing I dunno I just appreciate it better this kinda art style)
I would admit I can agree w/ you on how some of the story as it progress did not make no sense on how they should have reacted, but you gotta remember it is still a doujin and unrealistic is just common.
The Young /co/mp/a/triot on
August 11th, 2008 6:25 am
I see, so it’s the nipples…
CaptTan on
August 11th, 2008 6:57 am
LOL i really like the ending XD Made my day.
Aichi on
August 11th, 2008 7:38 am
LoL i like the ending (I see, so it’s the nipples…)XD XD =)) can’t wait for the chapters !!!
PervySage on
August 11th, 2008 10:23 am
@Cloud
Thanks for your comment on my comment. I do make mistakes and I don’t deny them. Those were just what came in to mind when I wrote my comment. Glad someone noticed it. I’m not mad, don’t worry. ^_^
MORE LOLIS!
KeZ_MzK on
August 13th, 2008 4:53 am
Lol the ending “it’s the nipples” xD
SATAN on
September 28th, 2008 10:04 pm
GYAWED DAYANM NIIIIIGUUUUUUHHH
SATAN on
September 28th, 2008 10:06 pm
THESE MOTHERFUCKING POP-UPS FUCKING SWALLOW!!!!!
I’M DA FUCKIN DEVIL!!!!
... on
October 21st, 2008 6:27 pm
…she is just…so…damn…Cute!!!
Renesme123 on
December 28th, 2008 9:56 am
Isnt it the smaller the breasts the more sensitive? Eh well anyway LOL at the end!
Anne Hubbard on
January 9th, 2009 10:10 pm
hi
6800cjwun7i4kk6z
good luck
Leona Mcintyre on
January 11th, 2009 10:51 am
hi
6800cjwun7i4kk6z
good luck
Spongebob on
February 15th, 2009 2:33 am
WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH I see, it’t the nipple huh?
∞ on
June 16th, 2009 10:28 am
This is going to be a funny one lol
∞/5
Black Cancer on
July 9th, 2009 8:54 am
Omg, funny shit. Love the Father at the end. But the dialogue could be improved.
WTF Dad on
July 15th, 2009 8:48 pm
Where the fuck did the dad come from, that’s hysterical; he’s just WATCHING his daughter have a three-way with her boyfriend AND brother; he’s just as bad as the brother, if not worse.
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What an intro with a pervy brother. Although it’s kind of unrealistic since it’s morning and one would immediately notice if something was going on. And she noticed it only then?
For the overview, it had a good story and a good plot. Although it’s still a prologue, it did deliver. Can’t wait for the succeeding releases.
However, I find it a turn off when the guy is saying nasty stuff when it’s the girl’s first time. It was kind of inappropriate. Translation maybe?
What’s with the threesome? I though the brother was going to pound the guy’s face in. And the boyfriend conceded? A way of getting in the brother’s good side, I guess.
WTF! What an ending! I won’t spoil it for those who are going to read this. You’ll get a good laugh, I sure did. LOL
Art was alright. barely noticed the censor strips. This time, it’s white instead of black.
SCORE: 5/5
Agreed endind is laughable :D
OMFG! never had such a great laugh watching a doujin before xD the ending was the BEST! :D really awesome doujin and nice drawings 10/5
how to download huh? its diffcult to download then megaupload!
AHuhAuahuhAUhAUhAuhAUhUhAuAHuA
MUUUUITO BOOOOM!!!
xD
Keep up the very nice work u guys are doing here!
when the father appeared I lolwd.
I heard it’s a book. So this means there are more than two chapters of this master pice ^^
I hope you’ll upload the rest as soon as it’ll appear ;)
Oh yea its a book, I’ll put it in the book section if all chapters gets done.
they call thats cock huge??
cool stickers i want !
This is actually one read thats worth reading upon and hell I just love the art style of this one too.
Anyways this doujin has a good story and yet its kinda funny how things turns out on some of the pages. The censor ain’t bad at all barely noticeable and plus doesn’t get in anyways even though it is a white block strip type of thing.
Final thoughts to it is that for a normal doujin its a good refresher and everyone should take the time to read this cuz its really good.
P.S. It’s funny that a doujin would actually have stickers, but they are how do you say it “CUTE” guess its to get more girls to read hentai doujins.
haha i didn`t even notice the censor until i look at the comments and read it again!
well, coming back I decided to read this on over the other, cuz the comments were good, but I can’t agree, not that it wasn’t great over the top, but it wasn’t a 5/5
Plus, PervySage you say the art was “alright” as well as comment on some of this Doujin’s major flaws then give it 5/5… I was kinda surprised you thought so after so much work on your comment.
ok, well The art I will agree, it was “alright”, the major flaw here was the how the art was made, maybe it is old but it seems to drawn, as if it is pencil to paper, unlike many other Doujins I see.
The story was good, but wit more volumes I sure it will get better. With that, It pissed me off SO much when that “boy-friend” just let the guy who practically raped the girl, I was like, “WTF no way, I would A:beat the crap out of him, B:call the police” I mean why would they let the guy go, no way how ridiculous.
Anything else?: I have to admit the ending put a smile on my face! =)
Score:
4/5
-Cloud
I think Doujin land needs to put up some Ero games. . *Is pissed off since he can’t find Figu@Carnival or Figu@mate*
HOLY SHIT IT’S A LION GET IN THE BOOK SECTION!
Wow is page 3 a sticker page or something?
LOL! I was just about calmed down from Miray Ozaki fever (the artist who draw this) since I found her (yes, some people said that the doujinka, is a girl) doujin in hentairules. 10/5? 99/5 for me. Ero doujin with Shoujo style? awesome!
@ Cloud
Don’t take this as a bad comment or anything, but this style of drawing I find it more or less better than the fine line ones. To me this art has better how do you say it “MEANING.” (when I say that it just seems like theres more feeling to the drawing I dunno I just appreciate it better this kinda art style)
I would admit I can agree w/ you on how some of the story as it progress did not make no sense on how they should have reacted, but you gotta remember it is still a doujin and unrealistic is just common.
I see, so it’s the nipples…
LOL i really like the ending XD Made my day.
LoL i like the ending (I see, so it’s the nipples…)XD XD =)) can’t wait for the chapters !!!
@Cloud
Thanks for your comment on my comment. I do make mistakes and I don’t deny them. Those were just what came in to mind when I wrote my comment. Glad someone noticed it. I’m not mad, don’t worry. ^_^
MORE LOLIS!
Lol the ending “it’s the nipples” xD
GYAWED DAYANM NIIIIIGUUUUUUHHH
THESE MOTHERFUCKING POP-UPS FUCKING SWALLOW!!!!!
I’M DA FUCKIN DEVIL!!!!
…she is just…so…damn…Cute!!!
Isnt it the smaller the breasts the more sensitive? Eh well anyway LOL at the end!
hi
6800cjwun7i4kk6z
good luck
hi
6800cjwun7i4kk6z
good luck
WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH I see, it’t the nipple huh?
This is going to be a funny one lol
∞/5
Omg, funny shit. Love the Father at the end. But the dialogue could be improved.
Where the fuck did the dad come from, that’s hysterical; he’s just WATCHING his daughter have a three-way with her boyfriend AND brother; he’s just as bad as the brother, if not worse.
we follow the move when we have sex