yeah! now you all can get annoyed at my post even though its pointless and you should just calm the fuck down why are you reading this comment anyway you should be reading the doujin thats what you came here for right?
i hope you didnt come here to get mad at a comment you sick son of a bitch
Lolimania on
December 19th, 2008 2:14 pm
This doujin was just disgusting
0/5 I wanna give a negative but that would be harsh
Frostbyte on
December 19th, 2008 2:59 pm
Strong girl is kinda hot but not the best but this was a nice shota i enjoyed it
4/5 from me.
loki-of-oz on
December 19th, 2008 3:22 pm
ew -4 maybe 5 ya 5 body stater -1 hair -.5 plot
total 3.5, this artis is usalue better
Poop on
December 19th, 2008 5:32 pm
7th
17 m on
December 19th, 2008 5:55 pm
well ill give the plot a 2 body hair -2 art 4 censor 2 so all and all 8/10
RandomComment on
December 19th, 2008 5:56 pm
Her body looks like a man’s body with boobs
Caotics_Rage on
December 19th, 2008 6:06 pm
It’s been awhile since sirC released a doujin lol
overall it wasn’t bad. she has a cute face ^^
Dax on
December 20th, 2008 12:47 am
Well, I liked her body. I didn’t think it was bad at all.
She looked like a figure competitor.
Cloud on
December 20th, 2008 2:26 am
Juan Gotoh is amazing a shota, yet this wasn’t the best he has done, here is a few points.
The story, was typical for him, and was interesting giving just enough information to the audience to not make them feel like there was a lack of info, yet no more then needed. But the thing here was how the sex stared. As I read it, I rolled my eye’s and “really?…” I mean, it was just felt so out there. Usually the teacher would first like the kid or something (think he was cute ect.) but no, she instantly thinks sex is a good idea and rolls with it… ehh
The art was Juan Gotoh, so amazing, but he really drew the bodies, I mean this time he really drew them (of course to try to make the muscles stand out) like page #10, eww to that boy’s body, was he not fed?..
Anything else?: It was a good Doujin, but I dind’t think it is one of Juan Gotoh top works.
Score:
3.5/5
(I know there is a scoring system in place now but hell maybe someone still wants my take on Doujins.)
-Cloud
vootmarskaya on
December 20th, 2008 5:55 am
You guys all suck, this was awesome.
Sephiroth on
December 20th, 2008 7:37 am
This was quite good. It was funny and the sex bit was good as well. I didn’t understand in the comments when people was saying “disgusting”, ect…now all i can say is. Why? Is it not sexy if a women has abs? The boy seemed to like it XD and so did i. This was a good doujin and i think everyone should give it a go.
/Sephiroth’s score 9/10
hahaha on
December 20th, 2008 9:59 am
Cloud i love your score’s there hanh in hand with my thoughts plus your a loli-man like me thats a plus
PervySage on
December 20th, 2008 10:18 am
We’re those abs? Really, I can’t tell. Her body kinda looks like an old geezer’s without the boobs.
Story was okay to begin with. Drifting? LoL
Good transition too.
Art was still average. Although, they looked like they had to body that of a 70y.o. Disgusted me for a bit. Censors was fine as long as the black strips are concerned.
SCORE 3/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
YAY on
December 20th, 2008 3:56 pm
not too sexy.. it is ok i think.
Criss Angel on
December 22nd, 2008 8:13 pm
to the owner:
is it possible to post the whole book of this doujin? im kinda fan of this artist and i find rarly any other book then 1… xD
Captain Falcon on
January 4th, 2009 5:48 am
This is Pretty terrible i mean the first picture of the women herself is terrible but i have to admit he tried pretty hard on those abs 2/5 overall but i have to give this a FALCON PUNCH in the mouth
Lord Zero on
January 24th, 2009 7:17 pm
…eh…wow
The art was pretty substandard. All the characters looked really simple, and just horrible.
Story was also kinda stupid. I mean, having sex with one of your students to lose weight? It’s almost funny. Almost.
Also, the gym teacher was a body builder: DO NOT WANT!!!
Overall: 2/5
P.S. What kind of kid is attracted to abs more than boobs?
Anonymous on
June 4th, 2009 2:43 am
yo i would help her out whit her diet all night long
∞ on
June 7th, 2009 8:03 pm
Simple and a little funny
5/5
Anonymous on
June 8th, 2009 3:16 pm
y do u guys not like abs? if u ever had it with a girl who has abs u would love it. because most of them know how to use they pussy so well u go to heaven
FIRST!
1st
yeah! now you all can get annoyed at my post even though its pointless and you should just calm the fuck down why are you reading this comment anyway you should be reading the doujin thats what you came here for right?
i hope you didnt come here to get mad at a comment you sick son of a bitch
This doujin was just disgusting
0/5 I wanna give a negative but that would be harsh
Strong girl is kinda hot but not the best but this was a nice shota i enjoyed it
4/5 from me.
ew -4 maybe 5 ya 5 body stater -1 hair -.5 plot
total 3.5, this artis is usalue better
7th
well ill give the plot a 2 body hair -2 art 4 censor 2 so all and all 8/10
Her body looks like a man’s body with boobs
It’s been awhile since sirC released a doujin lol
overall it wasn’t bad. she has a cute face ^^
Well, I liked her body. I didn’t think it was bad at all.
She looked like a figure competitor.
Juan Gotoh is amazing a shota, yet this wasn’t the best he has done, here is a few points.
The story, was typical for him, and was interesting giving just enough information to the audience to not make them feel like there was a lack of info, yet no more then needed. But the thing here was how the sex stared. As I read it, I rolled my eye’s and “really?…” I mean, it was just felt so out there. Usually the teacher would first like the kid or something (think he was cute ect.) but no, she instantly thinks sex is a good idea and rolls with it… ehh
The art was Juan Gotoh, so amazing, but he really drew the bodies, I mean this time he really drew them (of course to try to make the muscles stand out) like page #10, eww to that boy’s body, was he not fed?..
Anything else?: It was a good Doujin, but I dind’t think it is one of Juan Gotoh top works.
Score:
3.5/5
(I know there is a scoring system in place now but hell maybe someone still wants my take on Doujins.)
-Cloud
You guys all suck, this was awesome.
This was quite good. It was funny and the sex bit was good as well. I didn’t understand in the comments when people was saying “disgusting”, ect…now all i can say is. Why? Is it not sexy if a women has abs? The boy seemed to like it XD and so did i. This was a good doujin and i think everyone should give it a go.
/Sephiroth’s score 9/10
Cloud i love your score’s there hanh in hand with my thoughts plus your a loli-man like me thats a plus
We’re those abs? Really, I can’t tell. Her body kinda looks like an old geezer’s without the boobs.
Story was okay to begin with. Drifting? LoL
Good transition too.
Art was still average. Although, they looked like they had to body that of a 70y.o. Disgusted me for a bit. Censors was fine as long as the black strips are concerned.
SCORE 3/5
MORE LOLIS!!!
not too sexy.. it is ok i think.
to the owner:
is it possible to post the whole book of this doujin? im kinda fan of this artist and i find rarly any other book then 1… xD
This is Pretty terrible i mean the first picture of the women herself is terrible but i have to admit he tried pretty hard on those abs 2/5 overall but i have to give this a FALCON PUNCH in the mouth
…eh…wow
The art was pretty substandard. All the characters looked really simple, and just horrible.
Story was also kinda stupid. I mean, having sex with one of your students to lose weight? It’s almost funny. Almost.
Also, the gym teacher was a body builder: DO NOT WANT!!!
Overall: 2/5
P.S. What kind of kid is attracted to abs more than boobs?
yo i would help her out whit her diet all night long
Simple and a little funny
5/5
y do u guys not like abs? if u ever had it with a girl who has abs u would love it. because most of them know how to use they pussy so well u go to heaven