Top Score For First-Time Sex

1. nope on December 20th, 2008 10:13 am

   no first

2. =3 on December 20th, 2008 10:18 am

   great doujin keep em comming and srry to say this but more shota and loli plz :D

3. Frostbyte on December 20th, 2008 10:29 am

   Enjoyed the art work & the story was ok.

4. 4th on December 20th, 2008 10:31 am

   read my name

5. All hail my nads on December 20th, 2008 10:44 am

   Good stuff. Nice artwork :D

6. Shota sucks on December 20th, 2008 10:46 am

   Another shota?

7. Twerp on December 20th, 2008 12:03 pm

   nice =)

8. Hitler on December 20th, 2008 12:58 pm

   MORE YAOI!

9. Mr GentleMen on December 20th, 2008 1:16 pm

   I shall put down my Earl Grey to say this . I ask wholeheartedly for more shota . This story was quite a rousing story I must say. Bully Sir or Madame bully. Carry on.

10. Geno on December 20th, 2008 1:20 pm

    shota + incest = best loli= not so much

11. Cloud on December 20th, 2008 1:47 pm

    hmm…. hahahaha! page #2 “Obsessed with Railroads?” wtf? (bottom right corner)

    The story was great, but I wanted to punch that kid in the face! And I laughed so hard on page #14 with that girl’s first comment! I was like, wow your such a whore! (I understand tho she didn’t mean she would give everyone those experiences)

    The art was good, the censors are black strips but they were huge… but they didn’t cover up anything good for the most part.

    Anything else?: ehh, tho the story and art was good, I didn’t think the sex was all that good. And I wanna punch that kid in the face!

    Score:

    3.5/5

    -Cloud

12. RandomComment on December 20th, 2008 3:20 pm

    Preview picture: The preview picture was kinda weird to me “Don’t come! Please!! Not on my face!!” was kind of a turn off. Her tits are going opposite directions! but in the end I read it. 2/5

    Story: The beginning of the story was interesting, He was all cool up to page 6, but he turned to a girl on page 8 and onward. Beginning = Interesting, Ending = Wtf happen to him? 3/5

    Sex: Really weird way for two people to engage in sex. “It doesn’t hurt!” 3/5

    Art: I’m not a real big fan of Rio Yanagawa’s work, but it’s better than others. 4/5

    Overall: 3/5

13. Anonymous on December 20th, 2008 4:49 pm

    at first i was like “somthing about this kid scares me” the i realized he’s just being a little bitch. now on to my rateing -1 for hair -1 for sound efects thats it
    8/10

14. rurouni on December 20th, 2008 6:27 pm

    i really like this kids personality and it made me laugh when you first see him on the second page

15. PENIS on December 20th, 2008 11:38 pm

    yeaaa….SHOTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    MORE SHOTA PLZZ!!!!!!!!

16. Sex King on December 21st, 2008 12:40 am

    Not Bad

17. pala on December 21st, 2008 5:55 am

    great i think

18. kontol and memek on December 21st, 2008 9:27 am

    0_02 good

19. Merry Christmas(not) on December 21st, 2008 10:35 am

    I still can’t over how the hell that much cum manages to uh get out. But wtf.

20. PervySage on December 21st, 2008 12:10 pm

    Story was well transitioned. A good start and a good end. Amidst the temporary hate that I felt for the kid, I didn’t expect the ending to be what it was and I liked it.

    Art was not bad but not the best either. Right use of tones but still not enough. Censors was a plus too.

    SCORE 3/5

    MORE LOLIS!!!

    P.S. @RandomComment
    Her tits are going “different directions” because she’s lying on the bathroom floor. It’s something called “gravity.”

    P.S.S
    MORE LOLIS!!!

21. DF20 on December 21st, 2008 11:24 pm

    very good

22. Gakuen Heaven Plizzz on December 22nd, 2008 9:28 am

    read my name

23. RandomComment on December 22nd, 2008 12:06 pm

    @PervySage, something tells me you haven’t seen a naked woman lying on her back before. It looks nothing like that.

24. Raphael DDL on December 22nd, 2008 9:39 pm

    Great art. Not so nice story.

25. Cloud on December 23rd, 2008 2:40 am

    @ RandomComment

    uncalled for man…

    I didn’t think PervySage’s post note was meant to offend you..

    -Cloud

26. Bran on December 23rd, 2008 4:10 am

    More shota !
    Merry Christmas you all !

27. PervySage on December 24th, 2008 2:03 pm

    @RandomComment

    I would like to point out that not all women are the same. Some are small, others are big. Depends on where you are coming from. I’m just stating my point of view. ^_^

28. TigerPirate on December 24th, 2008 6:39 pm

    Oh dear, heated hentai doujin battle going up in here :O.
    ANYWAY, does it matter what directions the tits fly at? Geez, it’s not like they put the tits on her stomach or anything, that belongs in the mutant category :\.

29. chaser on January 12th, 2009 2:12 pm

    link for the gallery view is wrong… link to porn star teacher

30. znak on August 17th, 2009 11:18 am

    Thanks for post

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33. asss on August 22nd, 2009 12:18 am

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34. RandomComment on August 22nd, 2009 8:52 am

    Whoa didn’t realize there were posts for me in this one..

    @Cloud
    I didn’t try to offend him either ;)

    @PervySage
    lol plastic surgeons.

    @Cloud&PervySage
    Do you guys even come to doujinland to review anymore?! will you even see this post!?

    who knows.

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