people who make numbers brighten my day. well not as much as the people who complain. =)
finge on
October 16th, 2009 6:48 am
no,doujin is make my day bright as hell,newer doujin?much brighter
the preacher on
October 16th, 2009 7:21 am
that was great! a bit short though..
Monster on
October 16th, 2009 9:20 am
You are Delicous!
bryan masten on
October 16th, 2009 10:08 am
the first page reminded me of something that happend 2 me after a party, i woke up and found some dude sucking my dick, i was like “HEY!!!,finish up, and get the fuck out!!!” lol i’m just kiddin!
Anonymous on
October 16th, 2009 11:32 am
lol, “i am not a suspicious person at all”
Anonymous on
October 16th, 2009 12:43 pm
12th thats my best ever
Arbalesto on
October 16th, 2009 12:58 pm
Omg, the girl reminds me of “My Balls” xD
Very nice piece, thankz adm 8D
Cryber Masater on
October 16th, 2009 1:08 pm
One cool doujin
ShadowMaster87 on
October 16th, 2009 1:17 pm
Cool doujin but would realy been funny for dude to have been a vampire. lol
Shauna on
October 16th, 2009 1:51 pm
eh…
bfg10k17 on
October 16th, 2009 2:01 pm
LOL She’s got owned.
Um, she could ’stop by’ here too, that would be fun :P
bfg10k17 on
October 16th, 2009 2:04 pm
Sorry for duble coment ^^’
Arbalesto : My balls doujin ? That was freakin’ good. Poor guy, who can’t cum for one month… XD
deva bratt on
October 16th, 2009 2:13 pm
tek cock inna yuh bumbo
the heresy on
October 16th, 2009 2:18 pm
Art: 7/10
The girl was attractive as hell, while the guy didn’t seem to have a lot of planning to his design. Luckily, it focuses more on her than on him, so it’s not too bad.
Story: 7/10
As far as succubi stories go, this has a pretty common ending. However, that may be more a product of the short’n'funny nature of it than anything else.
Dialogue/Translation: 10/10
I saw nothing wrong with their dialogue grammar-wise, but I suspect the whole “Ah, I’m not a suspicious person at all!” bit was added for humor.
Other: +3
Oooh, the censors could’ve hurt this one, as they were highly noticeable during the first part, obscuring his penis entirely. For that, I had to subtract some points. -2
It was short, so I couldn’t properly fap, but it managed to make me lol hard in that short amount of time. And that /ending/. This evened out to negate further point loss.
It was colored, so insta-points for that. +2
The succubus looks like Nagisa Furukawa from Clan’nad. I love my Nagisa Furukawa from Clan’nad. +1
Total score: 27/30 Fapalicious
I tip my hat to you, dear admin, for adding this fantastic manga to your database. I give it 27 “feeding sessions” out of 30.
a tad off on
October 16th, 2009 6:36 pm
hey herasy you should review more often you a damn good rater
Dig dug on
October 16th, 2009 7:47 pm
that dick looks like a piece of poo
RandomComment on
October 16th, 2009 7:57 pm
“Yes, dear child, you seem to be mistaken” added Wilson. “The fork did not run away with the spoon. The dish ran away with the spoon.
RandomComment on
October 16th, 2009 8:04 pm
I thought this was this was a crossover between DarkStalker and Pokemon! BrockxMorrigan hasn’t been seen before!
djninja on
October 16th, 2009 8:12 pm
hey that was really good you should make more like this but longer
TheBigBoom on
October 16th, 2009 9:46 pm
@djninja:
Who are you talking to?…
Are you talking to Kazuma Muramasa, the artist of this doujin (who isn’t here) or are you talking to Admin, who is just a distributor to the doujin?
Loliguy on
October 16th, 2009 11:04 pm
color..YAAY Short…BOOO Thot it would be about oral sex…
a guy who's passing by on
October 16th, 2009 11:06 pm
this doujin is an older one isn’t it admin? i remember reading it a month ago on another site. still good nonetheless.
Just passing by :) on
October 16th, 2009 11:21 pm
Again… To shoRT..:( buT quite nicE story..
master of puppets on
October 17th, 2009 1:46 am
Almost every one of these comments made me rage.
Also, thank god, I thought it was gonna be some vore shit
Kitsune on
October 17th, 2009 4:51 am
4.5/5
D.U.D.E. on
October 17th, 2009 7:29 am
That comment about waking up and finding a dude suckin him off was a real bonekill…
a-grr on
October 17th, 2009 10:18 am
Ahh the color doujin…
Always lacking in the, ahem… “length” department. But alas, quality over quantity. So long as there’s enough to satisfy, that’s all you need (~,<) .V,,
…unless your feeling greedy, of course.
Kenren on
October 17th, 2009 6:59 pm
I’m the only one who thought about Ayasaki Hermione? XD
Ferro on
October 20th, 2009 7:39 am
Ooohh… a Succubi, haven’t had one of those in a while :D
Nice up Admin :) bd 10/10
Looks like someone already beat me to an elaborate Rating :(
nicely done though ;)
Anyway… don’t mind me, just passing by Folks :.
sugar on
October 25th, 2009 3:36 am
O Shit im fucking my girlfriend
/b/ on
October 27th, 2009 1:02 pm
numbers only count if ITS OVER 9000!!!!!
fuckrealgirls on
October 27th, 2009 10:39 pm
I agree the art on the girl was good I don’t remember the guy much… Plus for color but the story didn’t reel me in… too short… well before I say anything more that’s already been said.
Rating: that dick looks like a piece of poo… wait! damn it some one else said that too!!! errr
pokemon meets darkstalkers.. on
November 3rd, 2009 3:40 pm
brock of pewter gym meet morrigan.. XD
ahahahaha that so funny dude XD
ROFL XD
ISKAPO on
January 12th, 2010 8:54 am
I THINK THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DOUJIN I HAVE READ BUT ITS A LITTLE TOO SHORT STORY
ISKAPO on
January 12th, 2010 8:57 am
AFTER READING IT AGAIN I CHANGE MY MIND IT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DOUJIN I HAVE READ INJ THIS SITE BUT STILL…ITS A SHORT STORY BUT ITS BEAUTIFUL!!!^_^
xxx on
January 15th, 2010 8:37 am
my dick is burning!!
Anonymous on
May 25th, 2010 1:19 pm
what would you do if you where this guy move away or still and let her do it again
First to the last.
2nd last….
dam stop that!!!!
who cares
its a nice one but very short!
people who make numbers brighten my day. well not as much as the people who complain. =)
no,doujin is make my day bright as hell,newer doujin?much brighter
that was great! a bit short though..
You are Delicous!
the first page reminded me of something that happend 2 me after a party, i woke up and found some dude sucking my dick, i was like “HEY!!!,finish up, and get the fuck out!!!” lol i’m just kiddin!
lol, “i am not a suspicious person at all”
12th thats my best ever
Omg, the girl reminds me of “My Balls” xD
Very nice piece, thankz adm 8D
One cool doujin
Cool doujin but would realy been funny for dude to have been a vampire. lol
eh…
LOL She’s got owned.
Um, she could ’stop by’ here too, that would be fun :P
Sorry for duble coment ^^’
Arbalesto : My balls doujin ? That was freakin’ good. Poor guy, who can’t cum for one month… XD
tek cock inna yuh bumbo
Art: 7/10
The girl was attractive as hell, while the guy didn’t seem to have a lot of planning to his design. Luckily, it focuses more on her than on him, so it’s not too bad.
Story: 7/10
As far as succubi stories go, this has a pretty common ending. However, that may be more a product of the short’n'funny nature of it than anything else.
Dialogue/Translation: 10/10
I saw nothing wrong with their dialogue grammar-wise, but I suspect the whole “Ah, I’m not a suspicious person at all!” bit was added for humor.
Other: +3
Oooh, the censors could’ve hurt this one, as they were highly noticeable during the first part, obscuring his penis entirely. For that, I had to subtract some points. -2
It was short, so I couldn’t properly fap, but it managed to make me lol hard in that short amount of time. And that /ending/. This evened out to negate further point loss.
It was colored, so insta-points for that. +2
The succubus looks like Nagisa Furukawa from Clan’nad. I love my Nagisa Furukawa from Clan’nad. +1
Total score: 27/30 Fapalicious
I tip my hat to you, dear admin, for adding this fantastic manga to your database. I give it 27 “feeding sessions” out of 30.
hey herasy you should review more often you a damn good rater
that dick looks like a piece of poo
“Yes, dear child, you seem to be mistaken” added Wilson. “The fork did not run away with the spoon. The dish ran away with the spoon.
I thought this was this was a crossover between DarkStalker and Pokemon! BrockxMorrigan hasn’t been seen before!
hey that was really good you should make more like this but longer
@djninja:
Who are you talking to?…
Are you talking to Kazuma Muramasa, the artist of this doujin (who isn’t here) or are you talking to Admin, who is just a distributor to the doujin?
color..YAAY Short…BOOO Thot it would be about oral sex…
this doujin is an older one isn’t it admin? i remember reading it a month ago on another site. still good nonetheless.
Again… To shoRT..:( buT quite nicE story..
Almost every one of these comments made me rage.
Also, thank god, I thought it was gonna be some vore shit
4.5/5
That comment about waking up and finding a dude suckin him off was a real bonekill…
Ahh the color doujin…
Always lacking in the, ahem… “length” department. But alas, quality over quantity. So long as there’s enough to satisfy, that’s all you need (~,<) .V,,
…unless your feeling greedy, of course.
I’m the only one who thought about Ayasaki Hermione? XD
Ooohh… a Succubi, haven’t had one of those in a while :D
Nice up Admin :) bd 10/10
Looks like someone already beat me to an elaborate Rating :(
nicely done though ;)
Anyway… don’t mind me, just passing by Folks :.
O Shit im fucking my girlfriend
numbers only count if ITS OVER 9000!!!!!
I agree the art on the girl was good I don’t remember the guy much… Plus for color but the story didn’t reel me in… too short… well before I say anything more that’s already been said.
Rating: that dick looks like a piece of poo… wait! damn it some one else said that too!!! errr
brock of pewter gym meet morrigan.. XD
ahahahaha that so funny dude XD
ROFL XD
I THINK THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DOUJIN I HAVE READ BUT ITS A LITTLE TOO SHORT STORY
AFTER READING IT AGAIN I CHANGE MY MIND IT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DOUJIN I HAVE READ INJ THIS SITE BUT STILL…ITS A SHORT STORY BUT ITS BEAUTIFUL!!!^_^
my dick is burning!!
what would you do if you where this guy move away or still and let her do it again
wow thats a tough question, person above me.