God!!, again with the numbers… anyway, nice doujin
jimmy on
October 6th, 2009 9:39 pm
peoplz peoplz plz stop feeding da number troll n dis is a wierd doujin
master of puppets on
October 6th, 2009 9:51 pm
Thought this was futa. Jeez. I couldn’t figure out which one until the middle when I saw the word shota. Alright either way
RandomComment on
October 6th, 2009 9:55 pm
Miss Debra stares dumbfounded. Her words seemed shaken by what her ears heard.
Words coming to her eat”Anything, say anything.”
As she was about to say the first thought, a familiar voice rumbled through the hall.
“Lets us not cause dread, dear child. I assure you she means well.”
Satanaz on
October 6th, 2009 10:30 pm
LMFAO
Anonymous on
October 6th, 2009 10:49 pm
boner
Loliguy on
October 6th, 2009 11:31 pm
AAAH! fap..fap…fap…SPLURT!!!!!!
Fap…fap…fap…SPLUUURRRTTT!
JDogG on
October 7th, 2009 12:34 am
whoa that was interesting
Arbalesto on
October 7th, 2009 12:39 am
I just have 1 complain. Incest is not shota ._.
lawlicon on
October 7th, 2009 12:42 am
ummmm…yea alil too incest weirdo for me
odin on
October 7th, 2009 1:05 am
wtf the story made this shit unfappable. Well I’m gonna go kill myself now
Snarf on
October 7th, 2009 1:20 am
Quote “Arbalesto on October 7th, 2009 12:39 am
I just have 1 complain. Incest is not shota ._.”
-No it’s Shota because the boy is under age, whether it be blood related or not. Incest would be another tag. :)
Story was kinda weird..
Nigguh Juice on
October 7th, 2009 1:26 am
19th
ani on
October 7th, 2009 1:44 am
it would have been nice if the same 4 lines weren’t repeated the whole time. =\
hoho on
October 7th, 2009 3:14 am
Delicious trap. Doujinland needs delicious traps.
myfaceisnumb on
October 7th, 2009 3:15 am
OH GOD MY FACE!!!!!! WHRY!!!!!!
the heresy on
October 7th, 2009 2:54 pm
Art:
The art was iffy on this one. While on the one hand, it’s got attractive characters, on the other the constant wet look was annoying.
6/10
Story:
All I have to say about the story is it was unique. I’ve read more hackneyed reasons to have sex.
7/10
Translation/Dialogue:
This is where I have the most criticism. I found it to be very elementary as far as dialogue goes. Out of nine references to semen, only two were not “milk” (and one of those two is up for debate, “dick-milk”), and they seemed to go out of their way to shout a lot but not not say much. Even “dick” was the worst it got. And let me tell you, constantly shouting “Mommy!” doesn’t exactly get it up for me.
3/10
Other:
This was nothing special, so not extra points. As I went through it a second time, I noticed the censor bars were longer than usual. However, I only noticed them after I started to inspect it, having ignored them the first time I read it, so they don’t get in the way of enjoying this manga. No points deducted.
Final decision: 16/30 Fap-worthy
I give this mediocre manga 16 points out of 30, because it isn’t great, but it’s worth a rub out.
RandomComment on
October 7th, 2009 4:07 pm
@the heresy
What a thorough. Bravo.
Grats on
October 7th, 2009 5:34 pm
More Ovaltine Please
dogbog on
October 7th, 2009 6:49 pm
omg admin thank you i wanted yanagawa
Loli-Lover on
October 7th, 2009 10:39 pm
I didnt knnow there were school boys! lol nice btw
O grande morador do Rio de Janeiro on
October 8th, 2009 10:10 am
Haven’t made a comment in a while now, but I gotta say: Now this a weird doujin! Not freaky, not fucked up. Just plain weird.
6/10
I don`t like that title XD
sdvfasdf 12bd 2nd
yay…..1st!!!!
You wish.
not a futa (thank God-_-!)
6-man on the go!
God!!, again with the numbers… anyway, nice doujin
peoplz peoplz plz stop feeding da number troll n dis is a wierd doujin
Thought this was futa. Jeez. I couldn’t figure out which one until the middle when I saw the word shota. Alright either way
Miss Debra stares dumbfounded. Her words seemed shaken by what her ears heard.
Words coming to her eat”Anything, say anything.”
As she was about to say the first thought, a familiar voice rumbled through the hall.
“Lets us not cause dread, dear child. I assure you she means well.”
LMFAO
boner
AAAH! fap..fap…fap…SPLURT!!!!!!
Fap…fap…fap…SPLUUURRRTTT!
whoa that was interesting
I just have 1 complain. Incest is not shota ._.
ummmm…yea alil too incest weirdo for me
wtf the story made this shit unfappable. Well I’m gonna go kill myself now
Quote “Arbalesto on October 7th, 2009 12:39 am
I just have 1 complain. Incest is not shota ._.”
-No it’s Shota because the boy is under age, whether it be blood related or not. Incest would be another tag. :)
Story was kinda weird..
19th
it would have been nice if the same 4 lines weren’t repeated the whole time. =\
Delicious trap. Doujinland needs delicious traps.
OH GOD MY FACE!!!!!! WHRY!!!!!!
Art:
The art was iffy on this one. While on the one hand, it’s got attractive characters, on the other the constant wet look was annoying.
6/10
Story:
All I have to say about the story is it was unique. I’ve read more hackneyed reasons to have sex.
7/10
Translation/Dialogue:
This is where I have the most criticism. I found it to be very elementary as far as dialogue goes. Out of nine references to semen, only two were not “milk” (and one of those two is up for debate, “dick-milk”), and they seemed to go out of their way to shout a lot but not not say much. Even “dick” was the worst it got. And let me tell you, constantly shouting “Mommy!” doesn’t exactly get it up for me.
3/10
Other:
This was nothing special, so not extra points. As I went through it a second time, I noticed the censor bars were longer than usual. However, I only noticed them after I started to inspect it, having ignored them the first time I read it, so they don’t get in the way of enjoying this manga. No points deducted.
Final decision: 16/30 Fap-worthy
I give this mediocre manga 16 points out of 30, because it isn’t great, but it’s worth a rub out.
@the heresy
What a thorough. Bravo.
More Ovaltine Please
omg admin thank you i wanted yanagawa
I didnt knnow there were school boys! lol nice btw
Haven’t made a comment in a while now, but I gotta say: Now this a weird doujin! Not freaky, not fucked up. Just plain weird.
6/10
Nah, boring!