hmm, I was pretty disappointed with the story, usually Juan Gotoh does so well in that area, but i felt this story was very straight forward.
Like I said, the story was something of a disappointment. Usually Juan Gotoh will give you a lot of information and background on characters, but I felt this was kinda rushed and got the point really fast. It was humorous at times, but it doesn’t make up for the lack of story.
The art was still good though, with censors being hardly a nuisance it saved the Doujin in my eyes. If it was a different artist that slacked off in this department, this wouldn’t be good at all.
Anything else?: laugh! Last page, “I thought we should celebrate properly”, how is dressing up like Santa Claus and serving cake the proper way to celebrate Christmas? I laughed at that.
Score:
3/5
-Cloud
fudgemuffins on
February 17th, 2009 4:20 pm
DUDE! YAYZ ANOTHER JUAN GOTOH! I LUVS HIS WURK!
TheBigBoom on
February 17th, 2009 5:58 pm
The Story was a bit short, a sensei is drunk and the student comforts her, that’s about it.. I was hoping the story would bloom from there. Like why is the sensei drunk on Christmas Eve and why is the student working at a restaurant? (It’s pretty much straight to sex kinda doujin)
The Art was a Juan Gotoh, so it’s pretty much great and enjoyable.
The Censors are black strips and black circles, so it’ll get in the way at some points.
I give this: 4/5
Merry Christmas and Happy New Years everybody!
-TheBigBoom
Know guy on
February 17th, 2009 6:12 pm
my pants approves this doujin
Shota sucks on
February 17th, 2009 6:22 pm
shota shota shota <.<
Charlotte on
February 17th, 2009 7:42 pm
i’m gay…..everyday i’ll fuck my dad
wakakkaakak
My Computer lagg bcoz my Computer so cheap
mystic on
February 17th, 2009 9:54 pm
@ TheBigBoom
lol dude its February already…
Buckethead on
February 17th, 2009 10:54 pm
Ok I think is enough shota…. Im in the mood for somethin’ normal!
RandomComment on
February 17th, 2009 11:25 pm
where’d he get that cake and santa suit so fast!?
Kurono on
February 18th, 2009 12:43 am
Fuck yeah!!!! mi god, Gotoh is GOD
LOL on
February 18th, 2009 12:47 am
the ending was a little funny
InternetRule#30 on
February 18th, 2009 1:03 am
3/5
Anonymous on
February 18th, 2009 2:18 am
we haven’t seen any new loli in like ten days!!!!!! I need a fix…. Please Admin-san, MORE LOLI!!!!!
Butthole pleasures on
February 18th, 2009 2:30 am
Loli is for faaagggsss
TheBigBoom on
February 18th, 2009 6:33 am
To mystic:
Was just playing around and trying to poke fun at a Christmas doujin that’s been posted on February. :P
-TheBigBoom
bercy on
February 18th, 2009 11:19 am
loli is for faggots?
Butthole pleasures on
February 18th, 2009 1:14 pm
oh by the way i fuck old men and sheep
Yotsuba on
February 18th, 2009 3:11 pm
Dear god, this is a truly terrible doujin.
I don’t even know how either or you (BigBoom and Cloud) could even give this above a 3/5. I mean honestly, the art was just dreadful, and the story wasn’t much better, not that there was even a story worth telling here.
Usually, when the art is as gimped as this, it has an interesting or funny story to help support it, but this was just lazy! Its just a teacher/student shota that doesn’t happen anywhere near school, during Christmas, even though it’s barley mentioned till the end, and isn’t funny at all! You have to have a shallow sense of humor to even giggle once at this lame attempt at a doujin.
The details of the art were just terrible, and the designs of the characters where childish, and had no setting in this wreck. The faces of the characters looked fixed, almost like dolls, and rarely showed any connective emotion.
The sex scene was short and boring, the art was like manga 101, and the story was uninteresting at the most.
1/5
-Yotsuba >.<
P.S. Honestly, I couldn’t find one decent thing about this doujin, besides perhaps when she groped him in the bar he works at.
mystic on
February 18th, 2009 5:40 pm
@TheBigBoom
aah sorry dude. dont mind me =p
@Yotsuba
jeez i didnt think it was that bad… sure the sex scene could have been better but it deserves at least a 2/5…
@Dude on
February 18th, 2009 6:39 pm
The Story Was Short But It was Good To Me. The FUCK What Yotsuba Said. I mostly Like The Irony Of The Irony Of The Story That The Boy Found His Teacher Drunk At The Place He Works At. If You Can Call This Irony. But Whatever. Banging Someone In Christmas IS A GREAT Present For Me. And THE Overwhelming Fact That No Matter What It Is, If it’s From Juan Gotoh, I LOVE. I Give It:
5/5
P.S. Judging From His Last Review, I Think Yotsuba Like The Kind Of Shota With Torture. (Hint: Fuck Up)
@Dude
Yotsuba on
February 18th, 2009 9:01 pm
@Dude
It was actually Dark Matter that likes the torture. I like a good art style. And cute doujins, as well.
And I’m not even joking, this doujin was just plain bad, not only in the art, with a boring, average story. I’m harsh when I have to be, and this was nothing if not crap.
-Yotsuba
@Dude on
February 18th, 2009 9:57 pm
@Yotsuba
So What If You Wasn’t, I like It. Sorry For Judging. I just Like Juan Gotoh Even If A Trillion People Think This Is Crap.
@Dude
FurryLover on
February 18th, 2009 11:08 pm
I was going to say I haven’t been reviewing much (You all miss me, you know it! xD) Because nothing perks my interest.
I’m sure of that now. .-. This one is pretty bad, I’d have to say.
Standard:
Girl: Hi!
Guy: Hi, do you want to-
Girl: SEX ME!
No story. The art was decent, I’ve seen a lot like it though and many were better.
3/10. Bleh, not worth it actually. Long time since I’ve said that~
I’m hoping for a Loli, (Hopefully True-Shota, not Straight-Shota, but Admin hasn’t done that in a long time) soon.
Until next time:
Your furry little Fox: FurryLover~!
Linkman70000000 on
February 19th, 2009 4:58 pm
For those who will care… 78%/100% (7.8 out of 10)
General- Boy finds his drunken teacher at the resteraunt he works in and leads her home concluding with a sex scene and cute Christmas-Esque dialogue
Art- It’s Juan Gotoh manga. His art style as of now should be very iconic and distinguishable upon the SS fanbase. In comparison to has older works (Boys Empire), it doesn’t hold up as well. However, this is not to proclaim bad art, as it still holds up and is good to look at. Unlike other GOTOH mangas, it didn’t feel as detailed or illustrious as it could have been portrayed. The body art was lacking especially; most people expect more crafted bodies from Juan. Again, the art isn’t bad, but isn’t as good either, rounding to about slightly above average rather than great.
Story- Rather the generic affair, it doesn’t venture a step up beyond, “I’m drunk and lonely, sex me up”, which by this point is a typical and raunchous sex situation that has grown all to common at this point. Luckily, less story usually means more sex, and there’s plenty in this one beginning prominantly after the 5th page. (To much story had, in one of Bokusiru’s mangas, left only 5 pages of sex, a pointless concept for another great SS artist). It all depends on your perceptions on sex, I.E You want it quick or put up with the stuff in between?
Overall: Not Gotoh’s best manga, but not his worst either (that reward goes to his True -Shota manga, gay, ugh). If you enjoy his mangas, you should find little to be pissed about in this doujin. Just consider it a minor step in another direction, if only temporary. Who knows, maybe after this, he’ss go back to his “Winning Streak”.
P.S FurryLover, go be gay somewhere else. People who enjoy SS naturally like the term STRAIGHT with Shota. Ugh, Shota and Loli can go suck a d**k. Just my opinion though, don’t get offended and comment back, that just starts flamm wars.
…
1st
7th
°_° first ????
…….am I really the first one :o ????
Rhhaaaaa, So close (fucking lag !) x)
mcgee
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hmm, I was pretty disappointed with the story, usually Juan Gotoh does so well in that area, but i felt this story was very straight forward.
Like I said, the story was something of a disappointment. Usually Juan Gotoh will give you a lot of information and background on characters, but I felt this was kinda rushed and got the point really fast. It was humorous at times, but it doesn’t make up for the lack of story.
The art was still good though, with censors being hardly a nuisance it saved the Doujin in my eyes. If it was a different artist that slacked off in this department, this wouldn’t be good at all.
Anything else?: laugh! Last page, “I thought we should celebrate properly”, how is dressing up like Santa Claus and serving cake the proper way to celebrate Christmas? I laughed at that.
Score:
3/5
-Cloud
DUDE! YAYZ ANOTHER JUAN GOTOH! I LUVS HIS WURK!
The Story was a bit short, a sensei is drunk and the student comforts her, that’s about it.. I was hoping the story would bloom from there. Like why is the sensei drunk on Christmas Eve and why is the student working at a restaurant? (It’s pretty much straight to sex kinda doujin)
The Art was a Juan Gotoh, so it’s pretty much great and enjoyable.
The Censors are black strips and black circles, so it’ll get in the way at some points.
I give this: 4/5
Merry Christmas and Happy New Years everybody!
-TheBigBoom
my pants approves this doujin
shota shota shota <.<
i’m gay…..everyday i’ll fuck my dad
wakakkaakak
My Computer lagg bcoz my Computer so cheap
@ TheBigBoom
lol dude its February already…
Ok I think is enough shota…. Im in the mood for somethin’ normal!
where’d he get that cake and santa suit so fast!?
Fuck yeah!!!! mi god, Gotoh is GOD
the ending was a little funny
3/5
we haven’t seen any new loli in like ten days!!!!!! I need a fix…. Please Admin-san, MORE LOLI!!!!!
Loli is for faaagggsss
To mystic:
Was just playing around and trying to poke fun at a Christmas doujin that’s been posted on February. :P
-TheBigBoom
loli is for faggots?
oh by the way i fuck old men and sheep
Dear god, this is a truly terrible doujin.
I don’t even know how either or you (BigBoom and Cloud) could even give this above a 3/5. I mean honestly, the art was just dreadful, and the story wasn’t much better, not that there was even a story worth telling here.
Usually, when the art is as gimped as this, it has an interesting or funny story to help support it, but this was just lazy! Its just a teacher/student shota that doesn’t happen anywhere near school, during Christmas, even though it’s barley mentioned till the end, and isn’t funny at all! You have to have a shallow sense of humor to even giggle once at this lame attempt at a doujin.
The details of the art were just terrible, and the designs of the characters where childish, and had no setting in this wreck. The faces of the characters looked fixed, almost like dolls, and rarely showed any connective emotion.
The sex scene was short and boring, the art was like manga 101, and the story was uninteresting at the most.
1/5
-Yotsuba >.<
P.S. Honestly, I couldn’t find one decent thing about this doujin, besides perhaps when she groped him in the bar he works at.
@TheBigBoom
aah sorry dude. dont mind me =p
@Yotsuba
jeez i didnt think it was that bad… sure the sex scene could have been better but it deserves at least a 2/5…
The Story Was Short But It was Good To Me. The FUCK What Yotsuba Said. I mostly Like The Irony Of The Irony Of The Story That The Boy Found His Teacher Drunk At The Place He Works At. If You Can Call This Irony. But Whatever. Banging Someone In Christmas IS A GREAT Present For Me. And THE Overwhelming Fact That No Matter What It Is, If it’s From Juan Gotoh, I LOVE. I Give It:
5/5
P.S. Judging From His Last Review, I Think Yotsuba Like The Kind Of Shota With Torture. (Hint: Fuck Up)
@Dude
@Dude
It was actually Dark Matter that likes the torture. I like a good art style. And cute doujins, as well.
And I’m not even joking, this doujin was just plain bad, not only in the art, with a boring, average story. I’m harsh when I have to be, and this was nothing if not crap.
-Yotsuba
@Yotsuba
So What If You Wasn’t, I like It. Sorry For Judging. I just Like Juan Gotoh Even If A Trillion People Think This Is Crap.
@Dude
I was going to say I haven’t been reviewing much (You all miss me, you know it! xD) Because nothing perks my interest.
I’m sure of that now. .-. This one is pretty bad, I’d have to say.
Standard:
Girl: Hi!
Guy: Hi, do you want to-
Girl: SEX ME!
No story. The art was decent, I’ve seen a lot like it though and many were better.
3/10. Bleh, not worth it actually. Long time since I’ve said that~
I’m hoping for a Loli, (Hopefully True-Shota, not Straight-Shota, but Admin hasn’t done that in a long time) soon.
Until next time:
Your furry little Fox: FurryLover~!
For those who will care… 78%/100% (7.8 out of 10)
General- Boy finds his drunken teacher at the resteraunt he works in and leads her home concluding with a sex scene and cute Christmas-Esque dialogue
Art- It’s Juan Gotoh manga. His art style as of now should be very iconic and distinguishable upon the SS fanbase. In comparison to has older works (Boys Empire), it doesn’t hold up as well. However, this is not to proclaim bad art, as it still holds up and is good to look at. Unlike other GOTOH mangas, it didn’t feel as detailed or illustrious as it could have been portrayed. The body art was lacking especially; most people expect more crafted bodies from Juan. Again, the art isn’t bad, but isn’t as good either, rounding to about slightly above average rather than great.
Story- Rather the generic affair, it doesn’t venture a step up beyond, “I’m drunk and lonely, sex me up”, which by this point is a typical and raunchous sex situation that has grown all to common at this point. Luckily, less story usually means more sex, and there’s plenty in this one beginning prominantly after the 5th page. (To much story had, in one of Bokusiru’s mangas, left only 5 pages of sex, a pointless concept for another great SS artist). It all depends on your perceptions on sex, I.E You want it quick or put up with the stuff in between?
Overall: Not Gotoh’s best manga, but not his worst either (that reward goes to his True -Shota manga, gay, ugh). If you enjoy his mangas, you should find little to be pissed about in this doujin. Just consider it a minor step in another direction, if only temporary. Who knows, maybe after this, he’ss go back to his “Winning Streak”.
P.S FurryLover, go be gay somewhere else. People who enjoy SS naturally like the term STRAIGHT with Shota. Ugh, Shota and Loli can go suck a d**k. Just my opinion though, don’t get offended and comment back, that just starts flamm wars.
ok
†javia†
just put one so i like the pussy hehehehehe
Simple Story would like to see a part two
∞/5