The Guy who "Came" First on
February 7th, 2009 8:53 am
Does this mean I’m FIRST??!!!
The Guy who "Came" First on
February 7th, 2009 8:55 am
Good thing this isn’t a Loli!
I LOVE NORMAL DOUJIN!
wow kk wow on
February 7th, 2009 9:06 am
3rd ???
Twerp on
February 7th, 2009 9:07 am
Person Below me Is a?
Dick on
February 7th, 2009 9:15 am
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jackspade on
February 7th, 2009 9:33 am
i like lolis. more lolis.
Damn on
February 7th, 2009 10:45 am
i have one thing to say :wierd…… (im not sure but i think in the good and refreshing way)
Anonymous on
February 7th, 2009 11:59 am
lolis lolis lolis…… I want more loli’s PLEASE admin. PLEASE?
Yotsuba on
February 7th, 2009 12:45 pm
This was a surprisingly cute and funny doujin. Even if the art was sub-par and the censoring make it almost unreadable, I was compelled to read it just to learn more about the characters.
The art is just a mess, with details being shifted from panel to panel, and character designs being very awkward. Fortunately, its a good read for the cute factor associated with it. It has some very cute moments! ^.^
The story is what saves it from being a terrible doujin. The comedy, though slow at first, picks up wonderfully and continues till the very end. In fact, if the art was just as good as the story, it would probably get a better score out of me.
The censors were terrible (white-out garbage), and is tied with the art badly, sticking out like a sore thumb.
Score: 2.5/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. I had to cut my review a little short today, sorry! :P
Random on
February 7th, 2009 2:28 pm
@Yotsuba.
Lol, you call that short? Usually when I see your comment I just mark it “tl;dr” I was about to skip that comment, but Cloud didn’t post a review yet.
TheBigBoom on
February 7th, 2009 2:48 pm
The Story was amusing, and when I say amusing, I mean that’s all it has for it going, you’ll find that there’s nothing more to the story, but cute attempts to be funny.
The art had it’s up and down with it’s huge feet and sometimes her nose rises inbetween her eyes, but at least you get a cute lady (when her nose is in normal position).
The censorship was really bothersome, it white outs every pixel that you wanted to see. And I mean EVERY pixel.
In my opinion this doujin has it’s up and downs, but mostly down. It’s worth reading, but it’s not worth reading again.
I give this doujin 2/5
-TheBigBoom
FurryLover on
February 7th, 2009 5:17 pm
@ Yotsuba: A little short~? xD You’re reviews are always much longer than everyone Else’s reviews xD
Okay, Yusa-San’s Airhead Circuit:
I actually kinda liked this one~! n///n It was very cute, and I love Yusa-San’s character~ =3
Story: It’s very well done, a cute shy girl loses her panties and then tries to flirt with the man who finds them. =3
Art: I didn’t like the guy~ He wasn’t very good, but Yusa was adorable~! <3
Total score~ 8/10~ I’d read it, but it’s not the best. Worth it~ =D
Yotsuba on
February 7th, 2009 7:57 pm
Lol, I guess short for me is when you don’t have to scroll the page down to read more of it! ^^
Perhaps I’ll try to cut my reviews down a little so that more people will read it, but i just like being thorough!
-Yousuba ^^
P.S. I forgot what P.S. means (post statment?) but I like using it for some reason. :)
LolipopIsGood on
February 7th, 2009 8:25 pm
Well a nice evening alone with my PC
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Anonymous on
February 7th, 2009 10:04 pm
post scriptum i think, latin
Yotsuba on
February 7th, 2009 11:00 pm
Thank you, Anonymous! I keep using it and I never really knew what it ment, but had a slight understanding, that it came after writing something if you forgot to mention something…
TheBigBoom on
February 7th, 2009 11:34 pm
Sorry to butt in, but he forgot to space “script” and “um”. Post Script is correct though, just wanted to clear it, since I thought he said “scriptum”
ynag on
February 8th, 2009 12:07 am
Normal Doujin is okay sometimes
but Loli’s the best
haha on
February 8th, 2009 1:50 am
where r u cloud i trust u most
haha on
February 8th, 2009 1:54 am
and it is post scriptum 1st guy was right it is a latin term we took as our own(english major)
Cloud on
February 8th, 2009 2:37 am
Thank you “haha”
Well, sorry but I was busy all day today (or yesterday since it is after 12:00am…)
But I don’t know what it was about this Doujin, but I really liked it, and I am saying that while laughing (not sarcastically). I really enjoyed it
The story was interesting, I wouldn’t say there is no story, because during the Doujin you get get enough information to generally understand the situation. It was also super cute, and funny at times.
The art wasn’t bad, but saying that means it prolly wasn’t very good either. The art kinda fluctuated, sometimes I was saying “wow nice (page 10, the top left panel, I love that)” but others I was like, “ehh (page 9, middle panel.. ehh)”. Also the Censors sucked bad, I HATE *WHITE OUT* censoring!
Anything else?: *WHITE OUT CENSORING!*, totally thought it was fun tho, and really cute.
Score:
3/5
-Cloud
Yotsuba on
February 8th, 2009 3:11 am
I really hate white out censoring… it kill’s any mood around a doujin. :(
I’d rather have black bars than white out. I’d even accept white bars over white out…
Cloud! LETS GO MARCHING THROUGH THE STREETS, DEMANDING THAT WHITE OUT CENSORING BE REMOVED FROM ALL DOUJIN’S!
Maybe that’s a little to extreme…
^^
Seishiro Haga on
February 8th, 2009 3:55 am
It’s nice
InternetRule#30 on
February 8th, 2009 5:40 pm
Cute
4/5
voncho1 on
February 9th, 2009 9:51 am
i like doujins,…..
Anonymous on
March 26th, 2009 1:32 pm
she to dam cute. like should it not be a crime to be that cute
Does this mean I’m FIRST??!!!
Good thing this isn’t a Loli!
I LOVE NORMAL DOUJIN!
3rd ???
Person Below me Is a?
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i like lolis. more lolis.
i have one thing to say :wierd…… (im not sure but i think in the good and refreshing way)
lolis lolis lolis…… I want more loli’s PLEASE admin. PLEASE?
This was a surprisingly cute and funny doujin. Even if the art was sub-par and the censoring make it almost unreadable, I was compelled to read it just to learn more about the characters.
The art is just a mess, with details being shifted from panel to panel, and character designs being very awkward. Fortunately, its a good read for the cute factor associated with it. It has some very cute moments! ^.^
The story is what saves it from being a terrible doujin. The comedy, though slow at first, picks up wonderfully and continues till the very end. In fact, if the art was just as good as the story, it would probably get a better score out of me.
The censors were terrible (white-out garbage), and is tied with the art badly, sticking out like a sore thumb.
Score: 2.5/5
-Yotsuba ^.^
P.S. I had to cut my review a little short today, sorry! :P
@Yotsuba.
Lol, you call that short? Usually when I see your comment I just mark it “tl;dr” I was about to skip that comment, but Cloud didn’t post a review yet.
The Story was amusing, and when I say amusing, I mean that’s all it has for it going, you’ll find that there’s nothing more to the story, but cute attempts to be funny.
The art had it’s up and down with it’s huge feet and sometimes her nose rises inbetween her eyes, but at least you get a cute lady (when her nose is in normal position).
The censorship was really bothersome, it white outs every pixel that you wanted to see. And I mean EVERY pixel.
In my opinion this doujin has it’s up and downs, but mostly down. It’s worth reading, but it’s not worth reading again.
I give this doujin 2/5
-TheBigBoom
@ Yotsuba: A little short~? xD You’re reviews are always much longer than everyone Else’s reviews xD
Okay, Yusa-San’s Airhead Circuit:
I actually kinda liked this one~! n///n It was very cute, and I love Yusa-San’s character~ =3
Story: It’s very well done, a cute shy girl loses her panties and then tries to flirt with the man who finds them. =3
Art: I didn’t like the guy~ He wasn’t very good, but Yusa was adorable~! <3
Total score~ 8/10~ I’d read it, but it’s not the best. Worth it~ =D
Lol, I guess short for me is when you don’t have to scroll the page down to read more of it! ^^
Perhaps I’ll try to cut my reviews down a little so that more people will read it, but i just like being thorough!
-Yousuba ^^
P.S. I forgot what P.S. means (post statment?) but I like using it for some reason. :)
Well a nice evening alone with my PC
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post scriptum i think, latin
Thank you, Anonymous! I keep using it and I never really knew what it ment, but had a slight understanding, that it came after writing something if you forgot to mention something…
Sorry to butt in, but he forgot to space “script” and “um”. Post Script is correct though, just wanted to clear it, since I thought he said “scriptum”
Normal Doujin is okay sometimes
but Loli’s the best
where r u cloud i trust u most
and it is post scriptum 1st guy was right it is a latin term we took as our own(english major)
Thank you “haha”
Well, sorry but I was busy all day today (or yesterday since it is after 12:00am…)
But I don’t know what it was about this Doujin, but I really liked it, and I am saying that while laughing (not sarcastically). I really enjoyed it
The story was interesting, I wouldn’t say there is no story, because during the Doujin you get get enough information to generally understand the situation. It was also super cute, and funny at times.
The art wasn’t bad, but saying that means it prolly wasn’t very good either. The art kinda fluctuated, sometimes I was saying “wow nice (page 10, the top left panel, I love that)” but others I was like, “ehh (page 9, middle panel.. ehh)”. Also the Censors sucked bad, I HATE *WHITE OUT* censoring!
Anything else?: *WHITE OUT CENSORING!*, totally thought it was fun tho, and really cute.
Score:
3/5
-Cloud
I really hate white out censoring… it kill’s any mood around a doujin. :(
I’d rather have black bars than white out. I’d even accept white bars over white out…
Cloud! LETS GO MARCHING THROUGH THE STREETS, DEMANDING THAT WHITE OUT CENSORING BE REMOVED FROM ALL DOUJIN’S!
Maybe that’s a little to extreme…
^^
It’s nice
Cute
4/5
i like doujins,…..
she to dam cute. like should it not be a crime to be that cute