Eh, I got through the first row, but the style is too hard for me. I prefer the lighter-on-details stuff, the things that don’t give every indent on the teeth pagetime sort of stuff.
Do like the premise, though, but there’s other things here to fap to.
Solipsis on
July 29th, 2008 5:18 am
Already read it long time ago
great doujin though, like the semi realistic drawing style too
iTaChiLeaDer on
July 29th, 2008 6:05 am
Vagina! =D
Frostbyte on
July 29th, 2008 7:14 am
Hmmmm it was ok the drawing where nice and clear and all but it was not really sexy and the story was rushed so fast so it never really worked up the “Ohhh this is getting good” feeling in the story anyway it gets a
56% from me since it is drawing nicely but the story was not great.
Anonymous on
July 29th, 2008 7:59 am
shota ftw
vootie on
July 29th, 2008 10:53 am
Strangely non-sexy… the artwork, though detailed, seems a little awkward, but the artist needs to learn to be able to draw a story, draw a flow of action…
PervySage on
July 29th, 2008 11:01 am
FACT 1: I’m not into shota but it’s still hentai so, what the hell.
The story was pretty straight forward. The art is good but it could do better. An improvement in the censoring is shown, what with the super small white strip and all.
2 pages are missing but judging by the succeeding pages, I think I didn’t miss much.
A good doujin all in all.
A 3/5 (Geliatric and Cloud’s scoring is contagious)
MORE LOLIS! XD
Anonymous on
July 29th, 2008 11:29 am
sucked
Fool on
July 29th, 2008 11:30 am
Oh wow Shota either way it is doujin still.
Story wise its about as common grounds w/ any Shota doujins. The art is well done actually to much suprise. As for the censoring hell that is what I’m talking about barely censor.
As PervySage said 2 pages are missing, BUT it doesn’t really kill the mood as much.
P.S. Hmmm wonder which one will post there overview first Geliatric or Cloud? XP
darkslavey on
July 29th, 2008 4:33 pm
im back from my vacation guys!
review time…(wheres geliatric and cloud?)
the art was different, original, and kinda cool, the story was rushed and im a big fan of good and somewhat realistic stories which this story did not have..i mean, who would believe some hot older sister would just go and fuck her brother for no reason?
i give this title 1 uninteresting doujin, out of 5
(my 1st real review. lol)
Cloud on
July 29th, 2008 7:50 pm
One thing I hate more than censors is when complete pages are missing from Doujins. (I like to view online)
I like whatT5J8F8 said about the art. he says it is “hard” and I like that, it really is. Alothough it didn’t make me not read the rest. The art as well wasn’t the best.. at some parts i thought good!, but others I was like WTF! (page 14 what the hell is up with there eyes (and when did she grow a mustache))
umm, hate that pages are missing… hate that.
story was like they threw it out the window. (come on there is none here…)
ok last words… I was disappointed.
Score:
1.5/5
@ everyone
late, but I mostly am, just been lucky recently, but yea I agree where is Geliatric! And welcome back from vacation darkslavery.. (if you ever read comment again like me)
-Cloud
xxxx on
July 30th, 2008 11:48 am
i love shota
Linkman70000000 on
August 7th, 2008 1:56 pm
You wanna know what I think? Why the fuck is everyone complaining about the story!?! Since when does story ever really matter in a porn!?! I don’t care whether or not Stephen King is writing my next porn album, I just like the goods!
Tubasatan on
September 3rd, 2008 7:48 pm
well.. that’s sorta the point with anything hentai..
It’s mostly storydriven. And that’s a good thing
T5J8F8 on
April 8th, 2009 9:55 am
Wow, I posted on this a’fore…
Aside from the general off-ness of this style and at least one instance of strange propotions, I kinda like this nice, simple bit. Plus, she’s just so nonchalant about his endowment (plus, it’s the comical expressions that seem more ‘natural’ than the serious ones, which come off goofy-lookin’ to me).
-1, how bout that?
more incest ya
yeah!
mdntpgj.gjmdj
fourth!!!1
how can i DL this doujin?
Eh, I got through the first row, but the style is too hard for me. I prefer the lighter-on-details stuff, the things that don’t give every indent on the teeth pagetime sort of stuff.
Do like the premise, though, but there’s other things here to fap to.
Already read it long time ago
great doujin though, like the semi realistic drawing style too
Vagina! =D
Hmmmm it was ok the drawing where nice and clear and all but it was not really sexy and the story was rushed so fast so it never really worked up the “Ohhh this is getting good” feeling in the story anyway it gets a
56% from me since it is drawing nicely but the story was not great.
shota ftw
Strangely non-sexy… the artwork, though detailed, seems a little awkward, but the artist needs to learn to be able to draw a story, draw a flow of action…
FACT 1: I’m not into shota but it’s still hentai so, what the hell.
The story was pretty straight forward. The art is good but it could do better. An improvement in the censoring is shown, what with the super small white strip and all.
2 pages are missing but judging by the succeeding pages, I think I didn’t miss much.
A good doujin all in all.
A 3/5 (Geliatric and Cloud’s scoring is contagious)
MORE LOLIS! XD
sucked
Oh wow Shota either way it is doujin still.
Story wise its about as common grounds w/ any Shota doujins. The art is well done actually to much suprise. As for the censoring hell that is what I’m talking about barely censor.
As PervySage said 2 pages are missing, BUT it doesn’t really kill the mood as much.
P.S. Hmmm wonder which one will post there overview first Geliatric or Cloud? XP
im back from my vacation guys!
review time…(wheres geliatric and cloud?)
the art was different, original, and kinda cool, the story was rushed and im a big fan of good and somewhat realistic stories which this story did not have..i mean, who would believe some hot older sister would just go and fuck her brother for no reason?
i give this title 1 uninteresting doujin, out of 5
(my 1st real review. lol)
One thing I hate more than censors is when complete pages are missing from Doujins. (I like to view online)
I like whatT5J8F8 said about the art. he says it is “hard” and I like that, it really is. Alothough it didn’t make me not read the rest. The art as well wasn’t the best.. at some parts i thought good!, but others I was like WTF! (page 14 what the hell is up with there eyes (and when did she grow a mustache))
umm, hate that pages are missing… hate that.
story was like they threw it out the window. (come on there is none here…)
ok last words… I was disappointed.
Score:
1.5/5
@ everyone
late, but I mostly am, just been lucky recently, but yea I agree where is Geliatric! And welcome back from vacation darkslavery.. (if you ever read comment again like me)
-Cloud
i love shota
You wanna know what I think? Why the fuck is everyone complaining about the story!?! Since when does story ever really matter in a porn!?! I don’t care whether or not Stephen King is writing my next porn album, I just like the goods!
well.. that’s sorta the point with anything hentai..
It’s mostly storydriven. And that’s a good thing
Wow, I posted on this a’fore…
Aside from the general off-ness of this style and at least one instance of strange propotions, I kinda like this nice, simple bit. Plus, she’s just so nonchalant about his endowment (plus, it’s the comical expressions that seem more ‘natural’ than the serious ones, which come off goofy-lookin’ to me).