Sorry for the really, really, really long absence. Had no internet connection for more than a month. I sure hell missed a LOT! Sadly, I won’t be reading everything I missed, only the latest doujins except maybe for the few lolis that had gone by.
Onward to my review!
Story was kind of confusing at first. Made me wonder what their real relationship was. This technique, however, was to make the story less short. Had a bit humor too. What I don’t get is why she kept referring to herself in the third person. The “Yo”-ing got annoying.
Art was divine! Tanned skin with tan lines just takes the cake in this one. Shading and tones was just superb. But what went wrong with the whole doujin was the white out censor. WORST CENSOR EVER.
SCORE 4/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
( . )( . )boobfreak on
February 24th, 2009 12:10 pm
hey pervysage you wreeeeely should read the comments from the doujinshis. they all mmissed you.
they where wreeely addicted to you.
( . )( . )boobfreak on
February 24th, 2009 12:10 pm
ADMIN TAYU TAYU 7 is out there
Cloud on
February 24th, 2009 12:25 pm
NO WAY!!!! PervySage! Welcome back! We all missed you.
DAMN IT!! The censors! pissed me OFF!!!! I HATE WHITE OUT CENSORS!!!
The story was was great, and I liked it a lot! Only there are a couple things I didn’t understand. It looks like the younger version of herself has a completely different hair color.. (even if it was trying to do the color with black, it is still too dark). Another thing, it took me forever to understand what ‘yo’ was! I was thinking it might be the name of the boy character, but no… That ‘yo’ thing might be the most annoying thing I have ever seen in a Doujin, but that is my opinion. That yo, I am guessing is just how she talks..
The art! ahh the art, fantastic! I love it, especially the colored pages, they were SO hot! That girl had one of my favorite bodies, perfect breast size, figure, height.. damn so so good. But one thing F’ing PISSED THE HELL OUT OF ME!! God damn damn damn, the White out censors RUINED everything! Ahh I am SO sad they ended up with White Out censors.. otherwise, it just would have made my day, that girl was so hot…
Anything else?: *WHITE OUT CENSORS* GOD DAMN IT! if not for the ‘yo’ and above.. perfect.
Oh good, I’ll post TayuTayu 7 this afternoon, thanks for the notice.
RandomComment on
February 24th, 2009 7:00 pm
I find a strange connection to PervySage and the doujin’s title…
bigboy on
February 24th, 2009 8:13 pm
this doujin loks like it will be pretty good
FurryLover on
February 24th, 2009 10:12 pm
Not too late~! =3
PERVYSAGE/ULTRAGIRL CAME BACK! =D
We missed you~ xD
DOUJIN NAO!
Art: White out censors = eyesores. .-. I really really hate censors, white out at the top. Artwork on a whole, though, was pretty good. o: I loved the way they drew here expressions.
Story: This story is kinda cool, yo! xD It’s kinda sweet, with the doujin twist of DO ME NOW Inside. xD It’s okay, pretty good.
Total Score: 7/10. Okay, good read. =3
Furry/Yaoi Shota nao? It is my birthday coming up, so a nice Yaoi Shota would be a great gift, Admin!
RandomComment on
February 24th, 2009 11:09 pm
Furry would be fun to see.
Fuckin Bungie on
February 25th, 2009 12:23 am
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InternetRule#30 on
February 25th, 2009 6:46 am
You know, to be honest, I really didn’t like this one. :/
Welcome backs age
There has been a fake you wondering about
-rulebreaker
Test on
February 25th, 2009 8:09 am
To admin: all the depositfile shota download link has been REMOVE by depositfile, plz fix it
DICK on
February 25th, 2009 8:54 am
ehhh houston, we got a problem… what’s up with no more doujin file when open up a story link. back to apollo 13, roger…
first
Great job, admin! Thanks for all the hard work.
2ND!
3
When you click on “normal” and then go to page 2-17 it’ll give a 404 page.
Wrong link, fixed it.
Thanks.
Funny . . . HEHEH!
I’M BAAAACK!
Sorry for the really, really, really long absence. Had no internet connection for more than a month. I sure hell missed a LOT! Sadly, I won’t be reading everything I missed, only the latest doujins except maybe for the few lolis that had gone by.
Onward to my review!
Story was kind of confusing at first. Made me wonder what their real relationship was. This technique, however, was to make the story less short. Had a bit humor too. What I don’t get is why she kept referring to herself in the third person. The “Yo”-ing got annoying.
Art was divine! Tanned skin with tan lines just takes the cake in this one. Shading and tones was just superb. But what went wrong with the whole doujin was the white out censor. WORST CENSOR EVER.
SCORE 4/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
hey pervysage you wreeeeely should read the comments from the doujinshis. they all mmissed you.
they where wreeely addicted to you.
ADMIN TAYU TAYU 7 is out there
NO WAY!!!! PervySage! Welcome back! We all missed you.
DAMN IT!! The censors! pissed me OFF!!!! I HATE WHITE OUT CENSORS!!!
The story was was great, and I liked it a lot! Only there are a couple things I didn’t understand. It looks like the younger version of herself has a completely different hair color.. (even if it was trying to do the color with black, it is still too dark). Another thing, it took me forever to understand what ‘yo’ was! I was thinking it might be the name of the boy character, but no… That ‘yo’ thing might be the most annoying thing I have ever seen in a Doujin, but that is my opinion. That yo, I am guessing is just how she talks..
The art! ahh the art, fantastic! I love it, especially the colored pages, they were SO hot! That girl had one of my favorite bodies, perfect breast size, figure, height.. damn so so good. But one thing F’ing PISSED THE HELL OUT OF ME!! God damn damn damn, the White out censors RUINED everything! Ahh I am SO sad they ended up with White Out censors.. otherwise, it just would have made my day, that girl was so hot…
Anything else?: *WHITE OUT CENSORS* GOD DAMN IT! if not for the ‘yo’ and above.. perfect.
Score:
4/5
(Still totally enjoyable!)
-Cloud
Oh good, I’ll post TayuTayu 7 this afternoon, thanks for the notice.
I find a strange connection to PervySage and the doujin’s title…
this doujin loks like it will be pretty good
Not too late~! =3
PERVYSAGE/ULTRAGIRL CAME BACK! =D
We missed you~ xD
DOUJIN NAO!
Art: White out censors = eyesores. .-. I really really hate censors, white out at the top. Artwork on a whole, though, was pretty good. o: I loved the way they drew here expressions.
Story: This story is kinda cool, yo! xD It’s kinda sweet, with the doujin twist of DO ME NOW Inside. xD It’s okay, pretty good.
Total Score: 7/10. Okay, good read. =3
Furry/Yaoi Shota nao? It is my birthday coming up, so a nice Yaoi Shota would be a great gift, Admin!
Furry would be fun to see.
…
You know, to be honest, I really didn’t like this one. :/
Welcome backs age
There has been a fake you wondering about
-rulebreaker
To admin: all the depositfile shota download link has been REMOVE by depositfile, plz fix it
ehhh houston, we got a problem… what’s up with no more doujin file when open up a story link. back to apollo 13, roger…
this is Anime…well based on a Anime…
The translator didn’t say anything about an anime so I don’t think so.
please leave sage I am tired of your spamming. let the new reviewers be in charge, cause you are bad at it.
thanks for spending your time fixing everything admin!
Really appreciate :)
ULTRA-GIRL:ULTRA HYPER VAGINAL BEAM,GO
lol could the tans be any more funnier
I lol’d at the ending.